Voice of a Silent Crib: New Poetic Form - Tearassonancenet
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Poetic Form: Italian Sonnet/Narrative
Inspired: 2024 September 14
Image: N/A
Tearassoncenet is a play on Tyrannosaurus Rex
Unlike LIPOGRAM where the chosen vowel is omitted
however, in TEARASSONCENET, the concept is reversed:
1. Your chosen vowel is maximized.
2. Objective, counter by minimizing all other vowels.
3. Any sonnet form
BELATED NEEDED ADDENDUM 09/14/24
Lipogram is where a vowel is taken out of the equation forcing other vowels to reinforce the missing via sacrificing their own vowel in its desperate replacement word. My version is reversed where the chosen letter is maximized and the fallout results in an amplification whereby desperation is nullified and replaced with multiple choices.
EX.: Voice of a Silent Crib: -- The chosen letter 'I' as my max alpha begins with the title
My Fair Lady Lidja--disquiet--sigh
Limit thine opinions, my Lord Miltrose,
Thy intent fails midst tardily shadows
Albeit findeth tis aid satisfy
Ahh! My Lord Sir Gilroy, tis nice surprise
Twill thine fair milieu idle pitched moist lips
Delivery thrills with a smile post scripts
Admittedly the id did simplify
A lady said the incident eclipse
Ships neither sink nor swim in tranquil Springs
Flights robins and whipper-o-willow wings'
Claims to an anointing gift rectify
Blessings of an innocent child ... heartstrings
Mildly midst millennium ... a voice sings ...
“My Lord’s-in-waiting, beseech thy favor
an ear and harken of woven words will
of a lifetime breathes I, here and now,
True Lord in Waiting in time and place
for us to be … somewhere, someplace,
… for all time."
Copyright © Hilo Poet | Year Posted 2024
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