I Died

As blood was drawn, the rills of scarlet dripped
to fill the calamus with crimson brine,
and from the wound, I penned each fated line
in livid verse that bled to tortured script.
The blood turned black as letters spilled in rage
and with each word I begged this ire to still,
but anguished tears imbued the feathered quill
as bitter prose congealed upon the page.

Though memories indulged with sweet delight,
your indiscretions tempered not with time.
When selfish want consents to carnal sin,
the heart that breaks will fester in despite. 
And as my blood ran dry in sanguine rhyme, 
the passion ceased and thus, I died within. 


Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 8/28/2025 7:02:00 AM
Dear Mark, it’s such a pleasure to return and re-read this exquisite sonnet once again and offer my heartfelt congratulations for your passion poem’s high placement in Mark’s esteemed contest. This purgatory poem, like all your fantastic poetry, ages like fine wine, more delectable today than yesterday. Congratulations for your success in Mark’s contest. Warmest wishes, my dear poet friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/27/2025 8:15:00 PM
Wow, Mark, this is powerful and hauntingly beautiful. The imagery of ink and blood merging with heartbreak is so vivid and unforgettable. Truly moving!
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Date: 8/27/2025 2:06:00 PM
Hey nice sonnet (your specialty) and placement Mark
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Mark Massey
Date: 8/27/2025 3:05:00 PM
Thanks Tom
Date: 8/27/2025 1:29:00 PM
Such depth to your well-written poem! Congratulations on your placement in Mile 10. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Mark Massey
Date: 8/27/2025 2:42:00 PM
Thanks CayCay
Date: 8/27/2025 10:46:00 AM
Mark, you are a master sonneteer. This poem is chock-full of anguish, which I experience each time I read each line. And I get more out of it each time I read it. A Fav poem for me. Congratulations on your second place win on Mile 10 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 11 has already started. You can find your overall standing in my Mile 10 blog post.
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Date: 8/27/2025 2:42:00 PM
Thanks for the placement, Mark, and all the work you put into this contest.
Date: 8/8/2023 1:52:00 PM
Whoa! The sonnet master strikes again. This is somewhat reminiscent of my sonnet - Abyss. I may have to repost one day. Awesome Mark
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Date: 8/1/2023 11:47:00 PM
A perfect sonnet from the pen of a poet of note. I can but look on and envy your dexterity in wielding the pen like the sword of a latter-day Sir Lancelot.
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Mark Massey
Date: 8/2/2023 12:40:00 PM
Such a wonderful comment Suzette, thank you.
Date: 7/30/2023 3:16:00 PM
Such dramatic and passionate imagery that more than aptly expresses the subject of death. You are a master of the sonnet form, Mark..so excellent and a fave! :)
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Date: 6/20/2023 12:52:00 PM
wow, this is fantastic metaphor and imagery. You are quite the poet!
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Date: 5/17/2023 8:08:00 PM
The depths of your soul and heart are exposed here in this lustrous deep write . Congratulations on your first place win Mark ! So happy to have found you here on Soup . Susan :)
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Date: 5/4/2023 1:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your podium win, Mark! Wonderful and dark imagery!
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Mark Massey
Date: 5/13/2023 7:11:00 PM
Thank you Kim
Date: 5/4/2023 10:05:00 AM
Mark, your poem bleeds with the loss of love. Wonderful metaphoric write with images leave their mark on the spirit and soul. Congratulations on your win. Blessings.
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Mark Massey
Date: 5/15/2023 5:20:00 PM
Thank you Sam
Date: 5/3/2023 4:38:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Mark, of anguish. Congratulations on First Place!
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Mark Massey
Date: 5/3/2023 7:42:00 PM
Thanks Ann
Date: 5/3/2023 6:42:00 AM
A forceful and passionate write Mark. I felt each word. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Mark Massey
Date: 5/3/2023 7:42:00 PM
Thanks Linda
Date: 5/3/2023 3:08:00 AM
Congratulations Mark on your podium win and mastery of the sonnet.
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Mark Massey
Date: 5/3/2023 7:42:00 PM
Thank you WJ
Date: 5/2/2023 7:33:00 PM
Very few have mastered meter the way you have and even fewer can bring it together will a powerful message--great penning Mark!
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Mark Massey
Date: 5/3/2023 7:41:00 PM
Thanks Craig
Date: 5/2/2023 7:05:00 PM
The death of your muse can be painful, this is wonderfully written, congratulations on your first place win~
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Mark Massey
Date: 5/3/2023 7:43:00 PM
Thanks Michelle
Date: 5/2/2023 6:40:00 PM
Brilliant sonnet, Mark, congratulations:)
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Mark Massey
Date: 5/3/2023 7:43:00 PM
Thank you Joanna
Date: 5/2/2023 2:23:00 PM
many congrats on your win, i struggle with sonnet writing i find the meter so tricky, you nailed it well done mark xx
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Mark Massey
Date: 5/3/2023 7:44:00 PM
Thanks Jan
Date: 5/2/2023 2:08:00 PM
An outstanding poem, Mark ~ fav. Warmest congratulations on the top win in craig’s contest.
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Mark Massey
Date: 5/3/2023 7:44:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 5/2/2023 11:45:00 AM
Congratulations Mark on your podium write:)
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Mark Massey
Date: 5/3/2023 7:44:00 PM
Thanks Daniel
Date: 5/2/2023 10:26:00 AM
Dear Mark, back with my heartiest congrats for your fantastic first place win in Craig's contest. I knew this passionate piece was worthy of the top spot! Indeed, a well deserved honor! It's wonderful to share the podium with you, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Mark Massey
Date: 5/3/2023 7:44:00 PM
Thanks Susan
Date: 5/2/2023 10:17:00 AM
Congratulations of your win! Very passionate.
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Mark Massey
Date: 5/3/2023 7:45:00 PM
Thank you David
Date: 4/30/2023 5:59:00 PM
Dear Mark, your sonnet is magnificent! Dynamic and dramatic.. a masterwork of artistry and intensity, my friend. I can see this easily taking first place in Craig’s sonnet contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 4/8/2023 11:16:00 AM
I like this one alot, Mark. Great sonnet!
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