Sunset West of Eden
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Triolet --- 2025 January 05
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Candles wax time pulls it to Earth,
drops cool stilled hardens in seconds,
a fire holder girth, warps obverse,
candles wax time pulls it to Earth,
vapors prompt darkening observes,
fire loses fight gloaming transcends,
candles wax time pulls it to Earth,
drops cool stilled hardens in seconds.
Copyright © Hilo Poet | Year Posted 2025
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