twilight silence

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Sanford-style tanka, which is a much truncated format.

Capturing the stillness of twilight in such a succinct way is truly evocative.

There's a beauty in how silence can amplify our inner world.

You’ve distilled the essence of that moment perfectly.

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twilight descends through fog enhancing silence of my thoughts

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/26/2024 10:32:00 AM

Love it! We are always in thought, never much silent in our own heads.

Suzette Richards
Date: 10/26/2024 11:58:00 AM

True, Kim :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/21/2024 9:10:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. What a pretty picture. Early morning is a great time of the day. Have a wonderful Autumn day...................

Suzette Richards
Date: 10/22/2024 6:45:00 AM

Thank you, Paula. I, on the other hand, prefer twilight, especially after a long, busy day :)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/21/2024 1:35:00 AM

Beautiful words and an enchanting picture… Beryl

Suzette Richards
Date: 10/21/2024 6:38:00 AM

Thanks, Bellie :)