Notes About The Poem

*written from the perspective of a man 60 years of age*

Musings of An Aging Man

Ah, the wistful daydreams about my lost youth! 
           Astride upon a white stallion, riding into a distant past
    I miss youth like a barren, parched desert misses pouring rain
I wish I could coax father time into restoring my vernal exuberance
   
    My aging body is starting to betray me. I can't see quite as clearly
     I can't move as quickly. And I sure can't run up the stairs as fast 
    As I used to. My memory isn't quite as sharp anymore. Each morn
 I awake, full of aches and pain. I'm a squeaky wheel in need of grease

     You needn't strain your eyes to see what my age wants you to see
    I have greying hair, crows feet, lines across my forehead, the works
   My testosterone is shot to smithereens. My virility is steadily waning 
 But who's complaining? I'm loving life. There's a lot of it left to live, still 

              Aging is hard to accept, but I must. I see my wrinkles
      In the mirror, and I smile because I wear them well. I'm still me!
     No one stays young forever. I am but a flower no longer blooming 
         As beautifully in springtime, but c'est la vie. I'm still thriving!   

           Youthful folks may deride and dismiss me as over the hill...
            A Phoenix with clipped wings, thrashing about the ashes
          Sucking me in like quicksand, but I'm still alive and kicking
     Look how far I've made it! I have something they envy---wisdom!



Submitted for...
Strand Select 2 Any Form,Any Theme Poetry Contest(Winner: 1st Place)
Sponsored by Brian Strand 
Date: 01/01/2019

A Contest On Aging Poetry Contest (Winner: 2nd Place)
Sponsored by: Emile Pinet
Date written and posted: 06/02/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Roper Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 9:23 PM
Edward, congratulations on your win in Brian Strand’s contest. Hugs Eve
Ibeh Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 11:26 PM
Thanks again, Eve:-)
Roper Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 7:44 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's contest. Hugs Eve
Ibeh Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 3:57 PM
Thank you, Eve:-)
Chiri Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 1:19 PM
Congrats on your top win!;)
Ibeh Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 1:20 PM
Thank you so much, Brenda:-)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 7:27 AM
An amazing rendering Edward, about aging that we face, and my compliments on your 1st place win my friend~~FAVE~@wk
Ibeh Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 8:44 AM
Thanks so much for the congrats and fav, William:-) Happy new year!
Howey Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 12:23 AM
Congratulations on your highly deserved 2nd placing! I had actually placed top 3 in one of your own contests a few months ago and I was pleasantly surprised to see that you had entered this contest as well! Though I did not place in this contest, I am not discouraged at all! Again, congratulations! I do quite enjoy your work, sir!
Ibeh Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 5:54 AM
Thank you so much for the wonderful comments and visit, Jeffrey:-) Most appreciated.
Roper Avatar
June 26, 2019 at 3:44 PM
Wonderful poem on the process of growing old , Edward, congratulations on your win.
Ibeh Avatar
June 26, 2019 at 4:45 PM
Thank you so much, Eve:-)
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 26, 2019 at 1:31 PM
I can identify with so much of this brilliantly written poem Edward! Congratulations on your deserving second placement! : ) xxoo
Ibeh Avatar
June 26, 2019 at 3:15 PM
Thank you very much, Connie:-)
Pinet Avatar
June 26, 2019 at 12:58 PM
Congratulations Edward! Your poem has placed "Second" in my contest. It was a very competitive contest and therefore difficult to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
Ibeh Avatar
June 26, 2019 at 3:14 PM
Wow, I wasn't expecting to place so high! So honored. Thank very much, Emile:-) Most obliged
Sergi Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 8:18 AM
Your poem was so inspiring that I felt the need to enter. I wish you well in the contest!
Ibeh Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 5:28 PM
I'm glad my poem inspired you, Ralph:-) Good luck in the contest as well!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 2, 2019 at 6:31 PM
Yes, wisdom with age! Enjoyed the write!
Ibeh Avatar
June 2, 2019 at 11:52 PM
Thank you, Kim:-)
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