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Stranded in Peace, by Suzette Richards – image generated 29 September 2024

 

*bitter: English colloquialism meaning very cold.


 

spring blooms lost in deep snowdrifts
black ice roads mark highest peaks
shared coats and tea in old flasks
child builds snowman in a lee

night closing in on mountain
cold is seeping into bones
spare layers of clothes shared out
prejudices not valid

morning broken by weak sun
its beauty lost on the group
stranded in bitter landscape
amongst friends of all races

in shorts and sturdy jacket
farmhand comes to the rescue
trek through green valley and dale
assist weekend bushwhackers 

to some it was a photo
in local rag or on phone
the essence was lost on most
of people stranded in peace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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