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Pulchritudinous

"Spellbinding beauty holds you, neither you nor I can tell if it is willingly." Quote by poet. Pulchritudinousness, the beauty beheld Uncaptured with looks unparalleled Likened to mythical being, nymph perhaps Can this beauty lure the naive like me into traps Rapture comes over me, takes over my will Into the fray despite standing still Taken over by need to know and be known Inspired by feelings I'm not sure are my own Desiring to be desired, held in their gaze Incandescence and melancholic haze Nymph I will follow where'er you go Oh see me! Let me know what you know Undeniable grasp you have on my heart Say this isn't the end, take me back to the start

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Suzette Richards

Date: 7/31/2023 8:55:00 PM

This to me should have placed higher seeing as contests are supposed to be about learning (new words and skills?). AND having fun. - according to some ... I love this well thought out and crafted acrostic, DD.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/1/2023 12:59:00 AM

You probably already know my Q word but had fun with that one too!

Suzette Richards
Date: 7/31/2023 10:51:00 PM

I am not knocking the sponsor, but this really made me sit up and take note. I have now FAVed it. You taught me a new word :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/31/2023 10:37:00 PM

Thank you Suzette - I respect your view x

Hat Bueckert

Date: 7/31/2023 7:48:00 PM

Love the word choice, very creative, congrats!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/31/2023 10:35:00 PM

Thanks Hat x

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/31/2023 10:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! A creative write/quote. I enjoyed it. Have a great day.............

Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/31/2023 11:16:00 AM

Glad you liked it Paula - thank you for your kind words x

Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/29/2023 6:36:00 AM

Wow great word DD simply love it ! BOL in the contest.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/29/2023 9:40:00 AM

I think you telling me about a fairy poem got in my head - not quite fairyland though - I'll keep trying! Thanks for the praise :)

David Kavanagh

Date: 7/29/2023 3:52:00 AM

Excellent acrostic Dilly, pulchritudinousness what a great word, yes it certainly has an hypnotic like draw to the observer, one we’re very reluctant to let go of, captured beautifully in your final line, say this isn’t the end, take me back to the start, so I read it over and over again, cheers David

Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/29/2023 4:05:00 AM

Ahh you're too kind! I wrote this early this morning and almost forgot all about it :D