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* Homographs/heteronyms: 1. In rhyme: are words that have the same spelling, but have different meanings and different pronunciations. For example: tear [tir] (n) – a drop from a person’s eye; tear [ter] (v) – to rip something.


Suzette Swan Arc poem on the theme of Elements of Nature (earth), highlighting Mount Roraima, Venezuela.

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as waterfalls tear* down my sheer cliffs – sculpted by time’s relentless tide defying the laws of nature my age undefined; hidden towering over my world – a beacon for lost souls enduring … an impressive beauty unapologetic every angle precise the lack of erosion an enigma as defiant as youth the island suspended above the clouds where rare species flourish unattended by the hand of mankind ageless banquettes of emotions served on the tabletop while impertinent shadows are teased out by soft slanting sunlight waterfalls of tears wouldn’t erode my façade the command for respect reticent— an enduring beauty in suspension …

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Date: 5/17/2025 5:30:00 PM
This is beautiful. Much emotion-
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Suzette Richards
Date: 5/18/2025 1:23:00 AM
:)
Date: 5/15/2025 11:32:00 AM
WOW!!! What a creative write you have here. Love It... Great Pictures... Have a lovely/fun day writing away...............
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