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Wooing Winter In Autumn's Song

Where gentle winds merrily blow And twilight flaunts its orange glow Swirling imprints amber arc spun Bending beams-mauve of setting sun Prairies sway in graying shadows Wailing grief of browning meadows While garden sighs of parched flowers And ardor yawns in rain showers Pine trees breeze lilting verdant hills Enchanting hearts in wintry thrills As snowflakes vie passions of night And romance glimmers in moonlight Frigid air dwells in dreams of dawn Yet, blush of morn smiles on and on Greeting bright day’s golden appeal While sunrise sparks its frosty zeal Wooing winter in autumn's song Glinting days short, as nights prolong January 25, 2022 Poem of the day January 27, 2022 Placed 1st: A strand 1061 contest Form LAY: Eight syllables per line

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/15/2022 6:55:00 AM

Back with congratulations on POTD. Thank you for your visit to my blog and for your prayers. Sara

Ann Foster

Date: 7/11/2022 1:14:00 PM

Lovely imagery. Powerful... it was very real feeling... Ann

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/8/2022 1:40:00 PM

"Wooing winter in autumn's song"; delightful penning for the season, as it is quite beautiful. Enjoyed this.

Ann Peck

Date: 2/2/2022 2:04:00 PM

Beautiful poem, but you can have Winter, Vijay! I'll take Autumn anytime :) I love your title. Congrats on POTD!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/4/2022 7:54:00 AM

Thank you Ann. Yes indeed--autumn is beautiful.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/2/2022 5:48:00 AM

Back to congratulate you on your POTD honours, Vijay:) excellent poem again:)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/4/2022 7:53:00 AM

Thank you Jo.

Anil Deo

Date: 2/1/2022 11:18:00 PM

Wordsworthian achievement. Om shalOm

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/2/2022 5:30:00 AM

Thank you Anil. Much appreciate.

Hilo Poet

Date: 2/1/2022 8:56:00 PM

Your writ paints clarity of your intended points of intrigue wondrously, Vijay! I am awed of your neatly tight terseness portrayed in Lay, and of such intricacies, it'll be shameful of me naught to have this as a Fave, my friend, Aloha!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/2/2022 5:30:00 AM

So special to hear that from you William and a treat to receive your FAVE. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/1/2022 10:21:00 AM

The rhyme and rythem is profound the content exquisite and the images provoke the most intense of creativity. Wonderful write dear Vijay - Hugs and blessings Jennifer

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/2/2022 5:29:00 AM

So glad you could visit with your wonderful feedback. Many thanks, Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/31/2022 4:28:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Vijay! You are always in tune with nature and its nuances.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/2/2022 5:28:00 AM

Thank you Kim--much appreciate.

John Watt

Date: 1/31/2022 4:09:00 PM

Vijay, I love the lines "Greeting bright day’s golden appeal / While sunrise sparks its frosty zeal". Beautiful writing from your nature-loving heart. Congrats on your POTD. Many blessings ~ John

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/2/2022 5:28:00 AM

Much appreciate your visit and comments, John. Many thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/30/2022 6:17:00 PM

I am so happy this won POTD. As you know it is a Fave. Congratulations my friend. Blessings xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/31/2022 6:25:00 AM

Thank you my friend for your return visit. A FAVE from you is a special treat, Connie. Always a joy to read your poems.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/30/2022 4:50:00 PM

Congratualtions Vijay and very well penned.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/31/2022 6:26:00 AM

Thank you MLK--much appreciate.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 1/30/2022 4:24:00 PM

Congratulatiions. Vijay In your placement in Strand 1061. SuZ

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/31/2022 6:26:00 AM

Thank you SuZ--much appreciate.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/30/2022 2:55:00 AM

Lay is a style I never know at all. Very beautifully written. Congratulations!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/30/2022 1:26:00 PM

Thank you Christuraj--much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2022 9:49:00 PM

gorgeous poetry and well deserving of a POTD, Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/30/2022 1:26:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. Great to hear from you--much appreciate.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/29/2022 7:21:00 PM

In this awesome POTD, Vijay, you have conveyed an appealing message through the use of vivid descriptions, especially personification. Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/30/2022 1:26:00 PM

Much appreciate your visit and comments, Janice. Many thanks.

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/29/2022 6:14:00 PM

Beautiful poetry Vijay, and deserved of POTD.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/30/2022 1:25:00 PM

Thank you Harry--much appreciate.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 1/29/2022 9:18:00 AM

This is wonderful, Vijay: I love the title and the flow of your words showing the acceptance of nature, always seeing beauty is your finest attribute. The colors, Romance and enchantment. Can I say more. Congrats on POTD

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/29/2022 1:42:00 PM

Many thanks SuZ. Much appreciate your visit and complimentary feedback.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/29/2022 9:16:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this one today. It has good flow, rhythm, and rhyme. I like the theme as well. I like the form chosen to use as well. I will have to look it up and see how to write one. I like the fact that you describe autumn "glinting days short and as nights prolong". Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/29/2022 1:41:00 PM

So glad you stopped by Sara with your kind remarks. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 1/29/2022 7:46:00 AM

Another amazing landscape painting with your masterful brush! You have displayed the unique beauty of Autumn and winter seasons in your second to none poetic artistry and feel! A gem not to be missed, rather cherished in my fave list! Congratulations on your well deserved POTD honour, dear Vijay! So much pleased to read and give due respect.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/29/2022 1:40:00 PM

So special to hear that from you my friend. Many thanks, as always, Besma. Much appreciate your compliments and the FAVE. Your visit is always a source of joy. Regards.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 1/28/2022 12:42:00 PM

Lovely penning Vijay, congratulations on the POTD, this has nice rhyme and flow too. Blessings ,Gordon

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/29/2022 1:38:00 PM

So very kind of you Gordon. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/28/2022 7:17:00 AM

Back to congratulate you my dearest friend, Vijay! I am happy for you!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/29/2022 1:37:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend. Much appreciate.

Deb M

Date: 1/27/2022 11:20:00 PM

Beautiful Vijay……good on you! Debx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/29/2022 1:37:00 PM

Much appreciate Deb--many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/27/2022 6:42:00 PM

Yes, the " blush of morn smiles on and on" .. because your words have been chosen as Poem of the Day. I'm smiling too. Congratulations, Vijay. :) Hugs, Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/29/2022 1:36:00 PM

Thank you my friend. Much appreciate, Brandy.

Gnikreklaw Walkerking

Date: 1/27/2022 6:34:00 PM

Congratulations Vijay. I knew you had it in you.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/29/2022 1:36:00 PM

Many thanks--much appreciate.