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The Last Leaf

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The title of the poem was inspired by: 'The Last Leaf ', by O. Henry

Imagery: kinetic 

The pivot: the last

  1. As part of the first phrase:  a noun phrase composed of a determiner and an adjective (meaning the last thing or person …).
  2. As part of the second phrase:  the determiner (the) and the adverb last (meaning previously).

 

dry tree branch sways autumn leaf clings the last leaf through photo album memories of friend persist

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 3/5/2024 11:22:00 AM
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Dear Suzzette, Your poem wonderfully encapsulates the bittersweet essence of memories and loss. The image of the autumn leaf clinging to the last branch evokes a poignant reflection on friendship and the enduring presence of those we hold dear. This heartfelt piece. - Blessings, Daniel
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Suzette Richards
Date: 3/5/2024 9:58:00 PM
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Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts here, Daniel. Yes. I did use the analogy of nature to reflect the loss of a friend.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/25/2024 5:43:00 PM
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Wow. I love how you did this, Suzette. What a tanka. You rock.
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Suzette Richards
Date: 2/25/2024 8:48:00 PM
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Thank you, Andrea. :)
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Constance La France
Date: 2/23/2024 1:33:00 PM
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Suzette, lovely poem, like it a lot, hugs, Constance
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Suzette Richards
Date: 2/23/2024 1:37:00 PM
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Many thanks, Constance:)
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 2/23/2024 12:25:00 PM
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Amazing writing. Just love this so. God bless you always, love, Gina
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Suzette Richards
Date: 2/23/2024 12:35:00 PM
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Thank you, Gina :)

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