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A Beauteous Day of Spring

Greet the sanguine dawn’s mauve sunrise, A crimson pizzaz blushing opaline skies Where eagle flies questing higher highs Thrilling endearing vibes of enamored eyes In sparrow’s glance, in cardinal’s dance In the call of passion, in trill of romance. Feel the gentle tease of buoyant breeze And rhythms lilting on blossoming trees As resplendence extols nature’s appeal~ White-blooms scintillating magnolia’s zeal, Blazing red-peonies, flaming gold-daffodils, Glint panorama glistening verdant foothills. It’s the bubbling spirit of burbling stream It’s budding impulse of meadow’s dream It’s passionate horizon of magenta gleam It’s the dawning aspiration of sunlit beam It’s colorful ballet of splendiferous theme It’s heavenly spring of earthly daydream. Hear sweet songs of love strumming air, Seductive melodies wafting everywhere As birds hop, waltz, frolic, sing, and play Serenading welcome to a beauteous day Warbling verse of joy, trilling “cheer, cheer” Oh! the spring is here, the spring’s here! February 24, 2022 Placed 1st: A Brian Strand 1091 Placed 1st: A Lovely Day Poetry Contest Sponsor: BJ Legros Kelley

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Date: 3/31/2022 8:05:00 AM
Congrats on your winner. Way to go. Spring and summer bring such beauty and joy. Sara
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Date: 3/18/2022 10:14:00 PM
Very solemn writing as usual. Great picture presented. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/18/2022 9:20:00 PM
If a poet known as Vijay wins... surprise only if he does not, but this is not to take take away the height your poems reach, congrats
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Date: 3/7/2022 2:13:00 AM
Vijay, you have a fantastic understanding of the visual arts! Your magnificent verses imbue your writing with splendor and profundity. It's stunning!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/7/2022 7:54:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Much appreciate.
Date: 3/6/2022 10:18:00 PM
There could not be a more beautiful way of describing the birth of Spring. Superb poetry my friend. Enjoy Spring Vijay in the beauteous way you depict it for it is over all too soon. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/7/2022 7:53:00 AM
You are so very kind. Thank you Jennifer. Much appreciate as always.
Date: 3/4/2022 12:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Yes, I feel the breeze from your wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/7/2022 7:53:00 AM
Glad you stopped by Paula with your kind remarks. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 3/2/2022 1:55:00 PM
Congratulations Vijay on your first-place poem! It is so very lovely <3 Thank you for entering the contest, have a blessed day! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/7/2022 7:52:00 AM
So glad to hear that from you BJ. Much appreciate your kind feedback. Many thanks for sponsoring contest.
Date: 2/25/2022 5:36:00 AM
A color-filled penning masterly drafted, Vijay, with a tight burst of impacts that course the verses! Great execution, and a welcoming Fave my friend, Aloha~William!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/27/2022 5:54:00 AM
It's an honor to receive such glowing feedback and a FAVE from you William. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.
Date: 2/25/2022 4:56:00 AM
Wow.... wow ! I am in love with your beauteous day ! This poem has lifted me to heavenly heights ! The third stanza is celestial poetry ! This of course is my FAV. Win big dear friend !
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/27/2022 5:52:00 AM
So special to receive your vote of approval, Valsa. Even more so to receive your FAVE. Much appreciate your cheerful feedback. Many thanks, dear friend.
Date: 2/25/2022 4:26:00 AM
Vijay, you have such a way with imagery! Your stunning verses create an aura of magnificence in your work. Beautiful !!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/27/2022 5:51:00 AM
So glad you stopped by with your wonderful comments, Mike. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
Date: 2/24/2022 8:19:00 PM
Vijay I cant wait for Spring and this lovely piece just took me over the top. Be blessed my friend...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/27/2022 5:50:00 AM
You speak for us all--we are all waiting. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks Michael.
Date: 2/24/2022 1:24:00 PM
Through your verses I witness the coming of glorious Spring, my dearest friend, Vijay! Blessings.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/27/2022 5:49:00 AM
Thank you my dear friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Demetrios.
Date: 2/24/2022 1:02:00 PM
Beautifully written welcome to spring, Vijay. excellent rhyming and added alliteration make the exquisite imagery even more enjoyable to read. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, Bill
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/27/2022 5:49:00 AM
So very kind of you Bill. So glad you stopped by. Many thanks for your kind remarks.
Date: 2/24/2022 9:55:00 AM
Wow! Vijay, This is such a lovely, stunning, and breathtaking day. Your descriptions, content, and imagery are top-notch. You captured my favorite season(Spring) very well. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a good-Alexis
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/27/2022 5:48:00 AM
Spring is such a delightful season to all. I appreciate your cheerful thoughts Alexis. Many thanks.
Date: 2/24/2022 9:46:00 AM
This is delightful, beautiful, magical and filled with so much zest. The images you paint bring a smile to my face. Soon, Spring will arrive and I am so ready. I believe so many of us are. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/27/2022 5:46:00 AM
Thank you my dear friend for your cheerful comments. Much appreciate your visit as always. Many thanks Brandy.
Date: 2/24/2022 9:33:00 AM
I love the rhyme and flow to this and it is so uplifting too. It brought me happiness and I can feel the joy. A FAVE. Thanks for sharing :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/27/2022 5:45:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed the poem Heidi. Always a joy to read your remarks. Many thanks for the FAVE. Much appreciate, as always.
Date: 2/24/2022 8:42:00 AM
You captured the joys of spring well Vijay, it cant come quick enough. Tom
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/27/2022 5:44:00 AM
It's just around the corner. Much appreciate Tom. Many thanks.