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She Will Rise

Her dreams entangled in twisted ropes perturbed fate of banished desires innocence shriveled in raging fires they haven't known her bubbling hopes. Her existence exhausted in spiral cobwebs blazing her world in exploding scars yet wounded faith reaches soothing stars in her festering pain from tides to ebbs. Her harmless thoughts chained in fears seemingly offensive to societal norms will find an abiding shore through storms history screams the truth over her tears. She immerses herself in fearful showers hurtful memories drowning her rugged mind beneath oceans of paranoia she will find enclaves of scarlet heavenly augmented powers. Her frozen blood begins bubbling her cries simmered courage sprinkled in layered hues crushed valor floats in mellows of ashes to fuse beyond afflicted pain in freedom she will rise. Divinity reflects through her crystal eyes splashing colors of flaming crimson tune perfumed kindness drenching sapphire dune she dusts her wings, like a Phoenix she will rise. July 31, 2020 Be Inspired Poetry Contest Sponsor: Regina McIntosh ~Premiere Contest Winner: 2nd Place

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Date: 8/17/2020 10:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. You have a wonderful pen to write with. Enjoy your win and day..................
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Date: 8/15/2020 2:00:00 PM
I admire your unique choice of words, Aditi, wholly praiseworthy FAVE for me and my compliments in your win, Aloha! William
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Date: 8/15/2020 9:50:00 AM
Congratulations for your wonderful win today, Aditi! Blessings, John
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Date: 8/15/2020 8:00:00 AM
Congrats on another top write and a good win! Well done again on a difficult theme.
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Date: 8/15/2020 7:10:00 AM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Aditi! Another masterpiece! Janice
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Date: 8/15/2020 4:48:00 AM
You were truly inspired and I found this a exceptional piece. Congrats on your top win. Much love sent your way with many blessings for every day :)
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Date: 8/9/2020 10:34:00 PM
More amazing poetry from your inspired pen, Aditi. This seems to me to be a tribute to the strength of women? In the US, we are celebrating the centennial of women having the right to vote, a major milestone in the fight for equality. Films are being shown about key women who led the way helping make historic changes. I salute those who championed the civil rights of women. "Crushed valor floats in mellows of ashes to fuse beyond afflicted pain in freedom she will rise". Wonderful ~ John
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Date: 7/31/2020 3:51:00 PM
She seems not only Phoenix-like but delightful and invincible now thank you to this gloriously outstanding poem.
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Date: 7/31/2020 1:15:00 PM
I hope I am interpreting this one right. I dare not say who or what I think this refers to , for fear I got it wrong. but it's REALLY nice, Aditi!
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