Aging rocks

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Aging rocks fall into the sea; the tides erode all norms over time.

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Paige Hind

Date: 5/18/2025 8:42:00 AM

Makes me think a lot- I wonder, is the sea as old as those rocks? Just an abstract thought, everything normal, becomes sea ...interesting

Di11y Da11y

Date: 12/2/2024 1:49:00 AM

Great thought provoker Su. It could be read as nothing can be relied upon, not even that rocks will always stand or more hopefully - even entrenched negative beliefs can be challenged and overcome - I'm sure a whole book of ideas could generate from these few words x

Suzette Richards
Date: 12/2/2024 2:38:00 AM

Yip! Also, nothing is written in stone. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, DD

Maria Williams

Date: 12/2/2024 1:15:00 AM

Short, sweet and simple Dear Su, but full of meaning - Loved the image too. Hugs Maria

Suzette Richards
Date: 12/2/2024 2:39:00 AM

Thank you, Maria :)