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Autumn in Canada: 25 Fall Photos From Coast to Coast | Our Canada

come . . . take my hand and we will walk deep into a Canadian autumn woodland where it is crisp and cool- vast and full the woodland is quiet in the veil of morning fog and we are wrapped in infinite shades and hues of changing brushstrokes of gold, red, orange and green_ but soon, we are lost in an ocean of different trees and the drum of time has ceased for us - as we are witnesses to nature's decay in autumnal equinox . . . . and stained- glass leaves fall around us crackling, and crunching under our feet for the forest floor is carpeted with the fallen October orange and red turned rust colored can you feel it_ can you hear the rustling squirrels and small creatures ? oh, the wildflowers have wilted! (but still birds sing) all around is a wondrous earthiness full of a cornucopia of scents . . . . just inhale the air the stream still flows with a loud fierceness but we know winter will . . . still her screams shall we gather some finger-painted leaves? so we can press them into our books _ ______________________________ October 21, 2020 Poetry/Free Verse/an autumn walk Copyright Protected, ID 10-1296-822-21 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, Still Life Autumn sponsor, Eve Roper First Place

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Date: 10/26/2020 10:04:00 AM
So many beautiful pictures, sights, smells and sounds in your forest, Constance. Congratulations on your first place win! All the best.
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Date: 10/26/2020 10:36:00 AM
Sam, thank you for the compliment on my poem ad for the congratulations _Constance
Date: 10/26/2020 5:38:00 AM
- Wonderful autumn days, Constance :)- In any encounter with nature, it is a breath of fresh air :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/26/2020 8:20:00 AM
Anne-Lise, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations, hugs _Constance
Date: 10/25/2020 11:44:00 PM
Magnificent, Constance, simple words, "...brushstrokes...stained- glass...finger-painted", augment your muse, my compliments for your honorable placement, and a welcomed Fave my friend, Aloha! William
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Date: 10/26/2020 8:22:00 AM
William, thank you for that lovely comment and the congrats and FAV-Constance
Date: 10/25/2020 9:05:00 PM
Constance, congratulations on your win, great imagery . Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/26/2020 8:22:00 AM
Eve, thanks for another inspiring contest and for my placement and the congratulations, hugs _Constance
Date: 10/21/2020 9:06:00 AM
Beautiful. I love the Autumn walks. The change of color. So wonderful. Thank you Constance for sharing the amazing poetry.
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Date: 10/22/2020 10:24:00 AM
John, thank you for visiting my poem and for the lovely comment, appreciate very much _Constance

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