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Falls Magical Splendor

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Golden light appears in tier after tier As if Mother Nature were on a spree Fall's magical splendor each passing year Transforming the colors of every tree Colors she chooses are all warmer hues Flaxen yellow, marmalades and pure reds Old russet and bright chartreuse to confuse Over dark forest floors boldly she spreads Is it winter coming she would deter? His icy breath blusters as winds blow cold As in years before — Autumn must demur Silently wearing her golden blindfold Like drifting leaves that fall by the roadway We'll return to life some wonderful day

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/4/2024 4:52:00 AM

Dear Suzanne, Your poem, beautifully captures the essence of autumn's enchanting transformation. The word pictures and rhythmic flow immersed me in the splendor of nature's spectacle. You created a scene of warmth and wonder amid the changing seasons, showing the cyclical beauty of life. I really appreciate the golden moments that adorn our journey. Blessings, Daniel

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 2/4/2024 5:58:00 PM

Hi Daniel: Thank you for your wonderful comment. It really made my day. It is nice to meet you and hope to read more of your philosophical works, SuZ

Carlene Juju The Dragon

Date: 2/3/2024 10:47:00 AM

Beautifully Tranquil to my Soul...Thank you for sharing your creativity

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 2/3/2024 5:22:00 PM

Hi Carlene: Thanks so much for your lovely comment and visit, Welcome to Poetrysoup. Check out the contests if you need inspiration. Have fun. SuZ

matthew adams

Date: 1/28/2024 5:46:00 PM

What a description of fall in every way! Thanks for sharing this!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/29/2024 4:58:00 PM

Thanks Matthew. Thanks for reading and commenting. Happy writing . SuZ

Valsa George

Date: 1/25/2024 7:59:00 PM

Beautiful sonnet on the magic Autumn brings ! This season of colors is more adored by men than all other seasons ! Your images are so lovely ! This poem is indeed a real visual treat !

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/27/2024 4:08:00 PM

Thanks Valsa: Yes not only is it visually beautiful but symbolically meaningful. Thanks for your lovely comment. SuZ

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/29/2023 8:02:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on being number 6 in the "100 Best New Poems" list for Soup with your wonderful write. Have a great/wonderful day/2024 writing away.................

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/30/2023 2:17:00 PM

thanks Paula. That is a real thrill and thanks your Congratulations.SuZ

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2023 8:50:00 PM

Some really nice use of personification for fall and winter. Lovely.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/27/2023 5:55:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by Andrea. It was a nice surprise to see it in the Top 100 today.

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 12/20/2023 9:59:00 AM

Such a brilliant poetry on the golden fall! Loved the the last line so much!!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/22/2023 1:36:00 PM

Thanks Smita: I appreciate your lovely comment. SuZ

Christina Bowring

Date: 12/18/2023 3:19:00 PM

This is stunning dear Suz. What a beautiful so visually enhancing sonnet you have masterfully created. So many gorgeous lines. This form suits you so well - and it’s only your second. Amazing! I love how descriptive it is full of autumnal delights. Many congratulations on your very worthy placement. I’m so impressed! Loved it. Very inspiring. Hugs and smiles to you for a magical Christmas xx :):)

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/19/2023 4:37:00 AM

So sweet of you, Christina. Your thoughtful comment has brightened my day. Wishing you a joyful holiday season. Hugs, SuZ

Hilo Poet

Date: 12/17/2023 7:42:00 PM

An evocative rendition, Suzanne. A wondrous trailing of continuity, that garnered a righteous smile, thank you. My compliments on your honorable placement in Emile's contest. Naturally, a Fave--sometimes there's a need to smile often, my friend. Aloha, William

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/19/2023 4:34:00 AM

Your thoughtful comment has left me with a joyful feeling of aloha this morning, William. So happy my Autumn musings could entertain you. SuZ

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/17/2023 3:15:00 PM

A captivatingly lovely poem SuZ. I adore the final two lines. This poem is a fave. :)

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/17/2023 3:36:00 PM

Thanks Evelyn….for your visit and lovely comment and for the FAV. Too. Appreciate you. SuZ

Karen Jones

Date: 12/16/2023 2:27:00 PM

Melodic and gentle rhymes fall like leaves in this masterpiece. Congratulations on a trophy win.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/16/2023 6:02:00 PM

Thank you Karen…. for your lovely comment and for reading and sending Congrats. Most appreciated. SuZ

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 12/16/2023 7:34:00 AM

Stunning imagery SuZ. Your choice of picture fits perfectly with your carefully chosen words. Just beautiful! Congratulations! :)

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/16/2023 8:05:00 AM

So glad you enjoyed, Linda: Fall seems to be my Muse’s favorite subject……Hope you have a lovely Christmas and all the best in 2024. Hugs. SuZ

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/16/2023 5:23:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, Suz, your spirit flows in your words in this wonderful poem. Congratulations on your win. May you have a Merry Christmas & a Happy New Year. Hugs my friend.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/16/2023 8:03:00 AM

Thankyou Dear Sotto I appreciate your kind words and friendly visit. Blessings for Christmas and the New Year, Hugs, SuZ

Terry Miller

Date: 12/16/2023 3:26:00 AM

A superb sonnet beautiful colors; congratulations

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/16/2023 4:59:00 AM

I appreciate your visit and kind comment, Terry. Best wishes for Christmas and a wonderful new year. SuZ

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/15/2023 10:45:00 PM

A beautiful sonnet Suz, Sadly it's over here now and all the leaves have gone. Double congratulations to you on your 53rd wedding anniversary and your win in Emile's contest. Hope you have a wonderful Christmas and a happy new year. Tom

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/16/2023 4:57:00 AM

Thanks so much,Tom for your double congratulations. I hope your Christmas and New Year bring the very best. SuZ

Bill Baker

Date: 12/15/2023 4:24:00 PM

Bravo, SuZ, a beautiful end of Fall sonnet, my favorite form of poetry. Thanks for the early present, my friend. Have a pleasant weekend, Bill I see just below congratulations are in order for your high finish in the contest! Bravo!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/15/2023 6:20:00 PM

Hi Bill: Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts on my Autumn sonnet….my favorite season you know. Celebrated our 53rd Wedding Anniversary today. Cheers. SuZ

Silent One

Date: 12/15/2023 1:52:00 PM

I knew this wonderful sonnet would do well. Congratulations on your placement in Emiles contest.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/15/2023 6:14:00 PM

Thanks for your wonderful comment, SO. Being ranked near you is a great compliment. SuZ

Emile Pinet

Date: 12/15/2023 10:16:00 AM

Congratulations Suzanne! Your Autumn poem "Falls Magical Splendor," has placed "Second" in my contest. Your poem stood out with your superb use of warmer hues. Very well done my friend.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/15/2023 1:43:00 PM

Thank you Emile for my placement. This is only the second sonnet I have written so far. Such an honor. SuZ

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/15/2023 6:58:00 AM

It really is a magical time of year. This is beautifully expressed. You painted pretty images on my mind.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/15/2023 8:47:00 AM

So nice to see you, Rick, Autumn seems like a dream away since we came South for winter. Thanks for your wonderful comment. SuZ

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/14/2023 9:27:00 PM

Dear Suzanne, this is such a magical piece that explores the enriched beauty of Autumn in the most impeccable ways that truly enchant the heart and soul! I am spellbound by the beautiful cadence with which your words flow in this sonnet.. Just so majestic and full of splendor.. "Flaxen yellow, marmalades and pure reds,Old russet and bright chartreuse to confuse" This gives me the feeling of reading a whimsical fairytale.. Wow, a fav for me truly, love this :)

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/15/2023 6:12:00 PM

Thank you dear Hiya, for your wonderful comment and for the fav. Have a wonderful Christmas and all the best in 2024. Hugs, SuZ

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/12/2023 12:19:00 PM

SuZ, this is as delicate and colorful as a fall forest of brilliant leaves! Your use of color is elegant. I so enjoyed it. Creative fresh rhymes. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/14/2023 2:58:00 PM

Hi Sam: Thanks for your wonderful comment. Wishing you a Merry Christmas and a Happy 2024, SuZ

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/7/2023 1:07:00 PM

wonderfully rhymed, this lovely autumnal poem!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/7/2023 1:41:00 PM

That is high praise coming from you, Andrea. Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. We go back so many years. Luv, SuZ

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/7/2023 8:48:00 AM

This is beautiful. I enjoyed reading this today! :)

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/7/2023 1:39:00 PM

I am so happy you are back on the Soup Heidi and thanks for taking time to read and comment. I am so glad your pain is managed now. Bless you sweet friend. SuZ

Ink Empress

Date: 12/7/2023 8:33:00 AM

This is so beautiful and i felt like i can see through your words, autumn and the colors that paint the skies and trees, creating a dreamy ambience. I especially love the opening and also the second stanza where you’ve gone in detail , splashing colors in subtle strokes so artistically. Pleasure reading this. Definitely a fave. Sending you light always

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/7/2023 1:38:00 PM

Dear Empress…I am so blessed to have a friend like you with kind and encouraging words that reflect back the intentions I meant for my poems. Thank for making this one of your FAVs. You bring me light and inspiration. SuZ

Silent One

Date: 12/7/2023 8:15:00 AM

Wow beautiful splendid imagery, is this for the contest by Emile? A fave for me! Loved it.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/7/2023 1:33:00 PM

Thanks so much, SO Yes I must admit Emile’s prompt gave me the encouragement to try a Sonnet. Thanks for the FAV.