Premiere Contest WinnerDepth Perception

From corners of silver lakes, you shimmer
In glancing ripples, fluid treasure awaits
And I, diving for pearls, a swimmer
Tangled within your illusion of depth
Until the fragile surface separates
Ghosts of tarnished gold grows dimmer
As mirages of you fall to shallow fates.

8/14/21

First Place
Julyme contest

Poem of the Day
8/16/21
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Hind Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 11:18 AM
Gorgeous!
Eslinger Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 4:45 PM
Left me breathless! A true classic! Splendor pen!
Ashley Avatar
October 10, 2021 at 9:41 AM
Dear Michelle, I am enraptured with the soulful beauty of your poem. Your creative intelligence and amazing artistry allows you to rise beyond the surface of ordinary to soar the highest realms of extraordinary.. I relish your profound poetic pen, my friend. A huge fav! Congratulations on the worthy and wonderful honors of both POTD and the trophy win.. both well-deserved. Your golden talent is to be admired. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Lamoureux Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 2:23 PM
Brief but so filled with imagery. I can see why this is a winner. Hugs and Congratulations. ;0)
Hankins Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 7:16 PM
Michelle, I really love your rhyme scheme in this poem. So expressive; rich images and nice flow.
Peck Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 4:18 PM
Your poem is so fluid and beautiful. Those divers can hold their breath forever, it seems. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 4:11 PM
Michelle, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my contest ~ love and serenity _ Constance
Leiser Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 11:08 AM
You weave your words such in a magical way in this excellent verse, Michelle. Wow, so good! A real treasure of a poem and a fave! :)
Y. Avatar
August 26, 2021 at 12:48 PM
WoW! Michelle, You have penned such a powerful and deep write. So well deserving of poem of the day and top win. Congratulations for both accolades. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Peranteau Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 6:11 AM
your audience have spoke! have a wonderful autumn...much love, james
Faulkner Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 4:59 PM
You as well, thank you for your visit and comment, James
Lawrence Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 8:22 AM
Michelle, So very powerful. You have created so much depth and emotion in your magical wise words. Congratulations of both of your wins! All the best, Susan :)
Faulkner Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 2:33 PM
I am very touched by your generous comments, thank you so much, Susan~
Watt Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 9:40 PM
This is such a WOW poem, Michelle. I just love how you juxtapose your imagery of the ephemeral (shimmer, illusion, ghost, mirage) with the precious (silver, pearl, gold, treasure) and the implied trajectory of knowing a person in a deeper, more meaningful way. Loved your rhymes also,, and the way your cadence feels like ripples on a lake. So happy to see such quality writing earn you a trophy and POTD, my artistry sib :^)
Faulkner Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 2:32 PM
I actually didn't think of all those connections, it is so interesting what you saw that I didn't! I am always intrigued by your insights, you are a perceptive and talented poet yourself of course, thank you for your kind visit~
Andresen Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 2:25 AM
- A beautiful poem, Michelle :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Faulkner Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 2:28 PM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise :)
Omar Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 1:55 AM
you did the miracle of turning tarnished into glowing with just a touch of magical words . I can't bow down for you are shining star . I have to raise my head and look up to your lightening glow
Faulkner Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 2:27 PM
What a beautiful comment, that made me smile, thank you very much, Mohamed~
Alex Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 1:27 AM
Indeed, a very beautiful tribute. Congratulations!
Faulkner Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 2:27 PM
Thank you, Christuraj
Fenn Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 7:55 PM
Back with congrats on your POTD!
Faulkner Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 2:26 PM
Thanks again, am always glad for a return visit!
Edmonds  Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 7:05 PM
A beautiful write Michelle, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle
Nicole Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 5:06 PM
"Tangled within your illusion of depth" This image is simply breathtaking. Beautiful are your words, in every way. Congratulations Michelle, on Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy
Faulkner Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 2:26 PM
Thank you for such a thoughtful comment, Brandy, you are very kind and encouraging~
Allison Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 3:45 PM
A poetic gem Michelle, many congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx
Faulkner Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 2:25 PM
(virtual) hugs back, thanks jan!
Robinson Jr. Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 11:12 AM
An introspective jewel of a poem, Michelle. Kudos on POTD! Love and more love always.
Faulkner Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 2:24 PM
Good to see you again, Freddie, love to you always too~
Goldsmith Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 10:52 AM
Back with Congratulations on this POTD win. A creative write. Have a blessed day..............
Faulkner Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 2:23 PM
You as well, thank you, Paula.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 9:59 AM
Breathtaking poetry dear poetess. You have such an elegance to your writing, it tends to blow me away. Congratulations on POTD, I hope it’s a spectacular day! xomo
Faulkner Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 2:23 PM
It was a pretty awesome day! Thank you as always for your visits and kind words Mo~
Buhagiar Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 9:32 AM
My compliments for your POTD.
Faulkner Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 2:22 PM
Thank you so much, Victor.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 9:30 AM
I am back to compliment you on your righteous Poem of the Day win, Michelle, I am so happy for you my friend, Aloha!
Faulkner Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 2:22 PM
I guess I have you to thank, without your contest this would not have even been written! Aloha to you also!
La France Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 9:17 AM
Michelle, beautiful and congratulations on receiving POTD enjoy the honor ~Constance
Faulkner Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 2:21 PM
Appreciate it, thank you kindly, Constance~
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