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Zephyr's Silky Tendrils Premiere Contest Winner

Curling around the house, the breeze was unfurling, moving dead leaves in its twirling fingers, apparently satisfied with whirling The dance lured the lovers to come out and romance under the willow's shadowed trance, soft whispers of the breeze inspired their love's warm glance Showers gently fall on them, even as flowers bloom open with piquant powers, they laugh and enjoy love's passionate few sweet hours The soft zephyr played with trees in the woods and croft, with laughter ringing, it does waft mingling with mild murmurs of love in skies aloft The breeze lingers to look at the lovebirds and tease them with silky tendrils that squeeze, meandering with ease, watching o'er them 'mid trees. 05.28.2021
Form: "Heptastich" (Syllable count: 2.4.6.8.6.4.2 with rhyme scheme: abaacda) For Constance La France's ""Z" contest: new or old"

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Date: 12/11/2021 3:00:00 PM
Jo, congratulations on your Third Place win in my "Z" Contest, wonderful poem ~ love and serenity _ Constance
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Date: 12/10/2021 11:19:00 AM
Absolutely delightful Jo! So wonderfully crafted with delightful rhymes that carry out your theme. I really enjoyed this creative gem. Congratulations on your win. Well deserved. Sending blessings of soft zephyrs.
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Date: 12/8/2021 8:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. This poem is great. I "Enjoyed" it. Have a great/blessed ....................
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Date: 6/12/2021 1:28:00 PM
Your words flow gracefully and lyrically, enhancing the romantic element of your poem! Jo, congrats on your well deserved 1st place win with this beautiful poem! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 6/9/2021 8:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Jo! Love the relationship between your lovers and the frisky zephyr! Blessings to you.
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Date: 6/9/2021 7:11:00 AM
Congrats. This is wonderful and wonderous. I Love it. God bless you with love, Gina
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Date: 6/9/2021 3:27:00 AM
A Beautiful Poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/9/2021 1:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your top spot win, Jo. It's romantic bliss.
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Date: 6/9/2021 1:32:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Delightful and delighting from the start til the end. God bless you.
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Date: 6/8/2021 11:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your trophy win. Well deserved. It is beautiful and rhymes as well. A masterpiece.
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Date: 6/8/2021 11:05:00 PM
Sublime! Congrats on your well deserved top win, Jo!
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Date: 6/8/2021 11:00:00 PM
Needless to say, Jo, yours is without question, a skillfully mastered gem, and Fave my friend, my compliments on your worthy trophy win, Aloha!
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Date: 5/29/2021 7:26:00 AM
WoW! Jo, You penned a good entry for the contest theme. You made it look easy. It had a nice rhythm and flow. I found it to be very romantic. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/28/2021 9:16:00 AM
I believe William will love this! Love the first verse followed by the Lovers. Nice, Jo!
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Date: 5/28/2021 8:50:00 AM
So beautiful and so nicely formed, these lovely diamonds. Thanks for sharing and best wishes for William's contest, Jo.
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Date: 5/28/2021 5:46:00 AM
This is excellent. Smoothly written and very nice Jo :)
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Date: 5/28/2021 5:35:00 AM
Outstanding verses which like precious poetic stones parade before the reader's eyes. Good luck dearest, Jo. Hugs xxx
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Date: 5/28/2021 5:27:00 AM
Hi Jo, so nice to hear from you. yes all is well this rainy day lol, Your poem, " every stitch in right place" is easy on the eyes and heart. Thank you for stopping by , Hugs
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Date: 5/28/2021 4:50:00 AM
Beautiful poetry--lovely details in this hard to execute form.
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Date: 5/28/2021 4:23:00 AM
Superb write, Jo! Tease of the breeze
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Date: 5/28/2021 3:53:00 AM
This left me open mouthed. Great romance and beautiful verse. Best for a win.
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Date: 5/28/2021 2:30:00 AM
Amazing!!! Stunning imagery. Enjoyed reading it. Reads like a winner...
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