Notes About The Poem

23 Syllables: The prime-syllable discipline forces the poet to distil thought into a single, resonant gesture, and here the imagery of branch, shadow, and millpond becomes a meditation on mortality, identity, and the futility of grasping permanence.

Poetic device: Personification

Attenuated Tree Branch, by Suzette Richards - image generated.


 

an attenuated tree branch


an attenuated tree branch reaches out to its drowning shadow in the inert millpond
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Roper Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 8:31 AM
Love the imagery on this one . Excellent!
Dietrich Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 6:14 PM
Ohhh I sure like this, Suzette. I enjoyed you blog and have seen some of your tanka winners. Nice judging.
Richards Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 9:53 PM
Thanks, Andrea. The tanka, featured in the previous contest, had an influence on the design of Suzette Prime. The tanka contest was a pleasure to judge and I was pleasantly surprised by the list - I judged blind, like in the good old days, save for a couple where I had some queries.
Cornish Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 10:45 AM
I love powerful brevity
Lawless Avatar
April 19, 2023 at 6:12 AM
WOW!!!! AND A DOUBLE WOW!!! I shall see this poem in every corner of the ponds in which I kayak. Just flat out poetically beautiful Suzette. A FAVE, a double FAVE if they'll let me
Richards Avatar
April 19, 2023 at 10:30 AM
Thank you, John, for this high praise:)
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