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Pleiades --- 20224 December 23

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Nobody Welcomed Isle Northernmost Garden Isle Numerous People Isle Neighborly Friendly Isle Natives God Valley Isle Nursery Fruity Isle Notably Biggest Isle

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/24/2024 1:50:00 AM

Loved your Pleiades. Check your date. Merry Christmas.

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/24/2024 9:18:00 AM

Thanks Victor. I just noted her updated change, therefore ...

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/24/2024 6:34:00 AM

Aloha, Victor. I had created and posted it on the day after Andrea listed her contest. Mahalo~William

Jeanette Swan

Date: 12/23/2024 3:36:00 AM

I haven't read a Pleiades poem before. I like the brevity and pattern of first letter repetition, and of course the seven sisters (lines). Sounds like the seven sisters all see differently. I like it. J :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/23/2024 11:22:00 AM

Pleased to have entertained your first time experience with the Pleiades poetic form, Jeanette. Mahalo for your visiting sharing points. Aloha~William