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Inframetron (I’M poetry) on the theme of Elements of Nature (fire). See my article:

Klein's Vase Verse - A New Poetic Form | PoetrySoup.com


 

watching a naked flame with its flickering orange hues warms the cockles of the heart reminiscing of scenarios that were never realised— . crickets rub their legs together in a serenade the friction required - relentless like firesticks necessary for survival in the bush a crackling fire within me an unquenchable longing … . a once in a blue moon occurrence my recall of events drifts into the stratosphere— . the blue flame of the candle I once held for you still burns steadily in the zero gravity of reality …

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Date: 5/17/2025 5:35:00 PM
I can see what you're not saying as well, in your pieces. This touches and resonates with me. A beautiful write, Suzette-
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Suzette Richards
Date: 5/18/2025 1:21:00 AM
Thanks, Paige :)

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