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Triolet   ---   2025 January 05

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Candles wax time pulls it to Earth, drops cool stilled hardens in seconds, a fire holder girth, warps obverse, candles wax time pulls it to Earth, vapors prompt darkening observes, fire loses fight gloaming transcends, candles wax time pulls it to Earth, drops cool stilled hardens in seconds.

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Date: 1/6/2025 5:32:00 AM
I can feel the cold of winter in this poem. Best travel east.
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Date: 1/6/2025 6:23:00 AM
I saw this morning news, alerting citizens in central and eastern States, to stay home and don't drive due to blizzards and snow build-up.

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