As Fresh As a Daisy

In my meadow the scent of spring ripples in air, I see the dance of patina on dainty petals of daisy, unfurling with the touch of dawn’s spectrum, like your hazel eyes out of the trance of dream. The flowers blossom in chromatic charisma of joy, look up to the sunburst pallet of the seamless sky, the essence is suffused with splendorous sparkle, painting pristine portrait of your of surreal beauty . As the satin night showers the silver tinsels, floating in the mystique miasma of moonbeam, I descry the sparkling sky descend in my garden, you shine with sapphire hue as sprouting stars. The celestial charm of golden glow, pulsates in my heart with enticing rhythm, that radiates the luring luster of exultation from the core of fair petals of your floral face. Pining for the embrace of your radiant purity I make my yearning an ornate vase, place a bunch of blooming buds, that flower you for me as fresh as a daisy. _____________ July 30, 2022 Contest : Simile Sposnored by : Hilo Poet

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Date: 8/24/2022 8:09:00 AM
Sorry, I am a bit late to congratulate you on your beautiful poem! :)Paulette
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/28/2022 11:59:00 PM
Thank you, Paulette for your visit and for liking the poem. Sorry, I am also late in responding.
Date: 8/24/2022 4:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Dear Poet. Love all the lines, and all the images..the image "yearning an ornate vase," is outstanding! BW ~ Mala
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Date: 8/28/2022 11:57:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and for liking the poem.
Date: 8/16/2022 3:46:00 PM
Subimal, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in the contest, blessings ~Constance
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/28/2022 11:57:00 PM
Thank you, Constance.
Date: 8/14/2022 1:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. "As Fresh As A Daisy" is a lovely write. Have a great/blessed day....................
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/28/2022 11:56:00 PM
Thank you, Paula for liking the poem.
Date: 8/13/2022 2:22:00 PM
What an incredibly beautiful entry this is my friend. With lines such as these I felt mesmerized by their beauty and imagery.“As the satin night showers the silver tinsels, floating in the mystique miasma of moonbeam,” Congratulations on your high placement. I am saving this to my Faves. Blessings xxoo
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/13/2022 9:21:00 PM
Thank you, Connie for your encouraging appreciation as always.
Date: 8/13/2022 10:39:00 AM
Sweet and sensual Sublimal. Fabulous writing. Congratulations on your win! Linda
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/13/2022 9:22:00 PM
Thank you, Linda for your visit and nice comment.
Date: 8/13/2022 9:31:00 AM
Exquisitely crafted, Subimal, is a natural Fave! Thanks for your participation and my compliments on your high placement in my contest, Aloha~William
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Date: 8/13/2022 9:23:00 PM
Thank you for liking the pom and for its placement.
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