Like a Lioness Stalking

My cat sat on the window seat
Tail thumping with a rhythmic beat
Like a lioness stalking meat
A bird to eat        A bird to eat

Oh, no you don't, my sweet kitty
That raven is much too gritty
You'd be hurt. Oh, what a pity!
You're too pretty    You're too pretty

I'll give you a treat, if you wish
With the flavor of tuna fish
I'm certain you'll find it delish
It's in your dish    It's in your dish

She ran, making her 'meow' sound
Straight for the kitchen, she was bound
With lightning speed of a greyhound
Her cat food downed   Her cat food downed

I found her later, sound asleep
In peaceful dreams, she slept so deep
or she'd have heard the fledgling's "peep"
Of a bird's cheep    Of a bird's cheep



August 8, 2022
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Mccann Avatar
September 20, 2022 at 4:30 PM
That "bird to eat, bird to eat" is brilliant! How sad I was to find a beautiful blue wren! But, try to explain that to Sammy! Elizabeth
Clark Avatar
September 11, 2022 at 11:15 AM
Hi Jenna, I love your writing! This one is special because it sounds just like one of my cats. She is a hunter and it doesn't make me happy but I know she's just doing what cats do. I've wrote several poems about cats and kittens.
La France Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 3:45 PM
Jenna, beautiful poem, and congratulations on your win in the contest, blessings ~Constance
Logan Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 2:02 PM
Thanks, Constance. Glad you liked it.
Kauffman Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 9:52 AM
Congratulations on your win Jenna. Love the repeats in the last line of each stanza - so lyrical. It really reinforces the rhythm of each stanza. All the best.
Logan Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 2:02 PM
Thank you so much, Sam.
Alex Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 9:11 AM
Great comparison with a beautiful simile. A beautifully said cat story. Congratulations!
Logan Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 11:38 AM
Thank you very sincerely, Chris.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 1:52 PM
Congratulations on your win. A "Creative" write. Yes, she needs a treat or maybe two. Have a blessed day writing away...............
Logan Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 11:38 AM
Thank you for your vigilant reading of my poetry, Paula. I appreciate it very much.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 2:16 PM
This delightful poem is going into my Faves Jenna. Congratulations on your high placement. Blessings xxoo
Logan Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 7:23 AM
Oh, thanks so much for faving and enjoying my kitty tale, Connie.
Fowler Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 10:37 AM
I so love this Jenna. A fav for me. :) Congratulations on your win! Linda
Logan Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 7:23 AM
Thanks for the kind thoughts and fave, Linda.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 9:30 AM
A refined piece of work and captive flow, Jenna, a wonderful Fave! Thanks for your participation and my compliments on your high placement in my contest, Aloha~William
Logan Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 7:22 AM
Thanks, William. I'm glad you liked it enough to honor with a placement.
Cunningham Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 8:46 AM
I love to watch their antics but even better love to see the bird escape. Hope you had a lovely time with the family. I was at a wedding yesterday, good time had by all. Tom
Logan Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 9:13 AM
I was just about to send you mail because I hadn't seen you here. Family time over a long weekend was wonderful, but never long enough. Thanks for asking, Tom.
Hankins Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 7:47 AM
Jenna, like your poem. This is a form which I have not been familiar with until I've noticed you using it. Very poetic, I might add. I need to try it.
Logan Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 3:24 PM
Thanks, Milt. Sorry it took so long to respond. Last day of having family in town. It's a fun form and I think you'd do well with it.
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