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Mission statement: I don’t use AI to generate or even tweak my poetry, because I am a better poet than it.

Poetry has been my passion since my retirement from an accountancy based career a dozen years ago. I currently live in South Africa and this rainbow nation has inspired many of my poems. I also have British nationality and embrace their grammar and spelling, but I read widely and am not fazed by strict grammar rules: A pavement/sidewalk; glasses/eyeglasses; judgement/judgment, et cetera; they are one and the same to me when I read poetry. To date, I have self-published a number of books, including the poetry anthology by international poets, © Time, 2014 ISBN 978-0-620-60578-6, and have been cited in many international publications, both poetry journals, as well as in scholarly handbooks. Some of my short stories have been published in international electronic publications, and one of my novellas had been short-listed for an Afrikaans SA publication.

I serve on the Board of Advisers, of Taleemi Baithak.

I have a number of poetic forms to my credit, notably, Suzette Prime, 2012 (listed here on PoetrySoup), as well as Suzette sonnet (Suznet), 2023, Suzette Swan Arc, 2025.

My most recent books which include examples of my poetry as well as notes regarding poetry - available directly from me:

  1. © The Eutony of Words, 2018 ISBN 978-0-6399382-0-2
  2. © Docendo discimus, 2021 (Revised 2023) ISBN 978-0-620-95432-7
  3. © Flight of Thoughts, 2023 ISBN 978-0-6397-8880-7
  4. © Downtown - Poetic Devices, 2023 ISBN 978-0-7961-1968-1
  5.  © Rocking Poetry, 2033 ISBN 978-0-7961-2824-9
  6. NEW: moonwake - Suzette Prime poetry, ISBN 978-1-0370-1836-7(PDF). It is a collection of 61 Suzette Prime poetry spanning from 2012 (when I designed the poetic form), up till now.

FIRST DRAFT - Wrapping it up

Blog Posted:1/31/2024 12:20:00 AM

The contest descriptions on PoetrySoup often include special criteria and writing tips, and perhaps even a handy link, for the poetic form featured and usually stipulate a particular topic and/or genre, which is each sponsor’s right to do. The contest might also specify certain perimeters, for example, in my current contest I stipulate that the entries must not exceed 14 lines.

 

Quote from my current contest First Draft

Judging criteria: An engaging content.

It will be taken into account that it is not the final product but please conform to correct grammar and spelling. Punctuation and first-word capitalisation are the prerogatives of the poet.

Under 'Resources' there is a free spellchecker, and listed separately is the Grammar Check here on PoetrySoup.

Just for fun, and I can relate as I have made some of the same mistakes over the years: 

LANGUAGE, PER SE (poetrysoup.com)

The penultimate line from the above tongue-in-cheek poem:

Its language, par say, that bridges the gap’ [It must read: It’s …]

(BTW it should be ‘per se’ – this deliberate error is just one of many I lampoon in that poem.)

 

ITS and IT’S + the apostrophe 

I have included the definition of the difference between ITS and IT’S in some of my previous contest descriptions and blogs last year, but some contestants still get it wrong. It is something that I also have to concentrate on when writing, but luckily my grammar app picks it up if I should forget. (FREE app that works on most devices: Grammarly.com).

ITS is a determiner. An easy way to remember it is that it means that it determines who/what it belongs to. Example: The sun shines brightly and ITS light is reflected in the pool.

IT’S is a contraction. In other words, it is a combination of two words, namely, IT and IS. Example: The bicycle is padlocked to a pole and IT’S making it difficult for people to nick it.

From these examples, one could easily see that ‘The sun shines brightly and IT’S (IT IS) light is reflected in the pool’ would be incorrect. As would ‘The bicycle is padlocked to a pole and ITS (its what/belonging to what) making it difficult for people to nick it.’

 

The Oxford comma: I can truly say that I don’t care either way. Unless my app, Grammarly.com, picks it up when I post text anywhere on the Internet, including my e-mails, I would often be none the wiser. For this contest, it is not an issue, but as illustrated in the picture below, the comma would be required to make sense of a sentence.

 

Further, quote from my current contest

Warts and all: For example, incorrect syllable counts per the poetic form requirement (e.g. any syllabic verse) …

[Suzette Prime is only one of the many syllabic verses which to choose from.]

diesel fried chicken, by Suzette Richards - image generated 31 January 2024

 

As part of the design of a poetic form

During my Metaphorical Realism in Suzette Prime contest last year the use of the comma came into question. As the design of the poetic form Suzette Prime calls for NO punctuation to be used, this in practice might pose a problem. Some poets had pointed out that a line in their poem did not make sense if the comma was left out midverse/line. To confirm: no punctuation is to be used in this poetic form as the line breaks serve this purpose. Therefore, the particular line(s) would have had a natural line break indicated, as would have other punctuation usually required in normal text. Please see the definition of Suzette Prime under Types of Poems here on PoetrySoup. (BTW I have tried to have the text ‘cleaned up’ – it reads like a burned broth instead of a (Poetry)soup. I apologise for this.) The chief criteria for the Suzette Prime is that the syllables in each line must add up to a prime number and it must contain a philosophical statement. Now is the time to dust off those Suzette Prime poems that did not gel as a line or two had 9 syllables per line (9 is not a prime number and your poem would have been rejected in the aforementioned contest, but it would fit the bill for the current contest, First Draft).

 

It is a common request by sponsors of poetry contests (here and elsewhere) that poets should check the grammar and spelling of the poems before submitting their entries – as always, both American and British grammar and spelling are acceptable in my contests. For example: 'license' is spelled with an 's' in the USA, but in British English they differentiate between 'license' and 'licence' depending on the context in which it is used. Some contests might be a tad more challenging than others, but that is perhaps a fun way to learn new poetic forms and often poetic devices, or merely use it as a writing prompt. There are many contests to choose from on the Internet - something for everyone.

As I have said before: I have learned as much from the contestants as from other resources. I hope that the above has given you some ideas as to what to submit for my latest contest, as well as putting your mind at ease insofar as relaxing the design criteria of the poetic forms are concerned. After all, that is what First Draft is all about: warts and all, but with correct grammar and spelling.

You are welcome to pose questions on the topic of my contest, First Draft, but I, respectfully, ask that it is not based on mere semantics. Thank you.

Happy quills!                                                                                  

Suzette

 

GLOSSARY

A poetic form is a type of poem consisting of stanza/verse per set rules and presented in a prescribed format. A Format is the arrangement of things. Genre donates the poem’s style, the main categories being objective and subjective.

Subject is broader than a topic in scope. The subject is an idea, problem, situation, etc. that you discuss or write about. A topic is a particular subject that you discuss or write about.

 

*POSTSCRIPT

A WILD IRIS JUXTAPOSED WITH A WILD HORSES.

A wild iris juxtaposed with a wild horses.

A wild iris juxtaposed with a wild horses.

A wild iris juxtaposed with a [error] wild horses. (Error picked up when in normal script.]

This is the reason why many contest sponsors here and elsewhere stipulate “no fancy fonts”.  Publishers might even go so far as to instruct you NOT to use superscript or italicise words in your text as their printing programme and font of choice do not support these. In the case of the latter example, they would ask you to use an asterisk before and after the script that you intend to italicise, something you might have noticed in texts found in the wild.

Quote from my current contest First Draft

'The capitalisation of the first letters here is the choice of the sponsor and you may elect your own style of writing the title of your poem.'

The capitalisation of the titles of poems/short stories, etc, submissions might even automatically be changed by some sites where you post your work, to be in accordance with international Rules for Capitalization in Titles of Articles, and to create uniformity. 

Link: Common Title Capitalization Rules | YourDictionary



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My Past Blog Posts

 
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Date Posted: 5/25/2025 6:00:00 AM
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Date Posted: 5/14/2025 11:20:00 PM
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Date Posted: 5/7/2025 12:54:00 PM
Free Verse – How Free is It?
Date Posted: 4/26/2025 11:37:00 PM
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Date Posted: 4/20/2025 2:54:00 AM
Memento on the Moon
Date Posted: 4/9/2025 12:26:00 AM
Tariffs on Penguins Limerick
Date Posted: 4/4/2025 7:02:00 AM
Light or Shadows
Date Posted: 3/25/2025 1:55:00 PM
Blood Moon Eclipse - Light or Shadows
Date Posted: 3/11/2025 12:46:00 AM
A Timely Intervention
Date Posted: 3/2/2025 12:42:00 PM
On a more serious note
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Weekend Wacky Limericks
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Saints and poets maybe – The Bride Trilogy challenge
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Poison - an analogy
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Be Happy and Merry
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Which is worse - AI or Plagiarism?
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Bring in the Clowns
Date Posted: 12/2/2024 12:04:00 AM
Cyber bullying
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Future Trends in Poetry
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Jack and Jill
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Counterintuitive versus Juxtaposition
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My Recent Poems

Date PostedPoemTitleFormCategories
5/26/2025 weeding the herb garden - dadaku Haikunature,
5/26/2025 flower petals - dadaku Haikuanalogy,nature,
5/24/2025 In the Autumn of Life Otheranalogy,
5/19/2025 Excire Otherintrospection,
5/17/2025 Fire Othernature,
5/16/2025 Air Othernature,
5/15/2025 Earth Othernature,
5/14/2025 Water Othernature,
5/7/2025 Liquescent Marmoris Otherfamily,introspection,
5/7/2025 No Way Out Otherintrospection,surreal,
5/3/2025 Starlight Eyes Otheranalogy,introspection,per
4/30/2025 Purple - An Analogy for Deception Suzette Primeanalogy,
4/27/2025 Cultural Mores Mirror Free verseintrospection,
4/23/2025 Oenomel Free verseanalogy,childhood,mother,
4/17/2025 Left Unspoken Quatrainmom,
3/24/2025 Memento on the Moon Alexandrineanalogy,introspection,
3/11/2025 In a Pickle Free verseanalogy,satire,
3/10/2025 Light and Shadows Suzette Primeanalogy,philosophy,
3/9/2025 Thinking about Aladdin Sane Free verseanalogy,
3/6/2025 raven Haikunature,symbolism,
3/1/2025 Kiss the Ring Free versesatire,
2/26/2025 Giving a Cat a Pill Limerickcat,humorous,
2/22/2025 A Fly on the Wall Free versepolitical,satire,
2/21/2025 A Vine in Winter Free verseanalogy,winter,
2/21/2025 broken blood moon Haikuanalogy,moon,nature,
2/16/2025 The Soldier’s Covenant Prose Poetrybaby,war,
2/13/2025 Undergrowth with Two Figures - Van Gogh Free verseanalogy,
2/11/2025 A Blues Sonnet for Jan Sonnetafrica,conflict,endurance
2/7/2025 The Bride's Dreams Prose Poetrydream,love,
2/7/2025 The Bride Prose Poetryfeelings,flower,sunset,
1/22/2025 The Reluctant Bride Prose Poetrylost love,
1/10/2025 humanity Suzette Primephilosophy,science,
12/22/2024 A Woman's Longing Otherlonging,love,water,woman,
12/19/2024 Where Tides once Gossiped Sonnetemotions,imagery,inspirat
12/14/2024 Dandelion Suns to Moons Sonnetflower,life,metaphor,natu
12/2/2024 Aging rocks Crystallineage,
11/27/2024 Divine Madness Sonnetreligion,
11/26/2024 fierce sun Tankaintrospection,nature,summ
11/15/2024 The Event Horizon Verselife,memory,
11/11/2024 Less is More Crystallinephilosophy,
11/9/2024 Jolted by Twilight Suzette Primenature,
11/5/2024 as long as - Monokunature,
10/31/2024 Burning Love Letters Free verselost love,nostalgia,
10/23/2024 yellow light Haikuanimal,spring,
10/21/2024 twilight silence Tankanature,
10/20/2024 Swans Pleiadesbird,
10/18/2024 wAlls In dAlI Ekphrasisart,philosophy,
10/15/2024 Here we go again Limericksatire,
10/15/2024 Haunted Cemetery Rhymehalloween,humorous,
10/12/2024 My Truths Verseliterature,myth,relations
10/10/2024 BALLAD OF ELEANOR RIGBY Balladmusic,
10/8/2024 Life is a garden Suzette Primeanalogy,birth,death,flowe
10/2/2024 Avarice Enclosed Rhymeanalogy,
9/28/2024 Stranded in Peace Quatrainnature,
9/26/2024 Insidious AI Concreteintegrity,poems,poetry,po
9/13/2024 Pie-in-the-sky Versesatire,
9/3/2024 The Scent of Words in the Air Shapeinspiration,poetry,
8/15/2024 The Co-dependent Pantoumaddiction,
7/25/2024 a loveliness Senryulanguage,nature,
7/10/2024 Mother said --- Versehumorous,mother,
7/8/2024 The Earth from a Distance Sonnetnostalgia,
7/5/2024 Lingering Dusk Free verseallegory,analogy,flower,n
6/14/2024 A Child of Light Otherdaughter,
6/5/2024 Cave canem Suzette Primefear,
5/31/2024 Layers of Life Enclosed Rhymelife,remember,
5/13/2024 Love Lauded in Song Free verseromance,
5/13/2024 The Truth in Time Sonnethorse,mythology,
5/9/2024 Silence of the Sea Otherpeace,
5/6/2024 Love Sonnetlove,pain,
4/6/2024 From Purgatory to Paradise Haibunafrica,nature,
2/23/2024 The Last Leaf Tankaautumn,feelings,friend,im
2/20/2024 To everything there is a season Otherlife,nature,seasons,
1/29/2024 On a Thesaurus Diet Suzette Primeanalogy,nature,philosophy
1/23/2024 The Wind Teased Sijoloss,
11/3/2023 Moonwake Suzette Primemetaphor,nature,philosoph
10/16/2023 The Rocking Chair of Memories Suzette Primeanalogy,memory,metaphor,p
9/10/2023 The Dilatory Thought Verseintrospection,
8/25/2023 Through the Keyhole Iambic Pentameterdream,fantasy,
8/8/2023 View From Basement Flat Dramatic Verserelationship,
7/27/2023 When Doves Cry Terzanelleeulogy,
7/26/2023 You Shall Reap What You Sow Ekphrasisart,
7/8/2023 Graceful Lily Sonnetpoetess,
6/21/2023 Thalassophile Alexandrinesea,
6/14/2023 Recombobulating Chaos Free versenature,
5/25/2023 The Seeds of Time Quatrainanalogy,introspection,met
5/24/2023 The Moon By Day Sonnetromance,
5/8/2023 Discord and Peace Ekphrasisanalogy,anger,angst,child
4/22/2023 If a Tree Should Fall Suzette Primedream,philosophy,
4/19/2023 Like Burnt-Out Logs Heroic Coupletemotions,simile,
4/18/2023 An Attenuated Tree Branch Personificationimagery,metaphor,nature,
4/12/2023 Verismo Suzette Primeanalogy,introspection,met
4/6/2023 A Tree Tankaanalogy,image,nature,
4/5/2023 The Welkin - and - the Influences Juejuanalogy,nature,
3/19/2023 Alone Suzette Primeanalogy,inspiration,metap
3/9/2023 A Waste of Space Proseculture,introspection,lit
2/15/2023 Passion - Metaphorical Realism Suzette Primeart,extended metaphor,pas
1/30/2023 Dare To Take a Stand - Zettie's Sonnet Sonnetmetaphor,
1/30/2023 I Dance With Shadows - Yclept Sonnet Sonnetanalogy,city,dream,metaph
1/29/2023 An Evanescent Life - Xaxa Sonnet Sonnetdeath,extended metaphor,l
1/25/2023 Dusk At the Beach Sonnetbeach,friendship,

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Fav Poems

PoemTitleFormCategories
The Usurper King Dramatic Monologueidentity,satire,
O April Free verseappreciation,april,beauty
I To Poisonous Honey Free verselife,
Summer Peak Haikusummer,
O Charming Rhymehumorous,valentines day,
Prime Crime - Bt Than-Baukdream,horror,
Unsure the Shore Sonnet8th grade,beach,bereaveme
The Grey Suzette Primeintrospection,
Hall Pass Sonnetlove,
Earth Prayer Verseprayer,
Fiery Events Haikufire,love,
Best In Show Dodoitsuwinter,
The Wait Rhymebody,devotion,truth,
When the Chemistry Is Gone the History Does Not Matter Free verselove,
Love In Love With Love Sonnetlove,spiritual,
Telegraph Pole Potd Imagismimagery,
Lit By Love Quatrainloss,love,strength,
Courtney Mae Or Courting May Sonnetmay,
Floating Shards of Dream Free verseanalogy,lost love,pain,
Blemished - a Coin Poem Otherpain,
Poet's Honeymoon Collaboration With Joanna Daniels Rhymefantasy,imagination,
Rebirth Me Prose Poetryhope,mental illness,
Bantu Free versepoetry,
Pulchritudinous Rhymeart,
Ashes - Edvard Munch Ekphrasisart,inspiration,
I Died Sonnetallusion,anger,angst,
The Forming of Thoughts Rhymeangst,
A woman called house Free versehome,
The Cold Embrace of Death Ekphrasisart,
Salvations Rests Behind True Faith's Gold Door Sonnetappreciation,art,bible,ch
Debacle Rhymeconfusion,evil,history,
Pearl-Prayer Sijoemotions,heaven,life,long
Stolen Nights Coupletangst,dark,light,morning,
apologies for the truth Suzette Primephilosophy,senses,
Vanishing Point Free verseangst,anxiety,heartbreak,
Love Hurts - Bound by Love, Broken by Fate - POTD Balladfate,lost love,rainbow,ro
The Narcissist Who Saved Himself - Cynthia Howard - collaboration with Ink Empress Ekphrasisart,
Amberina Ballerina, Whatever Verseintrospection,
thoughts drift to sirens Free verseart,
To Whom Does This Come Haibunanalogy,deep,i am,
Les peupliers bleus - Andre Brasilier Ekphrasisart,
No Longer Quatrainbetrayal,recovery from,
Clover's In the Bottom Right-Hand Corner Doing the Best with What Circumstance Brought Her Ekphrasisart,extended metaphor,
Roots and Dandelion Dreams: A Mother's Heart Ekphrasisheart,love,mothers day,na
Misty Blues Quatrainlost love,solitude,
Sea Shore Night Sijonature,sea,
Domenico Gatti - Purita Ekphrasisart,
Reason I Believe Free versehow i feel,
Not for Contest - Impact of AI on poets Rhymeart,
Humanity Rhymehumanity,perspective,scie
Undergrowth with Two Figures Ekphrasisart,love,nature,paradise,
Yesterday's Wishes Free verseanxiety,

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Andrea Dietrich United States Flag United States Read
Eileen Manassian _Not Listed Flag _Not Listed Read
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Quoth Theraven United States Flag United States Read
Runa Pradhan India Flag India Read
Christopher Flaherty United Kingdom Flag United Kingdom Read
Sara Kendrick United States Flag United States Read
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Judy Reeves United Kingdom Flag United Kingdom Read
Mark Frank South Africa Flag South Africa Read
Gordon Mcconnell United Kingdom Flag United Kingdom Read
Joanna Daniel India Flag India Read
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Frederic Parker United States Flag United States Read
Mark Massey United States Flag United States Read
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Arlo Parker United States Flag United States Read
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Paige Hind United States Flag United States Read
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Book: Reflection on the Important Things