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Free Verse   ---   2024 December 23

The entrance of Spring, seasons well the vibrancy of greens evolving greener. Age was hers and time was ours, Love is the verbs blossom as roses scented reserve suite line composes, Time marks a question measured to wrangle, Gemmed Ivory and Ebony, host o'er our bejeweled Pearl. Ships neither sink nor swim in tranquil Springs Seas calmness...falsely trains expert yachtsmen, Lost lamb hopes his roll's called up yonder ... as his last words read ... Words that stem from the heart seldom a mind, Good hopes and goodwill--righteousness succeeds, Sanctuary Carpe Diem With Heart September Reflections Diaphanous Dichotomy It Came Upon A Midnight Clear Parody Voice of a Silent Crib: New Poetic Form - Tearassonancenet Walk The Tightrope Nearer My God to Thee, Be A Cross That Raises Me Poetry Soup Main Fixings: Words My Afterthought's My Goal

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Date: 12/27/2024 11:35:00 AM
Quite beautiful, William, and so inspiring especially with all that you have been through this year! Have missed you and been wondering how you have been faring. So appreciate the update. Mau i ka'u pule e kuu hoa! Mele kalikimake! Best wishes for the contest! Hugs!
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Date: 12/27/2024 12:33:00 PM
Mahalo nui, Sam! I wonder if the Hawaiian language has Al capabilities. Since our language found missionaries clueless and inventive. It became equivocal or polysemous. It was a convenient purpose for their creation of their churches backdoor. Nonetheless, I appreciate your kind expressions as I'm still recovering and less bed-ridden~Amen! Happy 2025! Aloha~William
Date: 12/24/2024 1:27:00 AM
That is quite clever. I tried it once and failed. Yet you managed it so well. Happy Christmas.
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Date: 12/24/2024 5:57:00 AM
Aloha, Victor. I'm still hospitalized,80% healed while during some rehab work. Mele Kalikimaka ame Hauoli Makahiki Hou. Mahalo~William --- Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. Thanks~William

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