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Premiere Contest WinnerWhen Autumn Comes

When Autumn comes, she saunters in. paints asters blue and streaks the skies magenta! When chill winds begin to susurrate, we hear her sighs. Wearing multi-colored dresses, when Autumn comes, she saunters in, capriciously shakes her tresses and with bright leaves then loves to spin. Cavorting with the clouds within the summer-ending skies of blue, when Autumn comes, she saunters in. But soon the woodlands she glides through. Not long will Autumn stay too calm. October sees strange pumpkins grin - not like her onset days of balm. When Autumn comes, she saunters in.
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Mitra Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 10:07 PM
Shakes her tresses, multicolored dresses, ..this is a lovely line
Mcintosh Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 4:56 AM
My favorite and more... so much joy, so much hope. I love this more and more. You're a Godsend to all who know you and your poetry is a heart's breathe from the starlight glistening in the distance, a beautiful beyond description. Just love. Congrats on the top win and thank you for entering. God bless you, Love, Gina
Jones Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 8:43 PM
Back to say congrats on a first place win Andrea!
Seeker Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 8:33 PM
Andra, so sublimely penned, vividly portrayed, personifying Ms Autumn in all hues of her beauty! A delightful Quatern, warmest congratulations on your well deserved trophy win!
Allison Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 5:23 PM
what a delight to read Andrea, many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs jan xx
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 8:32 AM
A splendid trophy winner, Andrea, and a wonderful addition to Fave, my friend! Aloha, William
George Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 8:43 PM
A Beautiful poem on Autumn in quatern form."when Autumn comes, she saunters in, capriciously shakes her tresses"... Love these lines. All the best Andrea.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 4, 2023 at 4:22 AM
Autumn, the inspiration of many on the soup. Great imagery at times in a personal way. I see lots of pumpkins these days. No much of a cook for them. Must learn. Blessings and hugs.
Narain Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 11:57 AM
Nice poem on autumn. Well written in quatern.
Bayles Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 7:55 AM
Nice use of form. This vivid poem paints a nice picture of fall.
Alhemaidy Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 4:54 AM
Lovely deep description of October in your place! Like magenta, deep purplish red. with warmest wishes, have a nice day, AA
Pandit Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 4:54 AM
Beautiful autumn poem, Andrea-- in a lovely form.
Hamilton Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 3:56 AM
I love this Andy you have truly captured autumn with your imagery get both a 7 from and a fav too Hugs Shadow
Jones Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 9:32 PM
Melodic and charming. I love this Andrea!
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