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Sanford-style tanka, which is a much truncated format.

Capturing the stillness of twilight in such a succinct way is truly evocative.

There's a beauty in how silence can amplify our inner world.

You’ve distilled the essence of that moment perfectly.

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twilight silence

twilight
descends through fog
enhancing
silence
of my thoughts

naturetanka

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Kim Rodrigues

October 26, 2024 at 10:32 AM

Love it! We are always in thought, never much silent in our own heads.

Suzette Richards

October 26, 2024 at 11:58 AM

True, Kim :)

Paula Goldsmith

October 21, 2024 at 9:10 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. What a pretty picture. Early morning is a great time of the day. Have a wonderful Autumn day...................

Suzette Richards

October 22, 2024 at 6:45 AM

Thank you, Paula. I, on the other hand, prefer twilight, especially after a long, busy day :)