Broken Wings of War

The youth fight for the old
They have not seen fear
Eighteen still young
Going off to war

Returning a man
Their thoughts and dreams disappear
Memories of death
Is all they have left

For the rest of their lives
These memories never subside
Medals won
Placed in a box gathering dust

Old they become
Hero’s lost among the young
All they have left
Are the broken wings of war

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 9/19/2019 8:32:00 PM
Bobby, this is so well penned. Tugs at my heartstrings. Super-write! :) gw
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Date: 9/19/2019 6:27:00 PM
Bobby, this is so emotional and sad to image all the broken who have returned from war, excellent poem ,
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Date: 9/19/2019 4:42:00 PM
A sad reality for some, if not most--your last verse brings truth--'twas my brother who fought, but 'tis me who holds his box, he was only nineteen, an honorable FAVE for me ~ Aloha always, William.
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Bobby May
Date: 9/19/2019 5:03:00 PM
It is very sad for me also my friend a war I will never forget!
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