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Poetic Form: Hybronnet
Inspired: 2024 September 11
Image: N/A
* My original conceptual offering thought a reversal of lines of the entirety of verses where lines split halves visually effective when six top left lines trade spots with the bottom six right lines thus illuminating the illusion of six lines halved as lines equals--highlights my point on couplets concerning Halves.
Petal freed fate use, air-picked blue, nay hues,
Pinks, carefree and loose, methinks you will lose,
Lain green break chartreuse, you lost as I cruise,
There flies Mother Goose, Spruce Goose Mister Hughes,
Growth winds I deduce, blue his choice, my views,
Heaven to Earth truce, his blown dirt, PrimeNews.
Air-picked blue, nay hues, petal freed fate use,
Methinks you will lose, pinks, carefree and loose,
You lost as I cruise, lain green break chartreuse,
Spruce Goose Mister Hughes, there flies Mother Goose,
Blue his choice, my views, growth winds I deduce,
His blown dirt, PrimeNews, Heaven to Earth ... truce.
No distant than them stay by theft or deft,
Halves for life--whose?--them/us--whiche'er is left?
Copyright © Hilo Poet | Year Posted 2024
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