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ebony edges twilight blackens sketched shadows~ scarlet-stained sunset dusk dribbles dewdrops flower petals atrophied~ evening primrose, bloom pinwheel galaxies swirling stars orbit black holes~ bats shadow the night dawn pierces night's heart scarlet wounds bleed crimson light~ a hummingbird's hum day resurrected scurrying shadows scatter~ colors coalesce
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Date: 8/2/2020 4:59:00 AM
Congrats on your top win, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/2/2020 6:54:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/29/2020 4:32:00 PM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my haiku contest with this excellent write, a FAV for me and I love your image too _Constance
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/29/2020 4:42:00 PM
Thanks Constance, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/28/2020 11:52:00 AM
A gorgeous sunset you've painted here Emile. Congratulations on your top win my friend! :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/28/2020 12:27:00 PM
Thanks so much Aditi, I admire your skills with a pen my poetic friend, Emile.
Date: 7/27/2020 12:56:00 AM
Scarlet stained sunset~Beautiful imagery emile sir..:-) Congrats on your wonderful win.Keep inspiring. Warmest regards~Deepa:-)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/27/2020 6:44:00 AM
Thanks V, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/27/2020 12:11:00 AM
great write!! congrats on the win
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Date: 7/27/2020 6:43:00 AM
Thanks Joseph, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/26/2020 10:17:00 PM
Beautiful! congrats on your scarlet win.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/27/2020 6:43:00 AM
Thanks Jeanne, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/26/2020 10:09:00 PM
Great imagery Emile.. Congrats on your wonderful win..
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Date: 7/27/2020 6:43:00 AM
Thanks Jenish, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/26/2020 4:47:00 PM
absolute beauty, Emile!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/26/2020 6:34:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I'm always happy to hear from you my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/26/2020 3:13:00 PM
Wonderful imagery, Emile, congratulations on your win with these beautiful Haiku. Hugs Eve
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/26/2020 6:33:00 PM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/26/2020 2:58:00 PM
Yup I thought I’d see this at the top! Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/26/2020 6:33:00 PM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/26/2020 1:50:00 PM
gorgeous imagery and i love the alliteration Emile:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/26/2020 6:33:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/26/2020 11:11:00 AM
A three-liner with captivating imagery, Emile. Congratulations on your top win. Regards // paul
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Date: 7/26/2020 6:32:00 PM
Thanks Paul, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/26/2020 9:00:00 AM
Whoa, this is truly magical, Emile, for it visually stimulates the optic nerves on overdrive with an awe-inspiring view--FAVE--my friend -- Aloha~@William
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/26/2020 10:13:00 AM
Thanks William, it's always a pleasure to hear from you my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/25/2020 4:25:00 PM
Lovely haiku, Emile. Janice
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/25/2020 5:48:00 PM
Thanks Janice, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/23/2020 2:22:00 PM
I feel the beauty and pain of this one! Nicely done.
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Date: 7/23/2020 5:32:00 PM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/23/2020 1:45:00 PM
Beautiful and creative haiku, Emile! The photo resembles one shown on TV last night as the sun was setting after storms had moved through the area. I love this! A fave for me. Hugs, Carolyn
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/23/2020 2:05:00 PM
Thanks so much Carolyn, it's always a pleasure to hear from you my friend, Emile.
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