raven

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raven-smudged sky a lone cricket chirp in overgrown garden

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2025 8:34:00 PM

That first line is superb, Suzette. Congrats in my contest

Suzette Richards
Date: 5/26/2025 8:57:00 PM

Thank you for my placement, Andrea.:)

Paige Hind

Date: 5/7/2025 2:37:00 PM

Deep, has an internal meaning- feeling

Suzette Richards
Date: 5/8/2025 6:11:00 AM

Thank you, Paige :)

thriveni c mysore

Date: 3/8/2025 5:43:00 AM

'raven-smudge' amazing thought dear poet. Whenever I see a raven now, I shall think of this lovely haiku. classic write, happy writing dear poet. Cheers.+FAV

Suzette Richards
Date: 3/8/2025 5:58:00 AM

Thank you, Thriveni :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/6/2025 9:40:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your creative write. Great Picture... Have a fun day writing away..........

Suzette Richards
Date: 3/6/2025 12:24:00 PM

Thank you, Paula :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/6/2025 6:12:00 AM

Interesting ku! Love the first line, and the overall imagery. Nicely done!

Suzette Richards
Date: 3/6/2025 6:17:00 AM

Thanks, Kim, for your kind feedback. I often spend days on a haiku (it does not come naturally to me). In this case, it is a haiku I wrote in March 2021 !!! I took my sweet time with this one, lol.