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Monoku   ---   2024 December 20

Forgive Me Differs

my circumstances differ from yours~~yours technical mines medical

forgiveness differ perspectives~~out right's yours spiritual mines
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De Beaulieu Avatar
December 23, 2024 at 11:43 AM
Hello Sotto, i did not know [ you are sick']were sick. Get better soon. i nope it is not a serious sickness. I miss you. Anyway i am wishing you a merry Christmas. All the best for the new Year. I hope you return soon. Hyour frkiend, Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 23, 2024 at 2:10 PM
Mahalo Hilo Poet,I wish you all the best for this is not the timed of year to be sick. I hope you get better soon. Where are you spending Christmas? I wish you all the best for the New Year.. /Darlene/
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 23, 2024 at 11:51 AM
Mahalo, Darlene. This is Hilo Poet from Hawaii, saying you for your thoughtful sharing points of generosity, my friend. Aloha~William
Rodrigues Avatar
December 20, 2024 at 7:20 PM
Perspectives change us. Praying you get back your strength, my friend! Mele Kalikimaka!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 20, 2024 at 7:53 PM
Mahalo, Kim. So true and have yourself the Merriest of Christmas. Aloha~William
Tor Avatar
December 20, 2024 at 4:03 PM
Very clever and true Hilo. Thanks for sharing my friend...Have a Merry Christmas and God bless you...
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 20, 2024 at 4:45 PM
Mahalo, Michael. Mele Kalikimaka ame pomaika'i o Akua pu. Thanks, Michael. Merry Christmas and may God bless you.
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