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Quest of Allure Romantic

Perfumed breaths of rosy breeze
In lyrical refrain of redolent winds
Enamoring your pulse of longing
Compose harmonies euphonic
Strumming verses of heartbeats;

When nightingale sings song of eve
As buoyant river rushes to sea,
Giggling stream, greening prairies,
Voicing passions of iridescent spring.

But it is the moon on opal skies
That seduces your dream of dreams,
Proffering aura of esoteric smile
In covert hints of amorous night,
Lauding quest of allure romantic;

Hypnotizing your zealous soul
Ecstatic in my infatuating words
From song of heart rousing passion,
Crooning tender tunes of love
Tiptoeing to become your world.

Copyright © Vijay Pandit | Year Posted 2023

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Hilo Poet Date: 12/15/2023 2:19:00 PM Aloha, Vijay. I enjoyed reading your exposition through its subjective mentions. Admirably, their delineation is beholden to its objective which carries per stanza, hence the conveyance of the titled piece is beautifully complete. My compliments on Lasaad's contest and another Fave, my friend. Aloha, William Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/15/2023 6:54:00 AM Such a lovely piece. Thanks for sharing your artistry. Login to Reply

Debjani Mitra Date: 12/14/2023 5:42:00 PM Romanticism is brought to life with your poetic creation, its one of your best no doubt dream of dreams...passion musically blending with nature..so divine Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/14/2023 1:41:00 PM so beautiful, Vijay. Congrats. Login to Reply

Bill Baker Date: 12/13/2023 10:44:00 PM Easy to see why this was a First-Place finisher. Your love poems are enticing and romantic, Vijay. Thanks for sharing the beautiful imagery of love. Bill Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 12/14/2023 11:45:00 AM Many thanks, Bill--much appreciate, my friend.

Joe Dimino Date: 12/11/2023 9:35:00 AM "When nightingale sings song of eve As buoyant river rushes to sea, Giggling stream, greening prairies, Voicing passions of iridescent spring." Wow! Dynamic poetry, such wonderful imagery, caries the heart away. "Crooning tender tunes of love Tiptoeing to become your world." Love it! All! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 12/14/2023 11:45:00 AM Thank you my friend. You are always so very kind. Much appreciate.

Paula Goldsmith Date: 12/11/2023 6:14:00 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful/ romantic write. Have a blessed day writing away....................... Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 12/14/2023 11:44:00 AM Many thanks, Paula--much appreciate.

Tom Woody Date: 12/10/2023 3:01:00 PM Becoming her world... What an enticing notion Veej. Romance supreme Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 12/14/2023 11:43:00 AM Thank you Tom--much appreciate.

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 12/10/2023 12:58:00 PM Your beautiful poem, with its romantic images of a redolent, moonlit spring night, is quite captivating. This is a fave. :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 12/10/2023 1:48:00 PM So very kind of you, Evelyn. Much appreciate your insightful feedback and your FAVE. Many thanks, my friend.

Silent One Date: 12/10/2023 12:08:00 PM Knew this one would finish really high.. Congratulations on your placement in it. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 12/10/2023 1:47:00 PM Thank you for your return visit, SO. Much appreciate.

Hiya Sharma Date: 12/10/2023 5:11:00 AM Awwn, this is such a glorious poem with eclectic hues of love, shimmering throughout your pristine artistic skills and poetic wordplay.. Wow.I'm always in true awe while reading your poems, because they always feel so heavenly! Such a romantic ambience has been created here and your word choices are diamond like a long with being mellifluous. I really adore that stanza"But it is the moon on opal skies,That seduces your dream of dreams,Proffering aura of esoteric smile" And that ending too, a FAV Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 12/10/2023 7:39:00 AM Thank you Hiya, for your supportive comments and taking the time to spread goodwill with your detailed remarks. Much appreciate your worthy feedback and your FAVE.

Brandy Nicole Date: 12/9/2023 7:07:00 PM A "lyrical refrain" is whispering through the wind, as "tender tunes" of love tiptoe. The moon creates a magical mood, indeed. This is so beautiful, romantic and dreamy. Your thoughts bring a smile, Vijay. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 12/10/2023 7:36:00 AM Not as magical as your poems, my friend. Always appreciate your presence on my page, Brandy. Thank you for your smile. Hugs to you as well.

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 12/9/2023 5:57:00 PM wow you have hypnotized me with your words, tip toe on, Vijay, all the way to the winner circle ! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 12/10/2023 7:33:00 AM May thanks my friend for your vote of confidence. Much appreciate your cheerful feedback, Vienna.

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/9/2023 8:27:00 AM I especially like the last stanza and the last two lines. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Your visits add a nice touch. Sara K Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 12/10/2023 7:31:00 AM You are so very kind, Sara. Much appreciate as always. Many thanks for your visit and comments.

Ink Empress Date: 12/9/2023 7:12:00 AM Wow this is beautiful, i always enjoy reading your romantic poems. I love the rhymes here and your use of words, to describe and create such a captivating cadence. Especially “ Strumming verses of heartbeats;“ how mellifluous. Music does have a way with winning hearts. “ But it is the moon on opal skies That seduces your dream of dreams, Proffering aura of esoteric smile“ wow! I am in awe! Impeccable lines. This is one of those poems that would touch all senses of a reader. A fave definitely! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 12/10/2023 7:30:00 AM That is so special to read from a gifted writer. Much appreciate your supportive comments on my page, and your FAVE, Ink. Many thanks, my friend.

Silent One Date: 12/9/2023 6:58:00 AM Vijay your really know how to woo the women with your words.. You really do excel at romance and this one cold have been in the romanticism form also.. I really love that middle stanza, it is so enticing.. But it is the moon on opal skies That seduces your dream of dreams, Proffering aura of esoteric smile In covert hints of amorous night, Lauding quest of allure romantic;. Sotto will love this one.. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 12/10/2023 7:28:00 AM Glad you liked the poem, SO. So nice to read your kind words my friend. Much appreciate as always. Many thanks.