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Carpe Diem   ---   2024 December 20

 

Carpe Diem With Heart

My days before were fulfilled daily,
No less and no more, well-balanced,
Blessed chapters and verses were faithful,
Cardinally, orderly--precedes and succeeds,

Until carpe diem claimed Mom's heart,
A reasonable necessity,
Her pain and suffering was addressed,
Age was hers and time was ours,

My son's carpe diem came,
Unexpected, caught off-balanced,
Did my best with my guard down,
I received my carpe diem long after,

Carpe diem was mine,
Yet I was no longer myself,
Realized a changed presence in me,
My heart was much heavier than before.
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Narain Avatar
December 20, 2024 at 10:47 AM
Great poem.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 20, 2024 at 3:48 PM
Thanks Jay. Aloha~William
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