When Autumn Comes Premiere Contest Winner

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When Autumn comes, she saunters in. paints asters blue and streaks the skies magenta! When chill winds begin to susurrate, we hear her sighs. Wearing multi-colored dresses, when Autumn comes, she saunters in, capriciously shakes her tresses and with bright leaves then loves to spin. Cavorting with the clouds within the summer-ending skies of blue, when Autumn comes, she saunters in. But soon the woodlands she glides through. Not long will Autumn stay too calm. October sees strange pumpkins grin - not like her onset days of balm. When Autumn comes, she saunters in.

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Date: 10/16/2023 10:07:00 PM
Shakes her tresses, multicolored dresses, ..this is a lovely line
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Date: 10/16/2023 4:56:00 AM
My favorite and more... so much joy, so much hope. I love this more and more. You're a Godsend to all who know you and your poetry is a heart's breathe from the starlight glistening in the distance, a beautiful beyond description. Just love. Congrats on the top win and thank you for entering. God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 10/15/2023 8:43:00 PM
Back to say congrats on a first place win Andrea!
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Date: 10/15/2023 8:33:00 PM
Andra, so sublimely penned, vividly portrayed, personifying Ms Autumn in all hues of her beauty! A delightful Quatern, warmest congratulations on your well deserved trophy win!
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Date: 10/15/2023 5:23:00 PM
what a delight to read Andrea, many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/15/2023 8:32:00 AM
A splendid trophy winner, Andrea, and a wonderful addition to Fave, my friend! Aloha, William
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Date: 10/8/2023 8:43:00 PM
A Beautiful poem on Autumn in quatern form."when Autumn comes, she saunters in, capriciously shakes her tresses"... Love these lines. All the best Andrea.
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Date: 10/4/2023 4:22:00 AM
Autumn, the inspiration of many on the soup. Great imagery at times in a personal way. I see lots of pumpkins these days. No much of a cook for them. Must learn. Blessings and hugs.
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Date: 10/3/2023 11:57:00 AM
Nice poem on autumn. Well written in quatern.
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Date: 10/3/2023 7:55:00 AM
Nice use of form. This vivid poem paints a nice picture of fall.
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Date: 10/3/2023 4:54:00 AM
Beautiful autumn poem, Andrea-- in a lovely form.
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Date: 10/3/2023 4:54:00 AM
Lovely deep description of October in your place! Like magenta, deep purplish red. with warmest wishes, have a nice day, AA
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Date: 10/3/2023 3:56:00 AM
I love this Andy you have truly captured autumn with your imagery get both a 7 from and a fav too Hugs Shadow
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Date: 10/2/2023 9:32:00 PM
Melodic and charming. I love this Andrea!
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