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raven

raven-smudged sky
a lone cricket chirp in
overgrown garden

naturesymbolismhaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

May 26, 2025 at 8:34 PM

That first line is superb, Suzette. Congrats in my contest

Suzette Richards

May 26, 2025 at 8:57 PM

Thank you for my placement, Andrea.:)

Paige Hind

May 7, 2025 at 2:37 PM

Deep, has an internal meaning- feeling

Suzette Richards

May 8, 2025 at 6:11 AM

Thank you, Paige :)

thriveni c mysore

March 8, 2025 at 5:43 AM

'raven-smudge' amazing thought dear poet. Whenever I see a raven now, I shall think of this lovely haiku. classic write, happy writing dear poet. Cheers.+FAV

Suzette Richards

March 8, 2025 at 5:58 AM

Thank you, Thriveni :)

Paula Goldsmith

March 6, 2025 at 9:40 AM

I enjoyed reading your creative write. Great Picture... Have a fun day writing away..........

Suzette Richards

March 6, 2025 at 12:24 PM

Thank you, Paula :)

Kim Rodrigues

March 6, 2025 at 6:12 AM

Interesting ku! Love the first line, and the overall imagery. Nicely done!

Suzette Richards

March 6, 2025 at 6:17 AM

Thanks, Kim, for your kind feedback. I often spend days on a haiku (it does not come naturally to me). In this case, it is a haiku I wrote in March 2021 !!! I took my sweet time with this one, lol.

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