Connie Marcum Wong Poet Sonnet

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A Poets Abode

A Poet’s Abode

A poet’s peaceful abode surpasses bliss
Depicting imagery beheld by eyes.
Dreams revealed go beyond the great abyss
Of space with stars that fill our cobalt skies.

The elements alone express such truth
That sun needs balance of the rain to grow
Sprout varied seedlings that begin in youth
Then we reap our harvest by autumn’s glow.

The beauty of a rainbow through the rain,
The way the sunrise colors us in shades,
How beating hearts behold our joy or pain.
A poet captures hues as twilight fades.

When quill releases ink and does not miss
A poet’s peaceful abode surpasses bliss.

7-21-22

~Premiere Contest N/A~
2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 9 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Mark Toney

5-28-22
~Poem of the Day May 30, 2022~
Thank you Poetry Soup Team

~Fifth Place Premiere Contest~
Orphan Sonnet Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Emile Pinet 

A Brian Strand PREMIERE~N/A~
Contest Judged:  5/30/2022 9:54:00 PM
Sponsored by: Brian Strand 

Orphan Sonnet
Created by: Dale Gregory Cozart with a rhyme scheme of Abab - cdcd - efef - aA, (I0 syllables per line) in three quatrains, and a final couplet with the last line repeating the opening line.

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James Horn November 29, 2023 at 12:48 PM Where are you?

Unseeking Seeker August 7, 2022 at 11:27 PM The inner sanctum of heart’s soulful vibration! Enjoyed this soft, soothing sonnet, Connie! Top of the charts too, I see :)

Vladislav Raven July 21, 2022 at 12:26 PM Hi Connie, this is such a beautifully crafted Sonnet. As always, you write from the soul, your words creating such a wonderful palette, drifting onto the page to paint a Heavenly group of images. This is excellent poetry that anyone would find joy in. Each line holds its own wonder. I like the form too. Has to be a fave, Connie. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX Connie Marcum Wong July 21, 2022 at 12:55 PM This little sonnet has gone beyond my wildest dreams in favorable remarks Mike. I think that so many poets can relate to it and have similar feelings. I feel so honored that you have Faved it. Thank you so very much my friend. Hugs, Connie xxoo

John Loving Iii July 19, 2022 at 4:47 PM The rays of poetry shine and bring warmth. Critics water with their attention. Poems grow with fames permission and with every reading a little growth. Connie Marcum Wong July 19, 2022 at 6:59 PM I agree John. Many master poets never realized how long into the future their poetry would still be read or relevant in today’s world. I think they would be very pleased. Especially the poets who considered themselves a failure at the art. You never know whose emotions poetry will stir. Thank you very much for your kind comment. Blessings xxoo

Susan Ashley June 26, 2022 at 7:54 AM Dear Connie, your poetry spills gracefully upon the page with captured hues of Nature, emotions and poetic wisdom. Such inspiration radiates from your amazing artistry; "The beauty of a rainbow through the rain", is especially meaningful to me. Indeed, splendor fills this exquisite tribute to poetry! Congratulations for this worthy gem being at the top of the best new poems list and for other well-deserved accolades received! Warmest wishes, sweet lady.. ~Susan Connie Marcum Wong July 19, 2022 at 7:04 PM What a delightful comment this was to read Susan. Thank you very much. My love of nature pops up in most of my poetry. We live on a beautiful planet and we must all work to keep it unpolluted. I am inspired by your poetry and many other poets here. Blessings xxoo

Sam Kauffman June 21, 2022 at 11:51 AM Connie, congratulations on your win in Emile's contest AND on being named to a top spot on the BNP list. This is so lovely. You have such an ability to go into the essence of beauty in nature then "release" it in words on papers! Truly a gift for all of us to revel in - wrap ourselves up in the loveliness of your poems. Blessings and hugs dear friend! Connie Marcum Wong July 19, 2022 at 7:23 PM This is such a beautiful comment Sam. You have honored me with your words. I am so inspired by your poetic talent. I do love nature and enjoy the beauty of our planet. It is not difficult living in the tropics to notice the beauty surrounding us everywhere. Thank you very much my friend. Blessings xxoo

Daisy Meadows June 19, 2022 at 10:36 PM This is a lovely poem. Well written. Connie Marcum Wong July 19, 2022 at 10:22 PM Thank you very much Jeanette. Blessings xxoo

Robert Lindley June 19, 2022 at 2:08 AM A truly beautiful,heart and soul, image driven and awesomely created sonnet. So fully deserving of more accolades, I go. A gem and a fine favorite added to my growing list. God bless. Connie Marcum Wong June 19, 2022 at 8:54 PM Happy Father’s Day Robert. Thank you very much for honoring my poem with a fave. Blessings xxoo

Ann Cantu June 17, 2022 at 5:28 PM This is a beautiful verse honoring a poet's perspective and craft. It's inspiring. Connie Marcum Wong June 17, 2022 at 5:52 PM Thank you Ann. I believe a lot of poets can relate to it. Blessings

Bill Baker June 15, 2022 at 5:02 PM On my FAV's list, but had to read it again, Such a joy to read a well-written Sonnet. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your gift of poetry, Connie. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Connie Marcum Wong June 15, 2022 at 5:37 PM I appreciate you honoring my poem with a fave and especially with a second read Bill. Thank you very much. Blessings xxoo

Jennifer Fenn June 11, 2022 at 3:05 PM Beautiful poem! True too. I have to be in a peaceful state of mind when I write poems. Connie Marcum Wong June 12, 2022 at 4:25 AM Me too. There can’t be noise going on around me. Thank you Jennifer. That is the lovely name I gave my oldest daughter. Blessings xxoo

Ann Foster June 8, 2022 at 3:19 PM peaceful abode... yes... I love that... Excellent write. Ann Connie Marcum Wong June 8, 2022 at 4:54 PM Thank you very much Ann. This was written with all poets in mind. Blessings xxoo

Timothy Ray June 8, 2022 at 12:45 PM those ideal moments when we push the chair away from the desk and what we sought has been achieved....as every line here attests to...great read Connie Marcum Wong June 8, 2022 at 2:33 PM Thank you Timothy. I know most poets feel this way. Blessings xxoo

Vijay Pandit June 8, 2022 at 8:45 AM Back with BIG congrats for your #1 spot on the best poems list, Connie. Connie Marcum Wong June 8, 2022 at 12:32 PM Oh, Thank you so much Vijay. You are right up there with me. Blessings xxoo

Elaine George June 8, 2022 at 3:47 AM POETRY AT ITS FINEST! This goes to my FAV list, dear Connie. Connie Marcum Wong June 15, 2022 at 12:39 AM It makes me so happy that you honored this sonnet with a Fave Elaine. I know by the reaction this poem has had that it speaks directly to the soul of a poet. Thank you so very much. I am so pleased that you have returned to PS. Blessings xxoo

Susan Lawrence June 7, 2022 at 4:36 PM Connie - Yay ! Back with congratulations! So happy to see this fav of mine sitting at the top of the best new poems list ! Hugs xo Susan :) Connie Marcum Wong June 8, 2022 at 2:38 PM I am surprised too. I was thrilled to have it be second in line. I appreciate you stopping back to leave such a sweet comment. Thank you. Blessings xxoo

Evelyn Judy Buehler June 6, 2022 at 10:35 AM Connie, I am back with my congratulations on your beautiful poem being at the top of the popular poems list. Hugs, Evelyn Connie Marcum Wong June 8, 2022 at 2:34 PM Thank you Evelyn. I consider it a real honor because there are so many talented poets here at Poetry Soup. I am in excellent company. Blessings xxoo

Malabika Ray Choudhury June 6, 2022 at 5:31 AM Revisiting to congratulate you, Dear Connie, on your poem being on top of the popular list. Love ~ Mala Connie Marcum Wong June 6, 2022 at 10:16 AM Thank you very much for letting me know Mala. This poem has appealed to many here because is about their poetic art. I am thrilled it has done so well. Blessings xxoo Connie Marcum Wong June 6, 2022 at 10:06 AM Thank you very much for letting me know Mala. This poem has appealed to many here because is about their poetic art. I am thrilled it has done so well. Blessings xxoo

Kim Rodrigues June 5, 2022 at 9:55 AM Very beautiful especially “ How beating hearts behold our joy or pain.” and the closing lines! Connie Marcum Wong June 5, 2022 at 2:40 PM Thank you very much Kim. Poetry is such a blessing. xxoo

Beryl Edmonds June 4, 2022 at 8:18 PM A beautiful orphan sonnet Connie, in a poet’s abode poetry is composed. Congratulations on a well deserved poem of the day and also the win in Emile’s contest… Blessings, Belle xx Connie Marcum Wong June 4, 2022 at 11:14 PM Thank you very much Belle. Blessings xxoo

Susan Lawrence June 3, 2022 at 11:48 AM Connie, Beautiful loving tribute to poetry . Your ink shines as your heart opens to the wonders held within your soul . I love this as it reflects you and the the beauty surrounding us all . Congratulations on POTD and on your win . Hugs to you and blessings, Susan xxx Connie Marcum Wong June 4, 2022 at 4:28 PM Thank you very much for your lovely comment and for honoring my poem with a Fave. I feel all poet’s share many of these feelings about poetry and there is much beauty in this world to be thankful for. Your poetry shares this beauty not only in your poetry but through your paintings. Blessings xxoo Susan Lawrence June 3, 2022 at 5:23 PM A fav for me ! Susan :)

Joseph P. DiMino June 3, 2022 at 11:35 AM "When quill releases ink and does not miss A poet’s peaceful abode surpasses bliss." For sure, Connie. A dedicated poet is a priest of God~Words his/her Divinely ordained Ministry.

Charles Reese June 3, 2022 at 10:05 AM Connie this is a very beautiful sonnet. The words combined with perfect rhyme and meter create such beautiful pictures. I always love reading poems written in difficult styles. They seem to magnify the imagery.

JC Brul June 2, 2022 at 11:23 PM Congratulations dear Connie. This sublime poem will continue to bloom season after season. A fav for me. Connie Marcum Wong June 3, 2022 at 12:43 AM I feel truly honored by your Fave my friend. Thank you so very much. It is my first Orphan sonnet. I think it is a beautiful form and love how Emile celebrates poet’s forms by featuring them in his contests. Blessings xxoo

Phyllis Babcock June 2, 2022 at 4:08 PM A lovely sonnet Connie and congrats on your write. love phyl

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