Notes About The Poem

Poetry and Me

"Poetry is the rhythmic creation of beauty in words" Edgar Allan Poe

Poetic inspiration
Often occurs 
Early in the morning
Tired eyes flutter open
Recalling my thoughts can be challenging
Yawning, I pick up my pen and write



Writing Challenge 3, August 2019 - Six Lines
Sponsor, Dear Heart- Wiishkobi Ode
8/30/19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Watt Avatar
April 1, 2020 at 12:56 PM
Jan, I could never write poetry in the morning, it would come out as absolute mishmush. You, I imagine are a morning person! This is a delightful insight into your morning routine and discipline, and your love for poetic expression is on full display! I'm always a sucker for poetry about poetry... simply delightful ~ John
La France Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 3:05 PM
Jan, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this perfect Acrostic poem, I also write early in the morning as my mind seems so open and full of ideas (but guilty of also writing at night) Well Done !
Allison Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 3:18 PM
thanks so much for inspiring me with your contest challenges:-) hugs Jan xx
Agustin Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 7:45 PM
Wow! Congrats!!! God Bless you, and your poetic endeavors.
Allison Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 3:18 PM
Thanks so much Beata:-) hugs Jan xx
Adams Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 6:18 PM
love this one, for me it often flows at night when i am trying to gain sleep...or while i am driving and can't grab a pen! Nicely done Jan, congrats on your top win :) hugs
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 7:40 PM
I always leap out of bed if I get an idea or have a notebook by the bed as I never know when inspiration will hit:-) hugs jan xx
Smith Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 5:47 PM
Excellent Jan, congrats. :)
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 7:39 PM
thanks Gary:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 11:56 AM
- You did it again !!! - Congratulations on your excellent first place, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 4:54 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise :-) hugs jan xx
Mcgee Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 11:05 AM
True words for me also. Congrutlations on your win Jan.
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 4:53 PM
Thanks Jeanne:-) hugs Jan xx
Chiri Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 11:02 AM
Jan congrats on a great win!;)
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 4:53 PM
Thanks Brenda:-) hugs Jan xx
Wolf Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 10:29 AM
Hey, Jan -- are you up yet? Not still yawning? (LOL). OK: Congratulations to you on your top win in the contest!! :) gw
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 4:53 PM
thanks GW yes I am up ... just off for a moonlight walk soon xx
Gondolf Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 9:41 AM
Very nicely done, Jan, I like this. Congrats on your win. A great quote to lead off with as well. Hugs, John
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 4:51 PM
thanks John:-) hugs Jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 8:37 AM
Congratulations on your first place win Jan with this lovely acrostic poem! hugs
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 4:51 PM
thanks sweet friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 8:36 AM
A delightful gem of an acrostic, succinct and simple--great for our adolescent members--my FAVE--my compliments for this well-deserved 1st place honors, ~ Aloha always William
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 4:50 PM
Thanks William, its short and simple - a lot like me lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 12:24 AM
A poet's poem Jan. So true! This is a great idea as an entry for her contest. A perfect acrostic! xxoo
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 4:50 PM
I think many can relate Connie:-) hugs Jan xx
Flaherty Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 3:01 PM
Dream Poetry
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 4:49 PM
lovely comment thanks Christopher:-) hugs jan xx
Proxenos Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 2:10 PM
I love the simplicity of your write Jan, yet its content and message are awesome, short, wonderful and definitely describes how you, and lot of us on poetry soup record our thoughts. I also get up early and come straight to my computer - early morning thoughts are the best Hugs, Jennifer.
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 4:49 PM
I often wake with a complete poem in my head - usually a silly limerick:-) hugs Jan xx
Lamoureux Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 10:55 AM
I too am an early morning writer. Good luck with this well crafted piece Jan. Hugs Rick.
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 4:47 PM
I'm a bit like the old Martini advert - I write any time any place any where lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Y. Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 10:34 AM
Hi Jan, This is a good entry for the contest them. Good title as well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a great weekend my friend:-)
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 4:47 PM
thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
Amadore Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 12:01 AM
Your acrostic tells of a way that works, indeed...and cleverly validates the concept stated in the old bit of wisdom: a poet/writer is a person who writes....and the more recent advertising instruction: just do it! Well done.
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 4:46 PM
thanks Larry:-) hugs Jan xx
Foster Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 10:39 PM
Oh so sweet, and makes me feel like a "Longfellow" moment. Lovely. However it is hot coffee for me, or tea for three, if the dogs and kittens come for scones. Lovely poem my friend... I enjoyed it very much. Ann
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 4:46 PM
thanks so much Ann:-) I just write simple poems I am so glad Constance liked this one:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 6:53 PM
I love the simplicity of this acrostic. Wonderful job, Jan!
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 7:00 PM
thanks Andrea you know me and writing simple poems , I hope Constance likes it:-) hugs Jan xx
Raven Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 5:27 PM
A wonderful; Acrostic for the contest Jan. I hope it does well for you. I am one of those, wait until the afternoon for the words to come types. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 6:20 PM
I never force writing Mike if the muse isn't willing then so be it:-) hugs Jan xx
Green Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 5:02 PM
And you do so well. Loved your drowsy acrostic poem Jan. This was fantastic.
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 5:13 PM
thanks Chris I can't sit down and force the muse to write I just have to wait for inspiration to flow:-) hugs Jan xx
Mcconnell Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 3:31 PM
A lovely acrostic piece Jan, very well-penned indeed. Blessings, Gordon
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 3:43 PM
thanks Gordon:-) hugs Jan xx
Kinch  Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 2:37 PM
Oh I so get this, words always come to me in my dreamy state. I need to get pen and paper beside my bed. Love this acrostic Jan
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 3:42 PM
I have a pad by my bed and write as soon as I get an idea, i usually have a note book with me when I go out but didn't today and had to borrow a pen to scribble my thoughts down on the back of my shopping receipt:-) hugs Jan xx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 1:59 PM
This is lovely Jan. best wishes in the contest. xomo!
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 3:39 PM
thanks Mo:-) hugs Jan xx
12
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace