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ebony edges twilight blackens sketched shadows~ scarlet-stained sunset dusk dribbles dewdrops flower petals atrophied~ evening primrose, bloom pinwheel galaxies swirling stars orbit black holes~ bats shadow the night dawn pierces night's heart scarlet wounds bleed crimson light~ a hummingbird's hum day resurrected scurrying shadows scatter~ colors coalesce
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Gauthier Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 4:59 AM
Congrats on your top win, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 6:54 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 4:32 PM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my haiku contest with this excellent write, a FAV for me and I love your image too _Constance
Pinet Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 4:42 PM
Thanks Constance, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Mishra Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 11:52 AM
A gorgeous sunset you've painted here Emile. Congratulations on your top win my friend! :)
Pinet Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 12:27 PM
Thanks so much Aditi, I admire your skills with a pen my poetic friend, Emile.
Deepa Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 12:56 AM
Scarlet stained sunset~Beautiful imagery emile sir..:-) Congrats on your wonderful win.Keep inspiring. Warmest regards~Deepa:-)
Pinet Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 6:44 AM
Thanks V, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Soper Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 12:11 AM
great write!! congrats on the win
Pinet Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 6:43 AM
Thanks Joseph, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Mcgee Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 10:17 PM
Beautiful! congrats on your scarlet win.
Pinet Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 6:43 AM
Thanks Jeanne, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Somadas Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 10:09 PM
Great imagery Emile.. Congrats on your wonderful win..
Pinet Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 6:43 AM
Thanks Jenish, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 4:47 PM
absolute beauty, Emile!
Pinet Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 6:34 PM
Thanks Andrea, I'm always happy to hear from you my friend, Emile.
Roper Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 3:13 PM
Wonderful imagery, Emile, congratulations on your win with these beautiful Haiku. Hugs Eve
Pinet Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 6:33 PM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 2:58 PM
Yup I thought I’d see this at the top! Congratulations!
Pinet Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 6:33 PM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Allison Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 1:50 PM
gorgeous imagery and i love the alliteration Emile:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Pinet Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 6:33 PM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Callus Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 11:11 AM
A three-liner with captivating imagery, Emile. Congratulations on your top win. Regards // paul
Pinet Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 6:32 PM
Thanks Paul, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 9:00 AM
Whoa, this is truly magical, Emile, for it visually stimulates the optic nerves on overdrive with an awe-inspiring view--FAVE--my friend -- Aloha~@William
Pinet Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 10:13 AM
Thanks William, it's always a pleasure to hear from you my friend, Emile.
Canerdy Avatar
July 25, 2020 at 4:25 PM
Lovely haiku, Emile. Janice
Pinet Avatar
July 25, 2020 at 5:48 PM
Thanks Janice, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 2:22 PM
I feel the beauty and pain of this one! Nicely done.
Pinet Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 5:32 PM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Devonshire Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 1:45 PM
Beautiful and creative haiku, Emile! The photo resembles one shown on TV last night as the sun was setting after storms had moved through the area. I love this! A fave for me. Hugs, Carolyn
Pinet Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 2:05 PM
Thanks so much Carolyn, it's always a pleasure to hear from you my friend, Emile.
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