William Kelii Kekaula Poet Triolet

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Triolet   ---   2025 January 05

 

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Sunrise East of Eden

Grand sites claim their paradises,
where beauty will call it their home,
and fortunate tame entices,
grand sites claim their paradises,
godsend gifts, blue ribbon prizes,
warmly brushed with a fine toothcomb, 
grand sites claim their paradises,
where beauty will call it their home.

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Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2025 at 12:20 PM - Heavenly beautiful sight, Hilo :) - hugs William Kelii Kekaula January 5, 2025 at 1:16 PM Mahalo, Anne-Lise, for your warm share. Aloha~William