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Lily of the Valley

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A lily blooms in Floral May, Its petals basking in the sun’ I'm in trance of its softened sway, A lily blooms! In Floral May Eyes adorn the blushing bouquet, Festive flowers have just begun’ A lily blooms- in Floral May Its petals basking in the sun! 8x8 May.03.2019 Celebrate May with a Triolet Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich Placed 2'nd...Thank You

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Sandra Haight

Date: 5/18/2019 4:39:00 PM

Lovely Triolet, and beautiful gif to go with it, ^WW^! Congrats on your Podium Win! Sandra :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/17/2019 2:46:00 PM

Lovely, WW. Congrats on your top win.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/16/2019 8:33:00 PM

Back with congrats on your win in the contest, W.W. Sweet! ~ gw

Joseph May

Date: 5/16/2019 1:51:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this beautiful write WW...

John Gondolf

Date: 5/16/2019 8:05:00 AM

WW, congrats on your win for this beautifully written triolet. John

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/15/2019 7:50:00 PM

Just beautiful! Congrats!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/15/2019 6:35:00 PM

I adore the Lotus, akin to the Lily WW. Your poem is beautiful as the picture! Congratulations on your deserving second placement! : ) xxoo

Hilo Poet

Date: 5/15/2019 6:27:00 PM

Winged Warrior, Congrats in your placement for this wonderful gem--love your pic, my fave! Aloha wk

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2019 5:30:00 PM

this is SO pretty, JOhn (Hope that is your name I am remembering!) Congrats on a second place in my contest.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/13/2019 1:44:00 PM

Sweetly sung, W.W. You've taken great advantage of the poetic form. ~ gw

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/10/2019 7:23:00 PM

So beautiful! Mesmerizing, dear poet!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/8/2019 9:20:00 AM

Hi ^WW^ this is a very beautiful poem - very delicately and creatively penned - excellent write - hugs Jennifer.

Maria Williams

Date: 5/6/2019 10:35:00 PM

I love this, everything about it, as always you excel my dear friend....Maria Hugs. Oh and a fave for my list....Maria Hugs

Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/5/2019 11:42:00 AM

Beautifully dine, WW Flowers are akin to lovers.

Ralph Sergi
Date: 5/5/2019 11:43:00 AM

SORRY. Beautifully done

Silent One

Date: 5/5/2019 11:10:00 AM

You did this very well.. Beautiful poem..

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/5/2019 7:26:00 AM

I have always found a Triolet hard to write my friend. Your fine piece makes it look easy and that is a sign of great poetic talent methinks.. A fav.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/4/2019 10:26:00 PM

Simply breathtaking! Your words caress the page with beauty, elegance and grace. :) Very lovely my Warrior with Wings. ~ Brandy

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/3/2019 10:56:00 PM

My eloquent bro bro, I’m mesmerized by your poem’s rhythm and beauty in Floral May! Elegant, expressive and exquisite! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, big bro. Light and live, your sane sissy <3

Norma Arana

Date: 5/3/2019 3:50:00 PM

A floral wonder no less!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/3/2019 2:53:00 PM

Lovely Triolet you've penned.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/3/2019 1:53:00 PM

Hi Winged Warrior - and I bask in the joy of your poems - awesome poem ^WW^ Hugs, Jenn.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/3/2019 12:53:00 PM

So bright and nice to read today. Well written WW :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 5/3/2019 12:00:00 PM

"Its petals basking in the sun!" I like this line...

Caycay Jennings

Date: 5/3/2019 11:48:00 AM

Oh, your poem makes me want to twirl in the sunshine while wearing a simple feminine summer dress. Loved my time absorbing your triolet. I had no idea Andrea started this contest so your write also alerted me to get my own Triolet May Celebration on! All the best ... CayCay

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/3/2019 11:18:00 AM

I love these singsong poems! I love the trance. Nicely done!