As Fresh As a Daisy

In my meadow the scent of spring ripples in air, I see the dance of patina on dainty petals of daisy, unfurling with the touch of dawn’s spectrum, like your hazel eyes out of the trance of dream. The flowers blossom in chromatic charisma of joy, look up to the sunburst pallet of the seamless sky, the essence is suffused with splendorous sparkle, painting pristine portrait of your of surreal beauty . As the satin night showers the silver tinsels, floating in the mystique miasma of moonbeam, I descry the sparkling sky descend in my garden, you shine with sapphire hue as sprouting stars. The celestial charm of golden glow, pulsates in my heart with enticing rhythm, that radiates the luring luster of exultation from the core of fair petals of your floral face. Pining for the embrace of your radiant purity I make my yearning an ornate vase, place a bunch of blooming buds, that flower you for me as fresh as a daisy. _____________ July 30, 2022 Contest : Simile Sposnored by : Hilo Poet
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Calasibetta Avatar
August 24, 2022 at 8:09 AM
Sorry, I am a bit late to congratulate you on your beautiful poem! :)Paulette
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 28, 2022 at 11:59 PM
Thank you, Paulette for your visit and for liking the poem. Sorry, I am also late in responding.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 24, 2022 at 4:54 AM
Congratulations on your win, Dear Poet. Love all the lines, and all the images..the image "yearning an ornate vase," is outstanding! BW ~ Mala
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 28, 2022 at 11:57 PM
Thank you for your visit and for liking the poem.
La France Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 3:46 PM
Subimal, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in the contest, blessings ~Constance
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 28, 2022 at 11:57 PM
Thank you, Constance.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 1:55 PM
Congratulations on your win. "As Fresh As A Daisy" is a lovely write. Have a great/blessed day....................
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 28, 2022 at 11:56 PM
Thank you, Paula for liking the poem.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 2:22 PM
What an incredibly beautiful entry this is my friend. With lines such as these I felt mesmerized by their beauty and imagery.“As the satin night showers the silver tinsels, floating in the mystique miasma of moonbeam,” Congratulations on your high placement. I am saving this to my Faves. Blessings xxoo
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 9:21 PM
Thank you, Connie for your encouraging appreciation as always.
Fowler Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 10:39 AM
Sweet and sensual Sublimal. Fabulous writing. Congratulations on your win! Linda
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August 13, 2022 at 9:22 PM
Thank you, Linda for your visit and nice comment.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 9:31 AM
Exquisitely crafted, Subimal, is a natural Fave! Thanks for your participation and my compliments on your high placement in my contest, Aloha~William
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August 13, 2022 at 9:23 PM
Thank you for liking the pom and for its placement.
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