Excire

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An Excire (prose melding with I’M poetry)

The invented word excire captures the interplay of exhilaration and desire while nodding to the fluid ambiguity of Suzette Swan Arc.*

*Klein's Vase Verse - A New Poetic Form | PoetrySoup.com

Words captured in amber for all eternity—valued for their unique resilience as the tides of time cannot erode them. Our deeds like skipping stones on water sink in although they go unrecorded; the ripples soon fading from memory, becoming a distorted reflection in a cracked mirror. Tides gather the echoes to be expelled in a sigh. a melancholy taint the turbulent waters washing up on the shores of life the waves reaching the sandcastles of desire an undercurrent dragging the dreams out to sea an occasional regret never on display fading with time rippled dreams like rills on the breach … extending a hand in friendship being the rock in someone’s life leaves one with a sense of purpose as tidal excire exhales …

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Paige Hind

Date: 5/27/2025 5:06:00 PM

Simply beautiful, Suzette. I am glad to have found your poetry.

Suzette Richards
Date: 5/27/2025 10:30:00 PM

Thank you, Paige. You make me blush - I am so glad that I can bring pleasure to a fellow poet, especially one as accomplished as you are.