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fiery events

a candle flickers
     ever waning as it melts
          may love spark again? of course

          breath pleased a candle
     flames tuckered time for amour?
nicely kindled set to spark

2021 July 10
e.g., Ni Katuata
HMS & PS; 577, 577

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/19/2021 6:00:00 AM

My kind of flames.

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/19/2021 11:59:00 AM

Mood setting ...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2021 1:33:00 PM

thanks for your example here. Lovely one, William.

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/14/2021 9:37:00 PM

Truly grateful, Andrea, and most inspiring

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/14/2021 7:27:00 AM

WOW! Flame of Romance flickers. Love to spark.

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/14/2021 9:31:00 AM

Thanks for sharing, Anisha, blessings my friend, Aloha!

Lycia Harding

Date: 7/13/2021 2:30:00 PM

This is loveley. Romantic and inspirational.

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/13/2021 5:46:00 PM

Three admirable points perceived, Lycia, much to my delight my friend, Aloha!

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/12/2021 2:38:00 AM

Thanks for introducing to me this form... thanks likewise for the message, and the photo. I hope to write one that meets your contest requirement. God bless you.

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/12/2021 3:38:00 AM

Hope you will be inspired, Beata, and Grace be with you my friend, blessings always, Aloha!

CayCay Jennings

Date: 7/11/2021 4:11:00 PM

A lovely read. Thank you for hosting a contest, but who could top your emotional feel? I enjoyed. CayCay

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/11/2021 4:49:00 PM

Thanks, CayCay, I appreciate your rosy-colored glasses, albeit, methinks that the contest ending list will be most revealing my friend, Aloha!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/11/2021 3:58:00 AM

Great comparison of love and flames burning in the candlelight, William:)

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/11/2021 10:35:00 AM

Agree, picture-perfect for romance, much thanks, Jo, Aloha!

Suzette Richards

Date: 7/10/2021 1:33:00 PM

Ah, the cycles of armour. There is nothing like the flame of a new love. I do like this example of a form that I'm unfamiliar with. But even without analysing the structure of it, I find it charming. Your poem is a delight to read - FAVing it.

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/10/2021 2:47:00 PM

I share in the glow of your delight, Suzette, as the unexplained occasioned my keyboard, and as always, I am left dumbfounded ... I am honored my friend, whereto, I am forever indebted, Aloha!