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September 14, 2023; Placed 1st: Ocean Poetry Contest; Sponsor: Ink Empress


 

Magnificent Blue Ocean

A spirited traveler, how curiously you roam, flexing your freedom,
Visiting places serene, from Atlantic to Pacific, Artic to Antarctic,
Hugging every exotic continent, kissing territories in between;
Exploring from shore to shore; thrashing, splashing, your rhythms.

Hosting sunsets of amber evenings and sunrises of purple dawns
Fondly you reflect ruby rays, charming avid glances of romance,
Illuminating in sun’s golden dust a fusion made of fervid dreams,
And designs of your vision artistic, sprinkled on motifs esoteric.

Custodian of precious resources, a treasurer of beauteous coral reefs,
A liaison for shipping goods, trading foods, marine mineral mining;
You are a daring warrior too, flaunting bravely your armored ships,
An environmentalist as well, facilitating harvesting of wind energy.

You are so charismatic, when leisurely you propel passenger ships,
Journeying to towns historic, luxuriating on heavenly beaches;
Yet, when your mood is perturbed, you are a monster, angry beast,
Stomping ferociously, storming destructively, churning latent heat.

Harmonious with the mystique of moon, mythical cosmic bodies,
Coast-to-coast you soar, alluring aspirations of dreams romantic,
As boundlessly you undulate, navigating zestful tides of passion;
Awe of admiration, you are the eternal, magnificent blue ocean.
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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 1:25 PM
Namaste, Vijay! I decided to read one of your most recent Personification poems. I am glad that the magic of your quill has not diminished one iota, my friend! Your words performed wonderfully, and every expressed phrase (as mentioned in other comments) is elegantly unsurpassed. In short, another Fave--Cheers on your 1st placement win! Aloha, William
Buehler Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 12:06 PM
The ocean's beauty and power is masterfully portrayed in these exquisite images, Vijay. Heartfelt congratulations on your win.
Daniel Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 6:18 AM
Oh wow! Another astounding beauty:) congratulations on your win:)
Empress Avatar
September 18, 2023 at 6:05 AM
I read this couple of times and i was in awe of how you’ve personified the ocean! How brilliant and profound is this! For some reason it speaks to my soul especially the way you’ve given a feminine touch to the ocean and written in such a descriptive manner with excellent diction! I especially loved how you’ve described the mood, of the sea! So powerful! And those alliterations are beyond impeccable! I can quote the whole poem! So good Thank you for writing. CONGRATULATIONS
Poet Avatar
September 18, 2023 at 5:43 AM
Vijay, Back with Hearty congratulations on your amply deserved Podium win with this wonderful poem about the ocean
Poet Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 6:56 AM
Vijay, your poetry is truly exceptional. You have skillfully personified the ocean, vividly portraying its immense size and capturing its infinite splendor in the most captivating manner. Your words have transported me to a state of overwhelming wonder. Your entry for the contest is truly commendable, my dear friend. The way you have painted pictures with your exquisite descriptions and paid homage to the majestic ocean is truly remarkable.
Pandit Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 11:52 AM
So nice to hear that from a shining star on Poetry Soup. You have conquered the art of poetry my friend. Always a delight when you visit, Lasaad. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
Sharma  Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 6:35 AM
My goodness, this is one of the best takes for the contest I've read so far! The visual magnificence and marvelous imageries of this piece are truly something that Ink will definitely adore...The way you've personified the miraculous ocean is definitely genius and I admire all the wonderful descriptions here.. So apt and fitting for the theme.. And as always, your rhyming magic is definitely your friend! "Hugging every exotic continent, kissing territories in between" I love this! A Fav! :)
Pandit Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 11:49 AM
Such a treat to read glowing comments from a gifted, talented writer. You are a source of inspiration for many on Soup as your spread goodwill, spending time to write detailed comments. I certainly value and appreciate. Many thanks, Hiya, and a very special thank you for the FAVE.
Buhagiar Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 1:28 AM
Brilliant personification. Your descriptions are so intriguing. Imagery galore. Best for a win.
Pandit Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 11:43 AM
Much appreciate your kind feedback Victor. It means a lot coming from you.
Downing  Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 8:07 PM
I love the ocean. Growing on small islands surrounded by the ocean is both beautiful and scary. The ocean is eating away our islands. And to your magnificent poem, ahhh, just one of my favorite. ^_^
Pandit Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 11:42 AM
You are right my friend, islands are suffering because of this climate change. Man has to mend ways--hope you are forever safe, Akkina. Many thanks for your kind remarks and a very special thank you for the FAVE. Hope to read your new poem soon.
M  Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 11:06 PM
Very beautiful Vijay! Debx
Pandit Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 7:11 AM
Glad to see you again, Deb. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks my friend. I am sure you are having a wonderful time on your vacation.
Baker Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 9:44 PM
Wonderful Personification poetry, Vijay. Good entry for the contest, my friend. Good Luck! Your imagery was exquisite and your poem a tribute to the mighty ocean. I enjoyed the read. Enjoy your upcoming weekend! Bill
Pandit Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 7:09 AM
Your visits are much valued and appreciated my friend from Texas. Glad you liked the poem, Bill. Many thanks. Have a wonderful weekend.
Nicole Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 6:21 PM
Dear Vijay, you've described in detail, how enormous the ocean is, while sharing its boundless beauty, in every remarkable way. Your words leave me in complete awe. This is beyond mesmerizing, my dear friend. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Pandit Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 7:07 AM
So wonderful to see you again my dear friend. Always a joy to read your thoughts, for they are heartfelt. Much appreciate as always, Brandy. Hugs to you as well.
Dietrich Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 12:04 PM
Love how you personified it. I was thinking of doing that way but I couldn't have pulled it off so elegantly as you have done
Pandit Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 7:05 AM
Glad you liked the poem, Andrea. Much appreciate. I am sure you are having a good time at the reunion reminiscing in memories. Many thanks.
Narain Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 10:23 AM
Nice ode to ocean, Vijay.
Pandit Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 7:04 AM
Thank you Jay--much appreciate.
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