William Kelii Kekaula Poet Haiku

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Fiery Events

*Image of Candlelight by Pixabay.
fiery events

a candle flickers
     ever waning as it melts
          may love spark again? of course

          breath pleased a candle
     flames tuckered time for amour?
nicely kindled set to spark

2021 July 10
e.g., Ni Katuata
HMS & PS; 577, 577

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Richard Lamoureux July 19, 2021 at 6:00 AM My kind of flames. William Kelii Kekaula July 19, 2021 at 11:59 AM Mood setting ...

Andrea Dietrich July 14, 2021 at 1:33 PM thanks for your example here. Lovely one, William. William Kelii Kekaula July 14, 2021 at 9:37 PM Truly grateful, Andrea, and most inspiring

Anisha Dutta July 14, 2021 at 7:27 AM WOW! Flame of Romance flickers. Love to spark. William Kelii Kekaula July 14, 2021 at 9:31 AM Thanks for sharing, Anisha, blessings my friend, Aloha!

Lycia Harding July 13, 2021 at 2:30 PM This is loveley. Romantic and inspirational. William Kelii Kekaula July 13, 2021 at 5:46 PM Three admirable points perceived, Lycia, much to my delight my friend, Aloha!

Beata Agustin July 12, 2021 at 2:38 AM Thanks for introducing to me this form... thanks likewise for the message, and the photo. I hope to write one that meets your contest requirement. God bless you. William Kelii Kekaula July 12, 2021 at 3:38 AM Hope you will be inspired, Beata, and Grace be with you my friend, blessings always, Aloha!

CayCay Godwin July 11, 2021 at 4:11 PM A lovely read. Thank you for hosting a contest, but who could top your emotional feel? I enjoyed. CayCay William Kelii Kekaula July 11, 2021 at 4:49 PM Thanks, CayCay, I appreciate your rosy-colored glasses, albeit, methinks that the contest ending list will be most revealing my friend, Aloha!

Joanna Daniel July 11, 2021 at 3:58 AM Great comparison of love and flames burning in the candlelight, William:) William Kelii Kekaula July 11, 2021 at 10:35 AM Agree, picture-perfect for romance, much thanks, Jo, Aloha!

Suzette Richards July 10, 2021 at 1:33 PM Ah, the cycles of armour. There is nothing like the flame of a new love. I do like this example of a form that I'm unfamiliar with. But even without analysing the structure of it, I find it charming. Your poem is a delight to read - FAVing it. William Kelii Kekaula July 10, 2021 at 2:47 PM I share in the glow of your delight, Suzette, as the unexplained occasioned my keyboard, and as always, I am left dumbfounded ... I am honored my friend, whereto, I am forever indebted, Aloha!

Constance La France July 10, 2021 at 6:13 AM William, lovely and a great example for your contest, I will attempt writing you a Ni Katuata ~ peace and tranquility _Constance William Kelii Kekaula July 10, 2021 at 6:23 AM I appreciate your attempt, Constance, and your comments my friend, Aloha!