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April 16, 2024
Poetic Expression Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Silent One


 

Quite far we have traversed, in pursuit of goals we chose, Through troubles and trepidations of seasons in throes; Sometimes reveling sunshine, sometime in glum of shadows, Always together~ on barren terrains, or verdant meadows. In albums of yore, we ruminate now, turning pages of life, Banishing anguish of feelings-forlorn, fuming in strife; Reminiscing in moments passionate, of love sublime, Treasured in memories-beloved, accumulated over time. Harboring wisdom, inlaid in life’s waning phase, as we age, In realms of reflections, insights-sapient, now we engage; Learning from knowledge gained, from choices we made, Accepting with grace, laments of secrets, as yet unsaid. Regrets unmitigated, voice remorse of unuttered sigh, Seeking empathy from goodwill of repentant goodbye; As life tallies good versus bad, that introspections confide, Eying a tranquil state of mind, devoid of hate and pride. It’s time to reflect, it’s time to mend, it’s time to befriend, As journey of life, beaming content, approaches its end; Living final days in covenants revered, humbly we penned, Elevating self, in peace of bliss, to heavens we shall ascend.

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Date: 4/23/2024 7:59:00 PM
Still with the best taste that whiles poetry, Vijay. Let simple me enjoy your plains and watch the momentuous verdancy add blooming colors to fill my eyes. Thanks for another Fave my friend, on this special day of mines. Aloha, William
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Date: 4/23/2024 10:59:00 AM
What a brilliant poetry, Vijay!! As usual your use of words is outstanding and the message it portrays, is full of wisdom. Thanks for sharing it! -Smita
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Date: 4/20/2024 10:27:00 PM
Vijay, I enjoyed your poem about aging and looking back on one's life's loves, joys and sorrows with wisdom and some regrets. This elegant poem touched my heart. It's a fave. :)
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Date: 4/18/2024 3:53:00 PM
Dear Vijay, This theme truly spoke to me, probably because we are approaching that stage of our life when we look back, ponder, and marvel. I always love the way you create beautiful rhyming poems - always enchanting, always captivating! Warm wishes to you, Dear Poet ~ Mala
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Date: 4/18/2024 2:02:00 PM
As we age, we tend to reflect a lot more on choices made. Learning from knowledge gained. (Most of us do, anyway.) Your thoughts hold wisdom, Vijay. So many emotions are tangled within, my dear friend. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 4/18/2024 3:27:00 AM
I wonder how many people take time to reflect on their lives while they are still able, Vijay. If so, does it help them become a better person or do they think they were the greatest person that ever lived. I enjoyed reading your post and it reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara K
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Date: 4/17/2024 10:52:00 AM
Nice poem, Vijay. A reflection on the seasons of life, Well penned.
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Date: 4/17/2024 8:11:00 AM
Dear Vijay, Your verses whisked me through epochs we've shared, weaving tales of resilience amid life's ebbs. I loved how memories, like golden threads, embroider our days, each stitch a testament to our enduring bond. I liked how that in existence, we glean wisdom from both sun-kissed peaks and shadow-draped valleys. As we navigate life's denouement, may our hearts find peace in the harmony of forgiveness and the quiet beauty of shared moments. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 4/17/2024 7:14:00 AM
"As life tallies good versus bad, that introspections confide, Eying a tranquil state of mind, devoid of hate and pride." Perfect. Love it! "It’s time to reflect, it’s time to mend, it’s time to befriend," never a better time than now. "to heavens we shall ascend." Forgiving self and others, releases the ball and chain. Excellent, positive poetry with profound message.
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Date: 4/17/2024 7:14:00 AM
A reflection on the seasons of life, Very nicely penned Vijay
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Date: 4/17/2024 6:39:00 AM
This is beautifully written. Wise reflections of life. I like the tranquil state of mind devoid of hate and pride. The last outstanding stanza is powerful. I enjoyed this thought provoking poem. Well written, my friend. I hope you have a peaceful day :)
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Date: 4/17/2024 6:13:00 AM
- Life is unpredictable and we often face challenges and demanding situations...we learn from our mistakes and do better next time :) - A lovely poem, Vijay :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 4/17/2024 5:14:00 AM
beautiful and uplifting poem, we have to do introspection, when getting older, to ease our travel, thanks for sharing, i am grateful poet
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Date: 4/17/2024 4:09:00 AM
An insightful poem of yours dear Vijay, and indeed there is always a time to reflect. As we reflect on our lives, we are reminded of the fragility of our relationships and the importance of cherishing those we love. We strive to mend broken bonds, to cultivate a sense of compassion and understanding, and to walk with grace and humility towards a brighter tomorrow. Advice well taken and given...Hugs
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Date: 4/17/2024 2:41:00 AM
In realms of reflections, insights-sapient, now we engage: There is great depth in your poem. Best for a win.
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Date: 4/16/2024 5:17:00 PM
Your poem was a joy to read, Vijay. So many wise words in each verse, all done in rhyme. Impressive. I especially liked Harboring wisdom, inlaid in life’s waning phase, as we age, In realms of reflections, insights-sapient, now we engage; Learning from knowledge gained, from choices we made, Accepting with grace, laments of secrets, as yet unsaid. Best wishes with the contest, have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 4/16/2024 1:23:00 PM
Great rhyming poem for this theme, Vijay. I'm sure this contest will do very well in the contest.
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Date: 4/16/2024 10:02:00 AM
Nice poem. Love the last stanza.99
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Date: 4/16/2024 7:08:00 AM
Those last lines hit so strong and is so powerful dear vijay! Especially right now with all that which is happening around the world, one can only say and remind others, to reflect and be mindful, and mend things, if we can! Forgiveness and empathy and so much more Youv highlighted so well here! I love the slight alliterations your wordplay and also your rhymes! I also love how youv written “ Through troubles and trepidations of seasons in throes; Sometimes reveling sunshine~” excellent opening. Best wishes for the contest! Its always a pleasure reading your poems! A fav it is
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Date: 4/16/2024 6:58:00 AM
Dear Vijay, The poem explores the intricacies of life's encounters, highlighting the significance of forgiveness, acceptance, and tranquility as one approaches the culmination of their journey. You have created a deeply meaningful and contemplative piece by delving into the themes of time, relationships, memories, and wisdom. The use of formal language and evocative imagery in your writing adds depth and meaning to the themes explored. Good luck in the contest.
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