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In the Autumn of Life

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Poetry is not only for the hearing, but also for the hearing-impaired, eg ASL poetry. The auditory imagery, eg the sensation of hearing the rustling of autumn leaves, was purposely left out in the development of this poem—included is the balance of imagery: gustatory, kinetic, olfactory, tactile & visual.

A Suzette Swan Arc poem. See my article:

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. the wind has died down— the ground s t r e w n with nature’s debris— autumn’s palette a feast for the eye … a shelved chore before the inevitable miasma of dusty decay teased by wind’s chilling fingers that’s tasted in the back of the throat – green and red leaves scattered side by side— a conspiritual cosying up a compelling contrast: youthful green, aged red— although red leads the rainbow, it follows in nature … the beauty of old age unfolds in the display of fallen leaves— s c a t t e r e d to the wind infinitely wiser …

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Paige Hind

Date: 5/27/2025 5:09:00 PM

I am so glad you won with this. "a compelling contrast: youthful green, aged red— although red leads the rainbow, it follows in nature …" what introspective beauty, dear Suzette

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/26/2025 12:38:00 PM

Very nice, how you did this! Congrats, Suzette!

Suzette Richards
Date: 5/26/2025 5:42:00 PM

Thanks, Kim :)

Ink Empress

Date: 5/25/2025 10:07:00 PM

I love this dear suzette how youv personified too or given human-like features to nature and used words like throat fingers, thats always something i love, this is one of the most beautiful poems iv read in a while! For the arrangement of words; the way youv painted imagery especially in the opening lines, and the last line, which made me pause and think from so many angles! I think the more i read theres so much to learn, from your use of this form: pleasure visiting your winning poem. Congratulations. Sending you light always

Suzette Richards
Date: 5/25/2025 10:30:00 PM

Oops! I made a mistake (just shows you that us humans are fallible): 'that’s tasted in the back the throat –' should read: 'that’s tasted in the back of the throat –' As personification is a type of metaphor, it was my ultimate aim. Thanks for your kind comment, Ink. I'M poetry is now my default form; even supplanting Suzette Prime. :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/24/2025 10:47:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "In the Autumn of Life" write. Great Ending.... "The beauty of old age unfolds in the display of fallen leaves," this is a great line. Have a great weekend..............

Suzette Richards
Date: 5/24/2025 10:54:00 AM

Thank you for the visit, Paula, and kind comment:)