Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

A Beauteous Day of Spring

Greet the sanguine dawn’s mauve sunrise,
A crimson pizzaz blushing opaline skies
Where eagle flies questing higher highs
Thrilling endearing vibes of enamored eyes
In sparrow’s glance, in cardinal’s dance
In the call of passion, in trill of romance.

Feel the gentle tease of buoyant breeze
And rhythms lilting on blossoming trees
As resplendence extols nature’s appeal~
White-blooms scintillating magnolia’s zeal,
Blazing red-peonies, flaming gold-daffodils,
Glint panorama glistening verdant foothills.

It’s the bubbling spirit of burbling stream
It’s budding impulse of meadow’s dream
It’s passionate horizon of magenta gleam
It’s the dawning aspiration of sunlit beam
It’s colorful ballet of splendiferous theme
It’s heavenly spring of earthly daydream.

Hear sweet songs of love strumming air,
Seductive melodies wafting everywhere
As birds hop, waltz, frolic, sing, and play
Serenading welcome to a beauteous day
Warbling verse of joy, trilling “cheer, cheer”
Oh! the spring is here, the spring’s here!

February 24, 2022
Placed 1st: A Brian Strand 1091
Placed 1st: A Lovely Day Poetry Contest
Sponsor: BJ Legros Kelley

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Sara Kendrick March 31, 2022 at 8:05 AM Congrats on your winner. Way to go. Spring and summer bring such beauty and joy. Sara

Christuraj Alex March 18, 2022 at 10:14 PM Very solemn writing as usual. Great picture presented. Congratulations!

Aniruddha Pathak March 18, 2022 at 9:20 PM If a poet known as Vijay wins... surprise only if he does not, but this is not to take take away the height your poems reach, congrats

Sotto Poet March 7, 2022 at 2:13 AM Vijay, you have a fantastic understanding of the visual arts! Your magnificent verses imbue your writing with splendor and profundity. It's stunning!! Vijay Pandit March 7, 2022 at 7:54 AM Thank you my friend. Much appreciate.

Jennifer Proxenos March 6, 2022 at 10:18 PM There could not be a more beautiful way of describing the birth of Spring. Superb poetry my friend. Enjoy Spring Vijay in the beauteous way you depict it for it is over all too soon. Hugs and blessings Jennifer. Vijay Pandit March 7, 2022 at 7:53 AM You are so very kind. Thank you Jennifer. Much appreciate as always.

Paula Goldsmith March 4, 2022 at 12:19 PM Congratulations on your win. Yes, I feel the breeze from your wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away....................... Vijay Pandit March 7, 2022 at 7:53 AM Glad you stopped by Paula with your kind remarks. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Bj Legros Kelley March 2, 2022 at 1:55 PM Congratulations Vijay on your first-place poem! It is so very lovely <3 Thank you for entering the contest, have a blessed day! :) Vijay Pandit March 7, 2022 at 7:52 AM So glad to hear that from you BJ. Much appreciate your kind feedback. Many thanks for sponsoring contest.

William Kelii Kekaula February 25, 2022 at 5:36 AM A color-filled penning masterly drafted, Vijay, with a tight burst of impacts that course the verses! Great execution, and a welcoming Fave my friend, Aloha~William! Vijay Pandit February 27, 2022 at 5:54 AM It's an honor to receive such glowing feedback and a FAVE from you William. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Valsa George February 25, 2022 at 4:56 AM Wow.... wow ! I am in love with your beauteous day ! This poem has lifted me to heavenly heights ! The third stanza is celestial poetry ! This of course is my FAV. Win big dear friend ! Vijay Pandit February 27, 2022 at 5:52 AM So special to receive your vote of approval, Valsa. Even more so to receive your FAVE. Much appreciate your cheerful feedback. Many thanks, dear friend.

Mike Gentile February 25, 2022 at 4:26 AM Vijay, you have such a way with imagery! Your stunning verses create an aura of magnificence in your work. Beautiful !! Vijay Pandit February 27, 2022 at 5:51 AM So glad you stopped by with your wonderful comments, Mike. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Michael Tor February 24, 2022 at 8:19 PM Vijay I cant wait for Spring and this lovely piece just took me over the top. Be blessed my friend... Vijay Pandit February 27, 2022 at 5:50 AM You speak for us all--we are all waiting. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks Michael.

Demetrios Trifiatis February 24, 2022 at 1:24 PM Through your verses I witness the coming of glorious Spring, my dearest friend, Vijay! Blessings. Vijay Pandit February 27, 2022 at 5:49 AM Thank you my dear friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Demetrios.

Bill Baker February 24, 2022 at 1:02 PM Beautifully written welcome to spring, Vijay. excellent rhyming and added alliteration make the exquisite imagery even more enjoyable to read. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, Bill Vijay Pandit February 27, 2022 at 5:49 AM So very kind of you Bill. So glad you stopped by. Many thanks for your kind remarks.

Alexis Y. February 24, 2022 at 9:55 AM Wow! Vijay, This is such a lovely, stunning, and breathtaking day. Your descriptions, content, and imagery are top-notch. You captured my favorite season(Spring) very well. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a good-Alexis Vijay Pandit February 27, 2022 at 5:48 AM Spring is such a delightful season to all. I appreciate your cheerful thoughts Alexis. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole February 24, 2022 at 9:46 AM This is delightful, beautiful, magical and filled with so much zest. The images you paint bring a smile to my face. Soon, Spring will arrive and I am so ready. I believe so many of us are. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy Vijay Pandit February 27, 2022 at 5:46 AM Thank you my dear friend for your cheerful comments. Much appreciate your visit as always. Many thanks Brandy.

Heidi Sands February 24, 2022 at 9:33 AM I love the rhyme and flow to this and it is so uplifting too. It brought me happiness and I can feel the joy. A FAVE. Thanks for sharing :) Vijay Pandit February 27, 2022 at 5:45 AM Glad you enjoyed the poem Heidi. Always a joy to read your remarks. Many thanks for the FAVE. Much appreciate, as always.

Tom Cunningham February 24, 2022 at 8:42 AM You captured the joys of spring well Vijay, it cant come quick enough. Tom Vijay Pandit February 27, 2022 at 5:44 AM It's just around the corner. Much appreciate Tom. Many thanks.