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© Maple-leaved viburnum, photograph by Suzette Richards (21/4/2020)


Poetry is not only for the hearing, but also for the hearing-impaired, eg ASL poetry. The auditory imagery, eg the sensation of hearing the rustling of autumn leaves, was purposely left out in the development of this poem—included is the balance of imagery: gustatory, kinetic, olfactory, tactile & visual.

An IfraMetron (I’M poem): See my article:

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. the wind has died down— the ground s t r e w n with nature’s debris— autumn’s palette a feast for the eye … a shelved chore before the inevitable miasma of dusty decay teased by wind’s chilling fingers that’s tasted in the back the throat – green and red leaves scattered side by side— a conspiritual cosying up a compelling contrast: youthful green, aged red— although red leads the rainbow, it follows in nature … the beauty of old age unfolds in the display of fallen leaves— s c a t t e r e d to the wind infinitely wiser …

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Date: 5/24/2025 10:47:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "In the Autumn of Life" write. Great Ending.... "The beauty of old age unfolds in the display of fallen leaves," this is a great line. Have a great weekend..............
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Date: 5/24/2025 10:54:00 AM
Thank you for the visit, Paula, and kind comment:)

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