** Poetic Form: Verse Inspired: 2024 September 22 Image: N/A
I saw the river ~ inviting The river saw me ~ anticipating A rock of ages ~ my savior My last breath I ~ surrender For a life that has been long ~ gone The river of life and i are now ~ one For my cousin Delbert 35 ~ mental illness sufferer 79 year old Mom did know he left the house ~ river is behind Boys fishing for Tilapias over the bridge saw him going ~ out to sea His body was never found by Rescue Squad ~ family waited one week after RS call ending search of his body notifying family ~ Aloha Del Boy. 988 Suicide and Crisis Lifeline 911Emergency number
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