Winged Warrior Poet Triolet

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Lily of the Valley

A lily blooms in Floral May,
Its petals basking in the sun’
I'm in trance of its softened sway,
A lily blooms! In Floral May
Eyes adorn the blushing bouquet,
Festive flowers have just begun’
A lily blooms- in Floral May
Its petals basking in the sun!


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May.03.2019
Celebrate May with a Triolet
Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich


Placed 2'nd...Thank You

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Sandra Haight May 18, 2019 at 4:39 PM Lovely Triolet, and beautiful gif to go with it, ^WW^! Congrats on your Podium Win! Sandra :)

Line Gauthier May 17, 2019 at 2:46 PM Lovely, WW. Congrats on your top win.

Gershon Wolf May 16, 2019 at 8:33 PM Back with congrats on your win in the contest, W.W. Sweet! ~ gw

Joseph May May 16, 2019 at 1:51 PM Congrats on your win with this beautiful write WW...

John Gondolf May 16, 2019 at 8:05 AM WW, congrats on your win for this beautifully written triolet. John

Kim Rodrigues May 15, 2019 at 7:50 PM Just beautiful! Congrats!

Connie Marcum Wong May 15, 2019 at 6:35 PM I adore the Lotus, akin to the Lily WW. Your poem is beautiful as the picture! Congratulations on your deserving second placement! : ) xxoo

William Kelii Kekaula May 15, 2019 at 6:27 PM Winged Warrior, Congrats in your placement for this wonderful gem--love your pic, my fave! Aloha wk

Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2019 at 5:30 PM this is SO pretty, JOhn (Hope that is your name I am remembering!) Congrats on a second place in my contest.

Gershon Wolf May 13, 2019 at 1:44 PM Sweetly sung, W.W. You've taken great advantage of the poetic form. ~ gw

Kim Rodrigues May 10, 2019 at 7:23 PM So beautiful! Mesmerizing, dear poet!

Jennifer Proxenos May 8, 2019 at 9:20 AM Hi ^WW^ this is a very beautiful poem - very delicately and creatively penned - excellent write - hugs Jennifer.

Maria Williams May 6, 2019 at 10:35 PM I love this, everything about it, as always you excel my dear friend....Maria Hugs. Oh and a fave for my list....Maria Hugs

Ralph Sergi May 5, 2019 at 11:42 AM Beautifully dine, WW Flowers are akin to lovers. Ralph Sergi May 5, 2019 at 11:43 AM SORRY. Beautifully done

Silent One May 5, 2019 at 11:10 AM You did this very well.. Beautiful poem..

Robert Lindley May 5, 2019 at 7:26 AM I have always found a Triolet hard to write my friend. Your fine piece makes it look easy and that is a sign of great poetic talent methinks.. A fav.

Brandy Nicole May 4, 2019 at 10:26 PM Simply breathtaking! Your words caress the page with beauty, elegance and grace. :) Very lovely my Warrior with Wings. ~ Brandy

Susan Ashley May 3, 2019 at 10:56 PM My eloquent bro bro, I’m mesmerized by your poem’s rhythm and beauty in Floral May! Elegant, expressive and exquisite! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, big bro. Light and live, your sane sissy <3

Norma Arana May 3, 2019 at 3:50 PM A floral wonder no less!

M. L. Kiser May 3, 2019 at 2:53 PM Lovely Triolet you've penned.

Jennifer Proxenos May 3, 2019 at 1:53 PM Hi Winged Warrior - and I bask in the joy of your poems - awesome poem ^WW^ Hugs, Jenn.

Heidi Sands May 3, 2019 at 12:53 PM So bright and nice to read today. Well written WW :)

Arturo Michael May 3, 2019 at 12:00 PM "Its petals basking in the sun!" I like this line...

CayCay Godwin May 3, 2019 at 11:48 AM Oh, your poem makes me want to twirl in the sunshine while wearing a simple feminine summer dress. Loved my time absorbing your triolet. I had no idea Andrea started this contest so your write also alerted me to get my own Triolet May Celebration on! All the best ... CayCay

Kim Rodrigues May 3, 2019 at 11:18 AM I love these singsong poems! I love the trance. Nicely done!

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