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Haibun   ---   2024 December 10, 2024

 

Post the garden, then an ocean. Drifting sands caught up in a glass. Inhale and exhale one’s existence known as life, until death parts us from the garden, then the ocean and the sands—physical, mental, and mineral. We grow, we grow up, then we grow down. The duration defines us. Jesus is the Way, the Truth, and the Life, as I claim the glory of Christ.
in the name of the Father and the Son and the Holy Spirit

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Date: 12/12/2024 10:51:00 AM
What a lovely write with a fun picture. Have a blessed day.................
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Date: 12/12/2024 12:07:00 PM
Amen, Paula. Aloha~William

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