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* Bringing this gem back in the hope Becca Teagan sees it and returns. We wrote this together, a labor of love. The poem ends with a moral lesson that humanity still hasn't learned, sadly. In Salem town a crime occurred that rendered justice obsolete. 'Twas Mather's hail that rang God’s bell and gathered priests with sins deferred- for some it tolled a grim death knell. Those holy men with garb so neat, who placed themselves on judgment’s seat and prayed for wisdom from above held in their hearts no brother-love. "What strange and eerie things, do tell- hast Satan left the realms of hell to visit evil on this place, to cast his spell on each lamb's face, to haunt and spit on God's good grace?" The battle thus became engaged for pious hearts were filled with rage as weary souls who feared their wrath now prayed that God would help them through- yea, had they left the holy path was now the issue on review. ‘Twas sixteen hundred ninety-two when fear and trepidation poured throughout this small community and seized the hearts of all who knew no earthly cause could this thing be. Each child afflicted to her core, first two, then spreading on to more- their bodies writhing, uncontrolled, convulsive seizures taking hold and screaming out such blasphemy- a most abnormal malady. Hysteria would thus ensue as horrid accusations flew- “Were demons dwelling in these few? Is witchcraft here to take control, to seize and torment children's souls, to cast a shadow 'pon our town?" And thus accused of things so vile these pilgrim's lives flipped upside down- arrests were made and brought to trial. And so began the brouhaha as necks were placed in twists of rope. Familiars hid in corner nooks inspiring servant Tituba who spun dark tales from hoodoo books. Thus chaos reigned in place of hope- bereaved men tried their best to cope as mothers who had birthed their young were now condemned by twisted tongues. Unanswered prayers sent through the sky left average townsfolk asking - Why? Yea, one by one those witches fell, the ones who’d cast their evil spell, presumably sent straight to hell as farmers plowed upon their fields and harvested their bounty yields. The holy men who’d gorged on blood thus satisfied would end the fight- corruption swept away by good, they’d conquered evil in His might. Or had the evil conquered them? Manipulated, some gave in to Satan’s underhanded ploy to use the mayhem to condemn with accusations to destroy. Was vengeance perpetrated then by holy or immoral men? For in the aftermath some felt remorse as guilt was surely dealt to those who’d caused their brethren pain- each vowed they’d never fail again. And so the question left for thee is who was snared and who was free from Satan’s sly conspiracy? Yea, as we peer deep in our hearts can we not see each played a part? The moral’s here for all to see- ‘twas not about mere happenstance but in the mob's mentality... misguided zeal breeds ignorance

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Date: 3/8/2024 1:17:00 PM
So many talented poets are currently MIA from this site. Sadly, some are gone for good, You'd need a seance to coax Becca back if this brilliant collaboration doesn't do the trick, Tom:-) This is so seamless is impossible to tell where your part ends and hers begins!
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/8/2024 1:21:00 PM
I'm proud of her for this bc it's not at all her style but she did it for me and rocked it. Sadly, there is still a dark underbelly here that manifests itself from time to time. For that reason I doubt she'll come back but I'm always hopeful. Thx for stopping by
Date: 2/27/2024 11:12:00 AM
A postscript to my comment below: Mark Twain's, A Mysterious Stranger (1916) ties in well with the theme of this excellent poem.
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/27/2024 3:03:00 PM
Google time! Thx Suze
Date: 2/4/2024 8:08:00 PM
Mob behavior is so unpredictable ! Many have fallen victims and are martyred because of mob atrocities.... ! Satan, when he leaves hell comes down to destroy men's hearts and minds. Then fairness and goodness disappear and the result will be mayhem ! You have told this horror story in all its fierceness.A wonderful collaboration !
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/6/2024 5:17:00 AM
Much thx for spot on comment Valsa
Date: 2/2/2024 4:26:00 PM
Hi Tom, Wow, Your poem delves into the depths of history with haunting clarity. Through wonderful narration, you unravel the complexities of Salem's dark chapter. The portrayal of fear, injustice, and moral ambiguity is both gripping and very thought-provoking. You confront us with timeless questions about humanity's capacity for cruelty and the consequences of unchecked zealotry. What a sobering truth that transcends time, and our roles in the face of injustice. Excellent - Blessings, Daniel
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/2/2024 5:11:00 PM
Much thx Daniel. Becca is more of a free verse poet but a few times I asked her to branch out a bit and was surely not disappointed. She's got bones!
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Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 2/2/2024 4:28:00 PM
What a well done collaboration!
Date: 2/1/2024 1:32:00 PM
Fine storytelling, Tom. "Mob mentality" has brought about a whole lot of pain and suffering. Standing alone for what is right takes courage! This poem is a lesson in courage. Blessings to you!
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/1/2024 2:55:00 PM
Muchos gracias Sammi
Date: 2/1/2024 10:39:00 AM
An excellent poem from the both of you. Very eye opening... The world doesn't learn as much from our history as it should...
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/1/2024 2:55:00 PM
Hey Kelly thx for stopping by
Date: 2/1/2024 3:33:00 AM
Hey Tommy. Gosh- this is a terrific write between two very talented writers for sure. I noted what stanza’s were yours but in truth, it flows so impeccably and seamless that it could be penned from just one golden pen. Both of your immense ability and style mirror each other. Such a powerful message ran through its amazing lines. The rhyming is incredible as you both delved deeper and took the reader along too. A powerful, thought provoking piece of which to admire. Keep them coming my friend.
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/1/2024 2:55:00 PM
That's very sweet. Thx Christina
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Christina Bowring
Date: 2/1/2024 3:33:00 AM
You’re one of my inspirations:) Have a good day.
Date: 1/31/2024 12:55:00 PM
I just happened upon this poem this evening (my time) and it contains echoes of my thoughts over my morning cup of tea. A thought provoking write and the promise of "it will never happen again" so seldom kept. It is a well executed collaboration. I also miss Becca. Thank you for sharing, Tom.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/31/2024 3:21:00 PM
Yes ma'am and thx
Date: 1/31/2024 2:41:00 AM
I had relatives burned at the stake in Salem, (if I am not mistaken.) From those who cast stones from ulterior motives, moved by the devil's tongue. The accuser, seeking to devour souls and sow discord. This was well crafted, and it being a collaboration, even more impressive. (Not easy to mind meld.)
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/31/2024 5:17:00 AM
Yeah we all miss Becca. Thx
Date: 1/31/2024 1:45:00 AM
You wrote an intelligent poem. God is just and will reward those falsely accused. In the usurped name of freedom, now we permit Satanism. God will punish us.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/31/2024 5:17:00 AM
The things permitted in this world are unconscionable Victor. Thx for visit
Date: 1/30/2024 9:11:00 PM
Satan's conspiracy!... So deep. Very beautiful flow of words.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/31/2024 5:16:00 AM
Thanks doc have a nice day
Date: 1/30/2024 3:46:00 PM
A sad Chapter in our history. You both did this so well. I too miss Becca.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/30/2024 6:36:00 PM
Much thx Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/30/2024 3:47:00 PM
The rhymes are superb. You two wrote well together.
Date: 1/30/2024 3:16:00 PM
Witchhunts and mob-lynching were and still are to be condemned. Who knows how many innocent people met/meet untimely deaths! Both you Tommy and Becca did an excellent job. // paul
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/30/2024 6:36:00 PM
Appreciate your visit Paul
Date: 1/30/2024 10:45:00 AM
Woven seamlessly, I love the moral of the story and quote in the end. This is classic, well-done, dramatic! Colorful Painting of The Witch Trials~Anaya
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I Am Anaya
Date: 1/31/2024 1:11:00 PM
De nada, mi amigo!
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/30/2024 1:24:00 PM
Gracias!
Date: 1/30/2024 4:04:00 AM
I remember this Gem. You and Becca wrote it so well that I can't for the life of me figure out who wrote what. A seamless write. Edgar Allan Poe would be proud of you both. A fave. Certainly deserves a POTW. Hope you get it...Hugs
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/30/2024 1:24:00 PM
Appreciated Maria. I know you've seen this one several times
Date: 1/30/2024 1:56:00 AM
I remember you told me you might bring this one back. I'm glad you did. It has the intensity and drama of your one on Edgar Allan Poe. Like a force of nature.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/30/2024 1:25:00 PM
Yessir I'm glad you found it
Date: 1/29/2024 9:44:00 PM
It awful when evil resides in persons who are supposedly serving God. A powerful, brilliantly composed poem, Tom. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/30/2024 1:24:00 PM
Thank you for coming my way
Date: 1/29/2024 6:26:00 PM
The two of you, write well together, Tommy. As you stated, nothing good comes from mob behavior. Terrible injustices are committed on innocent people by those that have no understanding. Martyrs throughout history have been the targets of mob mentality. The love and miracles of our savior, Jesus, were ignored by the mob, as they chose to let a thief go free. Things for sharing meaningful poetry with us, Tommy. Have a blessed week. Bill
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/29/2024 7:09:00 PM
Thx much wild Bill. U2
Date: 1/29/2024 10:48:00 AM
That was one of the many tragedies in our history, so many dark deeds even today. You two did stunningly well together here
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/29/2024 3:05:00 PM
Hey thx much
Date: 1/28/2024 5:24:00 PM
' misguided zeal breeds ignorance. ' Sad, but so true. Following a mob, is never a good idea. I hope Becca returns.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/28/2024 5:41:00 PM
Thx for stopping by :)
Date: 1/28/2024 4:10:00 PM
A clever use of language not only holds one's attention but also stimulates cognitive faculties.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/28/2024 4:11:00 PM
That's the goal, Sotto. Get them thar juices a flowin'
Date: 1/28/2024 3:39:00 PM
didn't realize this was collaborative...smooth transition....the inhumanity in the incident is unfathomable to me. Thanks for sharing this compelling read...enjoy your evening, Sara
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/28/2024 3:56:00 PM
Mob mentality never produces anything good, for sure. Thx for visit
Date: 1/28/2024 1:30:00 PM
It is sad when unthinking humans get in a mob and do what is wrong. It would be wonderful if no such thing happened again. Thanks for sharing this with us. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara K
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/28/2024 2:42:00 PM
Yes and thank you Sara
Date: 1/28/2024 12:16:00 PM
I remember this one and Becca did well to write with you and about a subject close to your heart.. I hope she does come back.. but not sure she will..
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/28/2024 2:42:00 PM
Me too she's a great poet, though more inclined to write free verse
Date: 1/28/2024 10:59:00 AM
I cant really tell who wrote what in this collaboration, so well woven and delivered in the most soul hitting manner. I hear a rhythm as i read your meticulously woven lines and the flow of this is seamless. You’ve highlighted so much of todays world and truth in a way that would get readers to ponder and both of you, your use of diction is truly impeccable! Ignorance i personally feel is equivalent to the worst of all sins, I truly cant stand it. we live unfortunately in a world thats asleep
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/28/2024 2:43:00 PM
No I understood. I wrote the first and third and she wrote the second and last. I thought her description of the children in stanza two was outstanding, especially if you've seen the movie: The Crucible
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/28/2024 1:30:00 PM
You may have thought “i cant tell who wrote what” meant “ i did not understand depth of what you’ve delivered, BUT, i meant, i couldnt tell which ones were your lines in this poem as it flows very well together. And i just read on news about this, and its not shocking, sadly. Horrendous .
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/28/2024 1:07:00 PM
You can simply Google Jehovah's witnesses in Russia
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/28/2024 11:29:00 AM
Thank you for sharing this, i didnt know this, in this century, for individuals to be punished for their beliefs is just sad and truly terrifying. I should do more research on this.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/28/2024 11:03:00 AM
In Russia the neo-witch hunt is Jehovah's witnesses. Homes raided in the middle of the night, arrests made, beatings, imprisonments and more. Why? For meeting for worship. Or sharing a Bible verse. Or singing a kingdom song. And so it continues...
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