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Like a Lioness Stalking

My cat sat on the window seat Tail thumping with a rhythmic beat Like a lioness stalking meat A bird to eat A bird to eat Oh, no you don't, my sweet kitty That raven is much too gritty You'd be hurt. Oh, what a pity! You're too pretty You're too pretty I'll give you a treat, if you wish With the flavor of tuna fish I'm certain you'll find it delish It's in your dish It's in your dish She ran, making her 'meow' sound Straight for the kitchen, she was bound With lightning speed of a greyhound Her cat food downed Her cat food downed I found her later, sound asleep In peaceful dreams, she slept so deep or she'd have heard the fledgling's "peep" Of a bird's cheep Of a bird's cheep August 8, 2022 Simile Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Hilo Poet Monotetra Form

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Date: 9/20/2022 4:30:00 PM
That "bird to eat, bird to eat" is brilliant! How sad I was to find a beautiful blue wren! But, try to explain that to Sammy! Elizabeth
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Date: 9/11/2022 11:15:00 AM
Hi Jenna, I love your writing! This one is special because it sounds just like one of my cats. She is a hunter and it doesn't make me happy but I know she's just doing what cats do. I've wrote several poems about cats and kittens.
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Date: 8/16/2022 3:45:00 PM
Jenna, beautiful poem, and congratulations on your win in the contest, blessings ~Constance
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/17/2022 2:02:00 PM
Thanks, Constance. Glad you liked it.
Date: 8/16/2022 9:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Jenna. Love the repeats in the last line of each stanza - so lyrical. It really reinforces the rhythm of each stanza. All the best.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/17/2022 2:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sam.
Date: 8/15/2022 9:11:00 AM
Great comparison with a beautiful simile. A beautifully said cat story. Congratulations!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/15/2022 11:38:00 AM
Thank you very sincerely, Chris.
Date: 8/14/2022 1:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A "Creative" write. Yes, she needs a treat or maybe two. Have a blessed day writing away...............
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/15/2022 11:38:00 AM
Thank you for your vigilant reading of my poetry, Paula. I appreciate it very much.
Date: 8/13/2022 2:16:00 PM
This delightful poem is going into my Faves Jenna. Congratulations on your high placement. Blessings xxoo
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/14/2022 7:23:00 AM
Oh, thanks so much for faving and enjoying my kitty tale, Connie.
Date: 8/13/2022 10:37:00 AM
I so love this Jenna. A fav for me. :) Congratulations on your win! Linda
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/14/2022 7:23:00 AM
Thanks for the kind thoughts and fave, Linda.
Date: 8/13/2022 9:30:00 AM
A refined piece of work and captive flow, Jenna, a wonderful Fave! Thanks for your participation and my compliments on your high placement in my contest, Aloha~William
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/14/2022 7:22:00 AM
Thanks, William. I'm glad you liked it enough to honor with a placement.
Date: 8/9/2022 8:46:00 AM
I love to watch their antics but even better love to see the bird escape. Hope you had a lovely time with the family. I was at a wedding yesterday, good time had by all. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/9/2022 9:13:00 AM
I was just about to send you mail because I hadn't seen you here. Family time over a long weekend was wonderful, but never long enough. Thanks for asking, Tom.
Date: 8/8/2022 7:47:00 AM
Jenna, like your poem. This is a form which I have not been familiar with until I've noticed you using it. Very poetic, I might add. I need to try it.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/8/2022 3:24:00 PM
Thanks, Milt. Sorry it took so long to respond. Last day of having family in town. It's a fun form and I think you'd do well with it.

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