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My Restless Spirit

My sorrowful spirit rose high above the rainbow,
     higher yet, until it reached the snowy peaks
        of the ragged mountain.  
It was cold there,
            though above the severe sun blazed hard.

Here and there rivulets tumbled roughly
     down the mountainsides, 
         and occasionally 
meet to form a river 
       that cascaded downwards
             towards the high cliff beneath the hills.

The icy waters fell towards the crags,
     forming a waterfall 
          of freshwater, producing
a constant melody 
           as the waters hit the plain,
                forming a delightful and narrow lake.

Birds above twittered delightfully,
       a serene sight and sound that pleased my sad spirit.  
Tall verdant pines exuded delightful fragrance.
          How I wish I could stay there forever.   
     But my tired body beckoned
and my spirit returned to my lonesome solitary bed.

Copyright © Victor Buhagiar | Year Posted 2024

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Date: 7/26/2024 1:35:00 PM

- A wonderful poem that touches a heartstring, Victor :) - hugs
Date: 7/25/2024 4:53:00 PM

Love walking through the imagery you created, but only a dream. Dream meanings some are escaping situations, performance in life, or wishing transition. Enjoyed reading. Hugs my friend
Date: 7/25/2024 2:23:00 PM

Stunning imagery, icy waters fell from the crags, delightfully done, Victor! I get a feeling we will do it again "Somewhere" xhugs
Date: 7/25/2024 6:33:00 AM

A pleasant walk that enterained my eyes of your undeniable choice being uniquely singular in its conveyance my friend.
Date: 7/25/2024 5:47:00 AM

Very beautiful and touching, Victor:)
Date: 7/24/2024 9:16:00 PM

I miss so many forever places. This poem takes me back to my hiking years. It has a calmness with interest of nature.
Date: 7/24/2024 8:43:00 PM

Natural tranquility, beauty and grace are conveyed through the vividness of these lovely lines. With your skillful writing, one is transported from a wide awake busy scene, to a bed and a dream. :)
Date: 7/24/2024 8:19:00 PM

Lovely spirit dream that took me to the heights of mountain peaks and down into the lowland valleys…enjoyed this one, Victor! :)
Date: 7/24/2024 6:08:00 PM

A journey to lofty peaks and a melancholy return, Very nicely penned
Date: 7/24/2024 12:40:00 PM

I see the falls i hear the birds, the way youv painted imagery throughout is so picturesque and so captivating, taking us readers on a journey! What a brilliant and beautiful free verse! I love every word in this so well delivered as always dear victor. There are those certain places we wish we could stay forever! Best wishes. Pleasure reading you. Sending you light alwayss
Date: 7/24/2024 11:13:00 AM

A very nostalgic piece- loved the rivulets running down the mountains image :)
Date: 7/24/2024 9:04:00 AM

This is captivating with wonderful imagery and a peaceful energy! I too agree it will do well in the contest! Best wishes Victor!
Date: 7/24/2024 8:16:00 AM

Dear Victor, Well penned that we can go to the mountain top, but we eventually have to come back to the reality of everyday living. I am always reminded that our God is faithful, and one day we will not return to our current state but have a life that he prepares for us. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 7/24/2024 6:58:00 AM

Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Sometimes we search and search when what we are looking for is right under our nose. Sara K
Date: 7/24/2024 5:51:00 AM

Always emotive, imaginative and impeccable imagery! Hugs
Date: 7/24/2024 5:45:00 AM

Ahhh those amazing highs. This would have been good for the acme contest. Sadly, as you point out, they don't last long
Date: 7/24/2024 1:44:00 AM

It's amazing where our mind and dreams takes us Victor and with your words you take the reader on an amazing journey. Tom
Date: 7/24/2024 1:37:00 AM

so beautiful poetry, to marvel about mountains and landscapes, the ending suggest you were dreaming, and all reality vanish, such a great poem to share, thanks poet
Date: 7/24/2024 1:30:00 AM

Your imagery is so beautiful Victor , made me think of my visits to Norway - amazing how a trip out can raise one's spirits only for them to plummet like a waterfall when tired and alone:-) hugs jan xx Sending love and hugs to you and the family

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