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through the key-hole surgery of my delicate heart you have reached into the inner sanctum of my soul in Plato’s cave where I have locked away my demons betrayed by worm casts of secretive earthworms cold and unyielding queen conch shell lips suited for bathroom decoration relentlessly searching out my responses fevered brow only registers your fragrance reminiscent of a gallery of stalactites and stalagmites which alternately drip and collect in a sterile environment deep in the bowls of the earth striving to rival the statue of Shapur I where enlightenment and conscience never reach you’re only to be admired by a mere lucky few it is just a happenstance that I was not the first to succumb to wiles my heart now keeps pace with a deceit of lapwings slowly stirring the air around their ground roost— drawing fire away from it I willingly prostrate myself on rocks you command resigned to my fate to be used in lapidary and turned into an objectified status symbol surrender is ultimately more satisfying and infinitely sweeter INSPIRED BY THE METAPHORICAL REALISM ART OF VLADIMIR KUSH ________________________________________________ POET'S NOTES A group of lapwings is called a "deceit". ~Wikipedia As with other artistic movements that shaped poetry throughout the ages, METAPHORICAL REALISM will influence poetry. My Suzette Prime, which requires a philosophical statement, might be the ideal vehicle to address this genre, ie the argument as to what constitutes reality? The term ‘metaphorical realism’ appropriately suggests both the undermining of literal realism and the elevation of metaphor.

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Date: 8/1/2023 9:41:00 AM
Ahh I see your inspo for your AI generated images is very Kush! Not sure metaphorical realism is for me but enjoyed the ride :)
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Date: 8/2/2023 12:15:00 AM
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Date: 2/28/2023 11:28:00 AM
Suzette, you have painted surrealism, rich in prose as an observation of abstract imagination. Literal realism is amazing, I learned so much, appreciate your notes as well as your Suzette! I Am Anaya
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Date: 2/28/2023 1:24:00 PM
Thanks for reading and your kind consideration, Anaya. I would love to take my poetry in a new direction and encouragement such as yours, strengthens my resolve. Unlike Literal Realism (a genre in its own right), the above poem is an extension of Surrealistic Literature, namely Metaphorical Realism :))

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