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Goddess of the Night

Where Luna treads are silver threads, the wisps of clouds that slide through sky of night, and shining white, they part so she might glide serenely through dark twilight’s blue with slow and regal grace. And to our world, with aspect pearled, she turns a beaming face. She casts her glow on those below who love her mystery. . . who reverence her as with allure, she dances on the sea. The lovers sigh as by and by, the night fades into day. And in their dreams she softly gleams before she slips away. For Caren Krutsinger's 'A Contest About a Goddess or God - Not THE God' Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/25/2023 3:58:00 PM
I just saw this as an example in Joseph May's contest and was taken with your rhyme and meter. Beautiful poem that flows freely. On my fave list.
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Date: 2/19/2023 8:39:00 PM
Love this Andrea it’s so beautiful and romantic, smooth and swift. A fave - what a gift… Belle
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Date: 10/5/2020 4:27:00 PM
This is a true delight, Andrea. Love your internal rhymes and perfect rhythm, reading the second stanza reminds me of date nights with my wife watching moonrises over the bay. Congratulations on your first place win with Caren, definitely a FAV for me!
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Date: 7/28/2020 10:56:00 AM
This is another one of your outstanding gems Andrea. A tender muse with powerful emotions. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :)
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Date: 7/25/2020 5:10:00 PM
Andrea beautiful win!;)
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Date: 7/25/2020 3:32:00 PM
Harmoniously fulfilling, Andrea, I love this--FAVE--assuredly, and my compliments for your win -- Aloha~@William
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Date: 7/25/2020 2:28:00 PM
A lovey write on Luna...it is just delightful. Congrats on your top placement.
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Date: 7/25/2020 12:46:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea....on your top placing. This is a beautiful flowing piece. Luv, SuZ
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Date: 7/25/2020 11:08:00 AM
Ohhh... Andrea, I love the flowing meter - a moonlight sonata of images! Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 2/17/2019 5:32:00 PM
I really enjoyed the smooth flow and beautiful content of this poem,Andrea. Congratulations on your success in this lap.
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Date: 2/16/2019 11:07:00 PM
Beautiful, Andrea. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 2/16/2019 4:11:00 PM
Beautifully painted with your lovely, well-chosen words, Andrea. Congratulations on your fine placement in this marathon contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/16/2019 3:27:00 PM
Andrea, the way you have weaved these thoughts with hymn meter makes it feel so lyrical and would be so easy to put to melody...not that it need be, it creates its own.
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Date: 2/16/2019 12:50:00 PM
Andrea, this is a lovely poem. Your word choice is exquisite. Congratulations on your win on Mile 18 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest! Thank you so much for supporting my contests. By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
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Date: 4/15/2018 5:30:00 PM
Very melodious. A most pleasant read, Andrea.
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Date: 10/15/2017 5:04:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to our Luna Goddess Andrea. Congrats on your podium placement on this short list of winners! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/13/2017 1:25:00 PM
Such a beautiful and lyrical poem Andrea. Congratulations on your win with this heavenly write.
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Date: 10/13/2017 8:45:00 AM
I love this, Andrea. It flows beautifully, and the meter gives the poem a song like quality. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/13/2017 5:22:00 AM
Beautiful piece, Andrea - congratulations! :-) <3
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Date: 10/13/2017 4:07:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea, it's well deserved.
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Date: 10/12/2017 11:53:00 PM
Congrats on your win in Thvia's contest.
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Date: 10/12/2017 9:58:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea on your grand win.
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Date: 10/12/2017 9:43:00 PM
Wonderful poem Andrea! Thank you for entering it into my contest and congratulations on your placement. Another one going into my favorites!
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Date: 11/7/2014 8:38:00 AM
Once again stunning.
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Date: 9/1/2013 3:46:00 PM
Wow, what a beautiful poem. The personification of the moon is exquisite. You have a keen mastery of words. Excellent poem.
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