Home » Poems » Andrea Dietrich » Zapped - Ap

Andrea Dietrich | + Follow Poet |

Zapped - Ap

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Andrea Dietrich.

Terry Flood just informed me that hyphenated words like "laid-back" are not acceptable, so I substituted his suggested word. Thanks, Terry.

Agile Black Cats Dart Eerily From Gloomy Hallways Initiating Jolts - Killing Lackadaisical Moods Notably Of People Quintessentially Ruffled - Spooking Them Unduly - Verifying Wanted Xenial Yearnings ZAPPED Nov. 9, 2021 for William Kekaula's Alphabet Soup Poetry Contest

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Jack Horne

Date: 11/26/2021 12:33:00 PM

wow, I know this was a tricky write - love it : ) I hope you had a great time with the family xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/19/2021 6:29:00 AM

Just a lot of fun! Unique in presentation! Lackadaisical and quintessentially are stand outs! I’m allergic to cats but I do enjoy being around them otherwise. Congratulations, Andrea!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/18/2021 12:03:00 PM

what a fun theme Andrea, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/18/2021 10:00:00 AM

Love it Andrea! This has the energy of a cat pouncing in play! And, one word flows so beautiful from the previous one! Congratulations on your win.

Ann Peck

Date: 11/16/2021 3:01:00 PM

You took a difficult concept and made it look easy ~ impressive! Congratulations!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 11/15/2021 11:35:00 PM

You can dig vast meanings out of single words. Great! Congratulations!

Beata Agustin

Date: 11/15/2021 9:44:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me nostalgic of my childhood days' pussy cats and their antics. God bless you.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/15/2021 8:22:00 PM

This is a fun picture of black cats darting fearlessly about - very vivid! Congratulations on your win~

Edward Ebbs

Date: 11/15/2021 5:58:00 PM

Congrats, Cute :)

Laura Leiser

Date: 11/15/2021 5:30:00 PM

Congrats on your entertaining poem, Andrea! :)

Hilo Poet

Date: 11/15/2021 5:04:00 PM

Wonderfully effortless, Andrea! An entertainingly engaging piece that I'm Fave'ing to share with my family. It'll confuse the babies knowing Halloween had passed, but I'll have my kids read to them about The Grinch! My compliments on your placement in my contest, Aloha!