Rebirth

Rebirth

Grey ghostly clarions
Swiftly travel
To the east of darkling day
Riding on a dirge wind
Blowing harsh
Over waters that reflect
The fading dawn
When they turn to blood red, 
Glowing crimson,
As they color the vast and swirling grey
Trumpeting to the earth,
With light retreating,
The call of night
Where black and twisting tree limbs 
Stretch
Into the clarion sky
To grasp at daylight fleeing
While through their naked
Leafless fingers
Arias of monotones
Rise up on whistling winds
As unbelieving earth implores 
The gloom descending, 
With feeble lights,
Be gone!
Then wait beneath the clarion shadows
Entombed in sleep –
Still as death, chilled and numb –
For the morning star to spread
Like warm fingers
Across the ghostly clarions
Turning them into the daystar’s turquoise pearl,
Telling lightless earth 
“Arise!”
See life reborn in light!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Watt Avatar
March 6, 2020 at 1:07 PM
"Turning them into the daystar’s turquoise pearl" - pure poetry. Love all your imagery and use of diminishing colors to describe the end of day. A beautiful arc towards the hope and anticipation of the final nine lines. Glorious!
Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 5:08 PM
ahhh,I see you know winter mornings in Wasatch from your reply below!!
Kauffman Avatar
March 2, 2020 at 11:38 AM
Have spent many days in Utah and in the mountains - one of the prettiest mountain ranges in the US. You are blessed to be so close to the Wasatch and watch the mountains breath!
Koplin Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 8:00 AM
Beautifully written. I envy your ability to write with such grace. Well done
Kauffman Avatar
March 2, 2020 at 11:45 AM
Hi Mark, thank you for taking the time to read Rebirth, your message and your feedback. I am honored.
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2020 at 3:52 PM
this is just gorgeous, Sam!! thanks for your very welcome last poetry comment to me.
Kauffman Avatar
February 26, 2020 at 5:28 PM
Hi Andrea! Thank you so much for your feedback! I have always loved this poem but wasn't sure about entering it! I am so grateful for the opportunity PS has afforded me to discover, share and rejoice in our mutual love the the poetic art form. I am so glad you liked Rebirth. Reminds me of some winter mornings in the Wasatch.
Ibeh Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 6:47 PM
Sam, you keep weaving tapestries of brilliant poems, and this one is no exception. Heartiest congratulations on your top win!:-)
Kauffman Avatar
February 26, 2020 at 5:33 PM
Edward, I am deeply honored by your message - grateful for your continued support and feedback. Thank you for your congratulations. I love reading your work.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 6:10 PM
Wow, Sam, metaphor galore, "...daystar's turquoise pearl", "...call of night Where black and twisting tree limbs Stretch" --FAVE--, -- Aloha!~@wk
Kauffman Avatar
February 26, 2020 at 5:35 PM
Aloha my friend! Thank you so much for your message and honored by your "FAVE!" In gratitude.
Devonshire Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 2:35 PM
Sam, I love the way you describe the sunset as daylight fades to gray. What a blessing it is to wake up to a bright, new world each day. It's almost like a miracle. Your creative muse helped you choose a topic to which everyone can relate. Beautiful! Hugs, Carolyn
Kauffman Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 11:05 AM
Hi Carolyn! Thank yo so much for your kind words - they are appreciated. It is a blessing to wake up each morning and given the chance to make the most of each day - to be reborn. So glad you enjoyed this poem. Blessings and hugs!
Turner Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 4:55 PM
Very well written, Sam. Loved this "awakening".
Kauffman Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 5:36 PM
Daniel, thank you! Sometimes, for me, it is a simple event like a sunset and an impending storm in the winter that sparks a poem. Thank you for your kind words!
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