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Stars

When I was young and innocent
I thought the stars were just a bunch
of celestial glow worms.
Then Christmas took its meaning
and I rejoiced in watching
my father made up the Christmas tree,
and right on top there, he'd put
the loveliest star that glowed at night.

Soon, I began to see the shooting stars
and wishes came and went,
some frivolous, some serious,
but wishes I really dreamt.

As time went on, I bought some books
and learned of Saturn's rings,
discovered Pluto and our neighbour Mars,
and science fiction just became my fad.
Till one day man made it to the moon,
and shuttles flew up to outer space.
Occasionally, disaster struck when astronauts died,
and I did cry my heart for them.
Finally, the probes began again,
searching for the creation of man.

That is when I realised how much is spent
on useless information, just scientific facts,
while hunger reigned all around the world.
Now I wish I had never learned what stars were,
and yearn to turn the clock back to my childhood
when I thought that stars were just
celestial glow worms meant to light the world.
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Empress Avatar
December 28, 2024 at 10:22 PM
Lately we have been getting so very starry skies and i scant help but stargaze! As a stargazer i must say this is so beautiful and so well written! I love the idea of glow worms! Thats new and so creative! You always have a way with words dear victor! And theres always a soulful touch to your poems! Pleasure reading this gem! Sending you light always
Tor Avatar
December 25, 2024 at 9:43 PM
This shows your love Victor for mankind. A retrospect of memories of stars and a new reflection of what is important. I hope your Christmas was fine...
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 6:57 AM
The haunts of Edens tree of knowledge. Look but don't taste. I enjoyed the relevancy of your preceding and concluding lines. A welcomed Fave for me, Victor. Mahalo~William
Williams Avatar
December 23, 2024 at 2:08 AM
Dearest Victor This is such a heartfelt and thought-provoking poem! I love how it captures the journey from the innocent wonder of childhood to the weight of adult realizations. The imagery of "celestial glow worms" and the Christmas star is so vivid and nostalgic. . A fave ...Hugs
Hind Avatar
December 22, 2024 at 5:45 PM
This is different. I liked how your childhood mind thought stars as "glowing worms" - and can feel when innocence was lost.
Andresen Avatar
December 22, 2024 at 4:36 PM
- A lovely poem, stars have always fascinated me... love seeing a sky full of stars :) - I wish you a peaceful and Merry Christmas, Victor :) - hugs
Dietrich Avatar
December 22, 2024 at 3:37 PM
Cool poem Victor with all its musings.
Sands Avatar
December 22, 2024 at 2:38 PM
I like how you brought it back to your childhood view at the end. Well done. Merry Christmas :)
Allison Avatar
December 22, 2024 at 2:35 PM
what a touching piece Victor, oh for the innocence of childhood, shame we have to grow up my friend. hugs jan xx
La France Avatar
December 22, 2024 at 2:10 PM
Victor, wonderful poem, nothing like the magic world of a child's mind, then as we age reality shatters it, well done ~
Buehler Avatar
December 22, 2024 at 1:47 PM
I can remember viewing the stars with awe and wonder, as a child, too. Though space exploration is wonderful, it shouldn't be prioritized above the needs of suffering human beings. Lovely writing, Victor.
Bayles Avatar
December 22, 2024 at 8:17 AM
I like your poem. I agree; when we're young, there's magic in the sky.
Rolland Avatar
December 22, 2024 at 7:09 AM
don't know about shooting stars, i know a place, where i can see much, when there is no clouds, i made so many wishes, never happened, now i doubt of much facts, this is a very touching poem, reference to your childhood is upsetting, thanks poet
Rodrigues Avatar
December 22, 2024 at 7:01 AM
A lovely write! Though many have great knowledge, it sometimes makes them dumber than a moon rock. God longs to share his wonder with us, to awe us, to draw us to Himself, as we come as little children. Beautiful, just beautiful! A fave!
Cunningham Avatar
December 22, 2024 at 4:17 AM
The nigh sky is always fascinating to see, better in wintertime when you don't get that summer haze and the skies are clear. Merry Christmas to you Victor. Tom
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