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"Poetry is the rhythmic creation of beauty in words" Edgar Allan Poe Poetic inspiration Often occurs Early in the morning Tired eyes flutter open Recalling my thoughts can be challenging Yawning, I pick up my pen and write Writing Challenge 3, August 2019 - Six Lines Sponsor, Dear Heart- Wiishkobi Ode 8/30/19

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Date: 4/1/2020 12:56:00 PM
Jan, I could never write poetry in the morning, it would come out as absolute mishmush. You, I imagine are a morning person! This is a delightful insight into your morning routine and discipline, and your love for poetic expression is on full display! I'm always a sucker for poetry about poetry... simply delightful ~ John
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Date: 9/3/2019 3:05:00 PM
Jan, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this perfect Acrostic poem, I also write early in the morning as my mind seems so open and full of ideas (but guilty of also writing at night) Well Done !
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Date: 9/3/2019 3:18:00 PM
thanks so much for inspiring me with your contest challenges:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/2/2019 7:45:00 PM
Wow! Congrats!!! God Bless you, and your poetic endeavors.
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Date: 9/3/2019 3:18:00 PM
Thanks so much Beata:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/2/2019 6:18:00 PM
love this one, for me it often flows at night when i am trying to gain sleep...or while i am driving and can't grab a pen! Nicely done Jan, congrats on your top win :) hugs
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Date: 9/2/2019 7:40:00 PM
I always leap out of bed if I get an idea or have a notebook by the bed as I never know when inspiration will hit:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/2/2019 5:47:00 PM
Excellent Jan, congrats. :)
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Date: 9/2/2019 7:39:00 PM
thanks Gary:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/2/2019 11:56:00 AM
- You did it again !!! - Congratulations on your excellent first place, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/2/2019 4:54:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise :-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/2/2019 11:05:00 AM
True words for me also. Congrutlations on your win Jan.
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Date: 9/2/2019 4:53:00 PM
Thanks Jeanne:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/2/2019 11:02:00 AM
Jan congrats on a great win!;)
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Date: 9/2/2019 4:53:00 PM
Thanks Brenda:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/2/2019 10:29:00 AM
Hey, Jan -- are you up yet? Not still yawning? (LOL). OK: Congratulations to you on your top win in the contest!! :) gw
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Date: 9/2/2019 4:53:00 PM
thanks GW yes I am up ... just off for a moonlight walk soon xx
Date: 9/2/2019 9:41:00 AM
Very nicely done, Jan, I like this. Congrats on your win. A great quote to lead off with as well. Hugs, John
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Date: 9/2/2019 4:51:00 PM
thanks John:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/2/2019 8:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win Jan with this lovely acrostic poem! hugs
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Date: 9/2/2019 4:51:00 PM
thanks sweet friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/2/2019 8:36:00 AM
A delightful gem of an acrostic, succinct and simple--great for our adolescent members--my FAVE--my compliments for this well-deserved 1st place honors, ~ Aloha always William
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Date: 9/2/2019 4:50:00 PM
Thanks William, its short and simple - a lot like me lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/31/2019 12:24:00 AM
A poet's poem Jan. So true! This is a great idea as an entry for her contest. A perfect acrostic! xxoo
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Date: 9/2/2019 4:50:00 PM
I think many can relate Connie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/30/2019 3:01:00 PM
Dream Poetry
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Date: 9/2/2019 4:49:00 PM
lovely comment thanks Christopher:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/30/2019 2:10:00 PM
I love the simplicity of your write Jan, yet its content and message are awesome, short, wonderful and definitely describes how you, and lot of us on poetry soup record our thoughts. I also get up early and come straight to my computer - early morning thoughts are the best Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/2/2019 4:49:00 PM
I often wake with a complete poem in my head - usually a silly limerick:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/30/2019 10:55:00 AM
I too am an early morning writer. Good luck with this well crafted piece Jan. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 9/2/2019 4:47:00 PM
I'm a bit like the old Martini advert - I write any time any place any where lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/30/2019 10:34:00 AM
Hi Jan, This is a good entry for the contest them. Good title as well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a great weekend my friend:-)
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Date: 9/2/2019 4:47:00 PM
thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/30/2019 12:01:00 AM
Your acrostic tells of a way that works, indeed...and cleverly validates the concept stated in the old bit of wisdom: a poet/writer is a person who writes....and the more recent advertising instruction: just do it! Well done.
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Date: 9/2/2019 4:46:00 PM
thanks Larry:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/29/2019 10:39:00 PM
Oh so sweet, and makes me feel like a "Longfellow" moment. Lovely. However it is hot coffee for me, or tea for three, if the dogs and kittens come for scones. Lovely poem my friend... I enjoyed it very much. Ann
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Date: 9/2/2019 4:46:00 PM
thanks so much Ann:-) I just write simple poems I am so glad Constance liked this one:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/29/2019 6:53:00 PM
I love the simplicity of this acrostic. Wonderful job, Jan!
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Date: 8/29/2019 7:00:00 PM
thanks Andrea you know me and writing simple poems , I hope Constance likes it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/29/2019 5:27:00 PM
A wonderful; Acrostic for the contest Jan. I hope it does well for you. I am one of those, wait until the afternoon for the words to come types. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 8/29/2019 6:20:00 PM
I never force writing Mike if the muse isn't willing then so be it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/29/2019 5:02:00 PM
And you do so well. Loved your drowsy acrostic poem Jan. This was fantastic.
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Date: 8/29/2019 5:13:00 PM
thanks Chris I can't sit down and force the muse to write I just have to wait for inspiration to flow:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/29/2019 3:31:00 PM
A lovely acrostic piece Jan, very well-penned indeed. Blessings, Gordon
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Date: 8/29/2019 3:43:00 PM
thanks Gordon:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/29/2019 2:37:00 PM
Oh I so get this, words always come to me in my dreamy state. I need to get pen and paper beside my bed. Love this acrostic Jan
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Date: 8/29/2019 3:42:00 PM
I have a pad by my bed and write as soon as I get an idea, i usually have a note book with me when I go out but didn't today and had to borrow a pen to scribble my thoughts down on the back of my shopping receipt:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/29/2019 1:59:00 PM
This is lovely Jan. best wishes in the contest. xomo!
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Date: 8/29/2019 3:39:00 PM
thanks Mo:-) hugs Jan xx
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