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Carpe Diem   ---   2024 December 20

 

My days before were fulfilled daily, No less and no more, well-balanced, Blessed chapters and verses were faithful, Cardinally, orderly--precedes and succeeds, Until carpe diem claimed Mom's heart, A reasonable necessity, Her pain and suffering was addressed, Age was hers and time was ours, My son's carpe diem came, Unexpected, caught off-balanced, Did my best with my guard down, I received my carpe diem long after, Carpe diem was mine, Yet I was no longer myself, Realized a changed presence in me, My heart was much heavier than before.

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Date: 12/20/2024 10:47:00 AM
Great poem.
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Date: 12/20/2024 3:48:00 PM
Thanks Jay. Aloha~William

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